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发表于 2006-7-30 18:33:28 |显示全部楼层
120. "So much is new and complex today that looking back for an understanding of the past provides little guidance for living in the present."
现代社会是如此的崭新和复杂以至于回首了解过去对于当代生活已经没有太大帮助了。
现在和过去
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1、由于社会进步老的东西和方法已经过时(科技比以前先进);
2、由于环境变化前人的做法不适用于今天(环境比以前恶劣);
3、人类有些宝贵的经验仍值得借鉴。     
Does looking back for an understanding of the past provide nothing for living today? The speaker claims so, for the reason that so much is new and complex today. I concede that differences between today and past make some old things and methods is not suitable for today, but some precious experience gained from forefathers is still very useful for modern people .

     In the first place, with the development of the scientific technology, the ways of living and dealing with issues today turn out to be so different from those in the past that old methods used by our ancestors seems to have no value now. As an illustration, modern people go from one place to another by cars, trains, and planes, which, stick out a mile, are far more efficiency compared with those conveyance in the past such as gharry. As the result, today's research about the means of transport used by people lived hundred of years ago is only to make a better understanding of the living ways of our ancestors instead of getting some guidance relevant to our daily life. For the great developing in the realm of science, people today use much more efficiency tools and live in a much efficiency way that study of some old things appears to be less helpful.

     In the second place, besides great differences between the human societies in different periods, there is also a big change taking place in our earth's environment, which also makes the methods in the past unsuitable. As a case in point, to sustain their lives, our ancestors cut trees to build houses and hunted wild animals as their food. But if we do the same things in order to lighten the crisis of energy today, then it will bring in a terrible result. Without the rainforests, the greenhouse effect will threat the survival of human beings seriously, and if we keep hunting wild animals, then the delicate balance upon which all animals include human depend will be broken. Stick out a mile, under today's new situation, some old methods is out of worth.

     But, beside significant differences of objective circumstance, people living in different periods also have some similarities in essence, and they may face the similar problems forefathers suffered from. It means some experience of forefathers, no matter they succeed or failed, can be taken as precedence or precaution to help us make better decisions and avoid turning into a wrong way. Moreover, some great disasters which happened in the history will provide us so important caveats that we will try our best to prevent such disasters from reappearing by studying history and finding out the reasons that caused them. In one word, bases on the similarities of human in essence, we can benefit from looking back the experience of people lived in the past.

     In sum, great differences between different periods make some old things or methods turn out to have no value of usage today, but some precious experience can still guide us to make a good decision when facing choices and we can not simply conclude that looking back for an understanding of the past is out of worth.

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发表于 2006-7-31 15:57:09 |显示全部楼层

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Does looking back for an understanding of the past provide nothing for living today? The speaker claims so, for the reason that so much is new and complex today. I concede that differences between today and past make some old things and methods (is) not suitable for today, but some precious experience gained from forefathers is still very useful for modern people .

     In the first place, with the development of the scientific technology, the ways of living and dealing with issues today turn out to be so different from those in the past that old methods used by our ancestors seems(seemed) to have no value now. As an illustration, modern people go from one place to another by cars, trains, and planes, which, stick out a mile, are far more efficiency compared with those conveyance in the past such as gharry. As the result, today's research about the means of transport used by people lived hundred of years ago is only to make a better understanding of the living ways of our ancestors instead of getting some guidance relevant to our daily life. For the great developing in the realm of science, people today use much more efficiency(effective) tools and live in a much efficiency(effective) way that study of some old things appears to be less helpful.

     In the second place, besides great differences between the human societies in different periods, there is also a big change taking place in our earth's environment, which also makes the methods in the past unsuitable. As a case in point, to sustain their lives, our ancestors cut trees to build houses and hunted wild animals as their food. But if we do the same things in order to lighten the crisis(pressure) of energy today, then it will bring in a terrible result. Without the rainforests, the greenhouse effect will threat the survival of human beings seriously, and if we keep hunting wild animals, then the delicate balance upon which all animals include human depend will be broken. Stick out a mile, under today's new situation, some old methods is out of worth.

     But, beside significant differences of objective circumstance, people living in different periods also have some similarities in essence, and they may face the similar problems (with that) forefathers suffered from. It means some experience of forefathers, no matter they succeed or failed, can be taken as precedence or precaution to help us make better decisions and avoid turning into a wrong way. Moreover, some great disasters which happened in the history will provide us so important caveats that we will try our best to prevent such disasters from reappearing by studying history and finding out the reasons that caused them. In one word, bases on the similarities of human in essence, we can benefit from looking back the experience of people lived in the past.

     In sum, great differences between different periods make some old things or methods turn out to have no value of usage toda

文章的结构很清晰,但中间一段举的环境变化的例子不是很恰当,毕竟祖先们砍伐树木捕杀动物是为了生存而非减轻能源危机。

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