【12月-1月IBT综合备考活动】之【TWE写作】12 月12 作文

xiaojing1115UID: 2578357

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People will spend less time in cooking or preparing food in twenty years than nowadays.  
After a day of busy working, people usually spend a long time to prepare the meal with so many complex dishes. Great deals of people complain these as a result a discussion break out. Some people claim that they will spend less time in cooking in twenty years while others think on the opposite side. I prefer the latter than the former as my inclination.
Nowadays, the majority of people prepare the meal for the family with so much time, especially in china where people take more attention to food with colors, taste and olfaction. However, they maintain they are happy in doing this with love, given that looking family eating the delicious food which is made by themselves, when they smile and encourage them, are more beatific than any success can bring. Although, in some aspects, it seems time-consuming and unearth, the time that the entire family sit together to have a meal and communication is precious and beatific. If they eat outside without the preparing, only can they taste the food without the love that the cooker gives. In my mind, people will not cut down the time in cooking even after 20 years, for the reason that the time of preparing food and having them exerts an essential impact on the communication with others in the family.  
On the other hand, the food that prepared by chief in restaurant have so much additive that will lead to disease in long time, although sometimes it tastes more delicious than that made in the home. The material of food, oil, even water which prepared by family are usually fresher and cleaner than that of restaurant. Maybe eating in the restaurant sometimes have little harm influence on health, but the bacteria that accumulate in the body will lead to disease at last after a long time. As a consequence, spending time on cooking and preparing food is necessary.
In conclusion, base on the happiness and health, people will not spend less time in cooking or preparing food in twenty years than nowadays. The time of preparing food is also the time of pursuing health and harmony of family.      

james011137UID: 2280989

1.unearth没有形容词义吧 :)
2. 第二段开头的句子太长了，读起来很拗口。。。结构也有些混乱~
3. 第三段可以再展开下吧 我觉得 但是结尾段和开头段也要有个照应，（照应下第三段的观点：尽管外面吃有一些好处，但是很多疑虑不能消除，。。）
本人拙见哈~:)

nickey0809UID: 2349468

第三段论证如果更加和时间沾边或者加上句 All health food should consume time to prepared 之类的话会更强些