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Issue244【0906G 文以载道三月四月作文小组】第一周第三作业 by Conceptal

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"Most societies do not take their greatest thinkers seriously, even when they claim to admire them."

很多社会并不重视思想家,即使社会宣称很景仰这些思想家。


Genius thinkers, who propose great ideas to promote the development of the society, play an important role. People always claim to admire the greatest thinkers and their achievement to the world, but, in action, they choose to ignore them. Many of citizens even do not know who the greatest thinkers are. Thus, we can't help to ponder why those greatest thinkers are always neglected since their achievements affect the society a lot.

With more and more rapid life pace, most people are occupied everyday. They rush to get up, have meals, go to work, make a living and return home, like a spinning top. They are eager to support their family, raise children and purchase better houses and cars. However, the greatest thinker is totally different. No matter what society they are in, they all have high intelligence, wide-range of knowledge, predictive view to certain issue, durable hardworking and sometime(sometimes) even the eccentric temper. What they pursue is(are) the dependent(independent) thinking and great achievement in study rather than money. This leads them to be isolated from the ordinary people.(这个观点我没想到 学习了 嘿嘿)

Secondly, the idea of the greatest thinker always can not be accepted by most people, since it seems to be critical, special and violating the common moral. A proper example is about one of famous Chinese thinkers--Lu Xun who saw the people's numb to the traditional Chinese feudalism and revolution and strongly expected to rescue them. He, thus, abandoned his study of medicine in Japanese and turned to be an author to waken citizen in spirit by writing. His proposed lots of critical ideas(我感觉有点乱,写成 Lots of critical ideas he proposed 是不是好一点呢?) but were not understood and accepted by common people in that society. The authority even tried to quell him.

Thirdly, with the changing of times and the variance of notions, some intellectuals who were respected in the ancient time are not admired by common people anymore. A case in this point is Confucius who is considered the greatest of the ancient Chinese sages. In the ancient time, many people prayed to be the apprentice of Confucius and to learn from him. His thoughts were scattered and became morality in the whole China. However, seldom people would mention Confucius and his thoughts nowadays, especially the young generation, although his ideas are still useful in the life.

In sum, it’s a great tragedy that greatest thinkers are not taken seriously by most societies. They seem to be not understood properly by most people. The society should give them enough space to let their great thoughts glaring.

呵呵 改了你三篇文章了 我觉得你的每篇文章写的都很清晰,条理很清楚 用词很准确  比较难表达的东西你写得都很清楚易懂,总的来说,改你的文章让我很舒服啊 也学到了很多东西啊。这篇文章你提的三个观点 我都没想到 要好好向你学习啊。而且内容基本上我觉得没有多少错,例子举的也很好啊 。我觉得你可以多写些长句子 或者试着练练排比句或者别的了,应该对你不是啥太大问题 我觉得 。所以,加油啦~~~~呵呵:handshake :handshake

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