【12月-1月IBT综合备考活动】之【TWE写作】12月15日

xiaojing1115UID: 2578357

When people encounter the troubles, they usually seek for help from others, sometimes for a little advice sometimes for a through solution. Here comes a problem, turning for help to older friends or to friends at your age is more valuable. As there are strong arguments for either opinion, the final decision will depend on a thorough analysis of the specific situation at hand. I will talk about the problem on two sides as followings.
Nowadays，with the development of society, the young usually go against to the old given that they think the old cannot understand the modern things, which is called age gap in their maid. When they encounter troubles they only want to friends in their age. Not only do they understand the trouble environment, but also do they have some original minds sometimes. Maybe the advice cannot solve the problem thoroughly, but it is original and innovative, like something--light that can cause a serious ideas. Furthermore, Friends at the same age may have solve the same problem before, in that they can give the most appropriate advice that can rescue you from the morass at the short time.
However, the advice from the same age friends seems lacking of experience sometimes. Limited by the age, they can’t analysis the problem from all the aspect. On the opposite hand, to the older friends, the more experience they have, the more aspects they can come up with the advice in. It is true that they cannot understand the modern things well, but the problem we have is familiar, the experiences they have exerts a positive impact on getting out of the troubles, which, the young cannot do.
In conclusion, in my opinion, the advice from the old and the young is both available. The key to solve the problem is how you make use of it. Maybe the best method is combining the advice from the old and the young.

泡面UID: 2513568

When people encounter the （不要） troubles, they usually seek for help from others, sometimes for a little advice sometimes for a through solution. Here comes a problem, turning for help to older friends or to friends at your age is more valuable. As there are strong arguments for either opinion, the final decision will depend on a thorough analysis of the specific situation at hand. I will talk about the problem on two sides as followings.
Nowadays，with the development of society, the young usually go against to the old given that they think the old cannot understand the modern things, which is called age (generation) gap in their maid（mind). When they encounter troubles they only want to （不要） friends in （at） their age. Not only do they understand the trouble environment, but also do they have some original minds sometimes. （这句话后半句有点不太对称，不够有说服力）Maybe the advice cannot solve the problem thoroughly, but it is original and innovative, like something--light that can cause a serious ideas (?). Furthermore, Friends at the same age may have solve (solved) the same problem before, in that they can give the most appropriate advice that can rescue you from the morass at the short time. S/i}5Q

However, the advice from the same age friends seems lacking of experience sometimes. Limited by the age, they can’t analysis the problem from all the aspect (aspects). On the opposite hand, to the older friends, the more experience they have, the more aspects they can come up with the advice in （？）. It is true that they cannot understand the modern things well, but the problem we （？） have is familiar, the experiences they have exerts (exert) a positive impact on getting out of the troubles, which, the young cannot do.

In conclusion, in my opinion, the advice from the old and the young is both available. The key to solve the problem is how you make use of it. Maybe the best method is combining the advice from the old and the young.

结构很好，词组也很到位，大体不错，但是有几句理由说的比较，牵强欠缺例子，有例证更好

闹闹喵UID: 2500331

When people encounter the troubles, they usually seek for help from others, sometimes for a little advice sometimes for a through solution(这个……没看懂:confused: ). Here comes a problem, turning for help to older friends or to friends at your age is more valuable. As there are strong arguments for either opinion, the final decision will depend on a thorough analysis of the specific situation at hand. I will talk about the problem on two sides as followings.
Nowadays，with the development of society, the young usually go against to the old given that they think the old cannot understand the modern things, which is called age gap in their maid. When they encounter troubles they only want to friends in their age. Not only do they understand the trouble environment, but also do they have some original minds sometimes. Maybe the advice cannot solve the problem thoroughly, but it is original and innovative, like something--light that can cause a serious ideas. Furthermore, Friends at the same age may have solve the same problem before, in that they can give the most appropriate advice that can rescue you from the morass （这个词用的好）at the short time.

However, the advice from the same age friends seems lacking of experience sometimes. Limited by the age, they can’t analysis the problem from all the aspect. On the opposite hand, to the older friends, the more experience they have, the more aspects they can come up with the advice in. It is true that they cannot understand the modern things well, but the problem we have is familiar, the experiences they have exerts a positive impact on getting out of the troubles, which, the young cannot do.

In conclusion, in my opinion, the advice from the old and the young is both available. The key to solve the problem is how you make use of it. Maybe the best method is combining the advice from the old and the young.
语法方面的错误已经很少了，用词很恰当，论证也很全面，加油吧:handshake