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TOPIC: ISSUE4 - "No field of study can advance significantly unless outsiders bring their knowledge and experience to that field of study."

WORDS: 646         TIME: 01:15:00          DATE: 2007-7-31 14:02:49

The speaker contends that until using other knowledge and experience from different field of study, would there not have significant advancement in any field of study. In my observation and experience as a college student, I strongly agree with the speaker's contention in most of the time. Although every discipline has its own characteristic which help it stand by itself as a subject, it is absorbing different kinds of knowledge that would make a discipline more integrated and advance forwards.

To begin with, with the technology which is supplied by other study field, some once independent study field can improve significantly. One need look no further than the invention of computer, not only in information technology but also in other subjects, which plays a pivotal role. For example, when brought into architecture, the computer technology can help drawing and designing become more quick, convenient and precise. At the same time, patients could be examined quickly with less physical pain because of the adoption of  high technology such as X - ray, CT. Obviously,  what makes a field of study advance towards better and more integrated direction is to take the knowledge of other subject and then integrate with original knowledge. Further, when many subjects came together in a organic way a new discipline might be born. Now, biochemistry has came into being because of the integration between biology and chemistry, which benefited our life in many aspects greatly such as ailment precautions and descendible research. To this extent, it is the interrelation between different disciplines that make a field study to promote the others advancement.

Secondly, it is the ideas and knowledge coming from other field of study that help a discipline achieve significant advancement. Take the advertising for instance, not only the knowledge about the situation of consumers' behavior and market's  fluctuation, the students must also study the psychology, sociology, statistics and management science in order to know the causes of consumer's behavior and market's fluctuation and quickly make the solution. Those who only study in advertising field will receive limited knowledge and could not understand the inherent essence in advertising action. When it comes to the political field, it is the same that different field study would help people to make policies quickly and precisely. For example, Jefferson, as one of the most well-known politicians in American history, had a wide interests  included not only the political science, but also many other fields -- such as history, literature, philosophy and mathematics which helped him established a all-round knowledge system in political career. Thanks to the knowledge integration, he could be aware of  life status quo, welfare condition, and economic situation in American society of the time and finally drafted out " the Declaration of Independence" which benefited many Americans.  So, without integration between all kinds of field, no subject would make significant achievement the same as the effects after integrated.

Admittedly, every field of study has its own different characteristics that separate it from other subjects. The things which consumers concern and the fluctuation which competition result in both are the research field of advertising, while physics explores the order of nature. At the same time, the research methods between the two are also different in which advertising-men may adopt the integration of emotional examine and rational study, while physicists may adopt experimentation. However, even the most seemingly absolutely irrelevant fields inevitably have necessary links, which indicates that diversity of fields are more or less dependent on each other in tune with the times that our world became more integrated than before.

In sum, it's true that the knowledge and experience which the outsiders bring into the field will help it improve more rapidly and advance forwards. To make our fields of study more professional and more efficient, we should bring useful knowledge of other fields together and make them integrated in an organic way.
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发表于 2007-7-31 19:08:06 |只看该作者
这个好像是高频吧,这个题目的文章真有不少,不过有一点我有点疑问,题目里面的study 指学术研究,不知道你提的广告的例子是不是合适。

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发表于 2007-8-1 01:00:03 |只看该作者
恩,我觉得广告也算是一个研究,因为广告也是学科,比如说对于消费者心理,市场变化等方面的研究。
因为我的专业就是这个,感觉写起来比较顺手,所以就用上了,也不知道合适不。
听听你们的想法:D

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发表于 2007-8-1 14:08:37 |只看该作者
The speaker contends that until using other knowledge and experience from different field of study, would there not have significant advancement in any field of study. In my observation and experience as a college student, I strongly agree with the speaker's contention in most of the time. Although every discipline has its own characteristic which help it stand by itself as a subject, it is absorbing different kinds of knowledge that would make a discipline more integrated and advance forwards.
To begin with, with the technology [which is] supplied by other study field, some once independent study field can improve significantly. One need look no further than the invention of computer, not only in information technology but also in other subjects, which plays a pivotal role. For example, when brought into architecture, the computer technology can help drawing and designing become more quick, convenient and precise. At the same time, patients could be examined quickly with less physical pain because of the adoption of high[advanced] technology such as X - ray, CT. Obviously,  what makes a field of study advance towards better and more integrated direction is to take the knowledge of other subject and then integrate with original knowledge. Further, when many subjects came together in a organic way a new discipline might be born. Now, biochemistry has came into being because of the integration between biology and chemistry, which benefited our life in many aspects greatly such as ailment precautions and descendible research. To this extent, it is the interrelation between different disciplines that make a field study to promote the others advancement.[生化例子好象放在下一段更合适。]

econdly, it is the ideas and knowledge coming from other field of study that help a discipline achieve significant advancement. Take the advertising for instance, not only the knowledge about the situation of consumers' behavior and market's  fluctuation, the students must also study the psychology, sociology, statistics and management science in order to know the causes of consumer's behavior and market's fluctuation and quickly make the solution. Those who only study in advertising field will receive limited knowledge and could not understand the inherent essence in advertising action. When it comes to the political field, it is the same that different field study would help people to make policies quickly and precisely. For example, Jefferson, as one of the most well-known politicians in American history, had a wide interests included not only the political science, but also many other fields -- such as history, literature, philosophy and mathematics which helped him established a all-round knowledge system in political career. Thanks to the knowledge integration, he could be aware of life status quo, welfare condition, and economic situation in American society of the time and finally drafted out " the Declaration of Independence" which benefited many Americans.  So, without integration between all kinds of field, no subject would make significant achievement the same as the effects after integrated.

Admittedly, every field of study has its own different characteristics that separate it from other subjects. The things which consumers concern and the fluctuation which competition result in both are the research field of advertising, while physics explores the order of nature. At the same time, the research methods between the two are also different in which advertising-men may adopt the integration of emotional examine and rational study, while physicists may adopt experimentation. However, even the most seemingly absolutely irrelevant fields inevitably have necessary links, which indicates that diversity of fields are more or less dependent on each other in tune with the times that our world became more integrated than before.[这一段是什么意思呢?感觉离题目有点远。我准备的提纲是写些例外,比如数学的突破只能靠数学本身,仅供参考]





In sum, it's true that the knowledge and experience which the outsiders bring into the field will help it improve more rapidly and advance forwards. To make our fields of study more professional and more efficient, we should bring useful knowledge of other fields together and make them integrated in an organic way

总的来说写的不错,如果限时也能保持这样的状态,就没问题了。
前两段觉得没什么问题,因为我的思路也是这样,只是我比较举倾向于更学术的研究例子。
你的广告的例子我想了想也挺合适的,不过study这个词慎用,因为容易理解成学习这个意思。
有进步,加油!

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