Argument145 请拍：）谢谢！！留联接回拍

jackloveUID: 183611

和我的TS基本差不多
整体来说，逻辑思路挺顺畅的
第一段：The author confuses the notion of many and that of a high percentage.这个没看懂
                the data gained through this group of people is useless, in term of the attempt to get
                to a general result. 有误---〉the data, gained through this group of people,
               fail to attempt to get to a general result.
第二段较好
句式有变化，不错  学习呀！

siaUID: 2181690

十分感谢哦！！^^

具体的：
1 我是想说作者混淆了‘许多’与‘占较大比例’这两个概念。可能没说清楚……这样行不？
The author mistakenly take being many as taking up a large part of the whole.

2 你改的对，呵呵

Thanks again!!

(p.s.你的联接呢？)

siaUID: 2181690

谢谢小鑫！；）
你改得很好！！句子写得比我清楚！
交钱的确挺刺激的，让我们化刺激为力气吧哈！一起加油哦！