Issue 208<Challenge yourself 小组 第4次作业by Tracycxt

TracycxtUID：2505888

TOPIC: ISSUE208 - "The way people look, dress, and act reveals their attitudes and interests. You can tell much about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people."
This is contemporary society filled with hurry, which requires people to use the most effective and efficient way to express their word at its inmost point; that is , since after appearance and behavior could directly accordance with people desire . However, not all society's view of value could be reflected based on appearance and behavior

Admittedly, people choose clothes to express their interests and attitudes, in which way, some part of social measurement could be judged. For example, it is obviously based on American dress style to comprehend the view of point of society. Most of American could be regarded as those whose work is work and whose entertainment is entertainment. Their clothes culture ----- a different combination with simple cloth, such as T-shirt, sandal is in all days' work, and a formal style including tidy suit and tie never creasing , could reflect their attitudes when they face up to occupation and pleasure; that is , when it comes to working, they devote themselves to it , without being distracted by material comfort, while indulging themselves when it comes to pleasure. What I mentioned before about American attitude also reflect the atmosphere of a society’s idea and values.

The example of punk stars adds weighting to the reasoning. punk rockers are those who would choose the unique clothes and behavior to stand out from the masses, and they seldom to concern with the opinion of people looking on from outside. They give us the impression of cynic whom most people deem never satisfy the treatment from society, They wear bold ,impressive dress and accessories, behavior deviating ways to express their unique interest to informs the world their passion of punk music and they are unique , never following the main stream of ordinary people who, in their thought, are inferior to them .Parents are very upset when  they express their unsatisfied by deviating ways of life,  If , in a word, appearance means something value, which is obviously dependent on different definition of meaning, it is wise to comprehend to people' attitude and interests at first glance.

Not only appearance, but also behavior ,play a crucial way to identify human view of value. Irreversible as the trend of globalization is, most civilians among the world tend to pursue the same things, and to forget their unique traditional culture, since they are deep affected by any other countries'. That all people incline to eating western-style meals, watching movie which comes from Holley wood, having Christmas day, is self-evident, no need justifying, and reflecting the alternative view of value under the dramatic changes in their behaviors. Children, with the passionate of sincere, always respect the parents who could admit their false in judging the behavior of children . It is obvious that child, representing one part of society, would also summarize a society's view of point------it prefer one who is honest, and rational.

To ensure the importance of appearance and behavior as the means of analyzing the individual value ,or even society's ideas and values is not to say the wholly authenticity of them. In some certain areas, it is unwise to require information about attitudes and interests by observing dress or act, since the need of character of deceiving is essential. Such as spy, who withhold true information about themselves and disguise to be a native who are familiar with the objective, to obtain treasure which involves the of nation's classified information . Moreover, with the miraculous speed of change of fashion, the appearance could not be regarded as the standard to reveal the attitudes and interest and the pursuit of fashion, in my opinion ,is mass of an irrational behaviors. They change their appearance, not because the changes in their spiritual look, but becase the cycle of fashion have been ended.

Although, at first glance, however, the faith of what we see I feel to be worthwhile of suspicion. Unless people are intelligent as to its nature and the faith of appearance and behavior have been weaken, to be widely complete, if people have inclination to understand society, the need of analyzing technology level , of observing education level, of comprehending the political system is essential .

linyunfUID：2405027

This is contemporary society filled with hurry, which requires people to use the most effective and efficient way to express their word at its inmost point(我觉得这样the contemporary society is filled with hurry, which require……); that is , since after appearance and behavior could directly accordance with people desire(后半句我读不清) . However, not all society's view of value could be reflected based on appearance and behavior

Admittedly, people choose clothes to express their interests and attitudes, in which way, some part of social measurement could be judged. For example, it is obviously（这个词可以换下） based on American dress style to comprehend the view of point （point of view）of society. Most of American could be regarded as those whose work is work and whose entertainment is entertainment. Their clothes culture ----- a different combination with simple cloth, such as T-shirt, sandal is（is不要） in all days' work, and a formal style including tidy suit and tie never creasing （never creasing tie或者tie that is never creasing）, could reflect their attitudes when they face up to occupation and pleasure; that is , when it comes to working, they devote themselves to it , without being distracted by material comfort, while indulging themselves when it comes to pleasure. What I mentioned before about American attitude also reflect the atmosphere of a society’s idea and values.（attitude reflect idea and values?）

The example of punk stars adds weighting to the reasoning. punk rockers are those who would choose the unique clothes and behavior to stand out from the masses, and they seldom to(to不要) concern with the opinion of people looking on from outside. They give us the impression of cynic whom most people deem never satisfy the treatment from society, They wear bold ,impressive dress and accessories, behavior deviating ways to express their unique interest to informs the world their passion of punk music and they are unique , never following the main stream of ordinary people who, in their thought, are inferior to them .Parents are very upset when  they express their unsatisfied(这里应该是名词吧) by deviating ways of life,  If , in a word, appearance means something value, which is obviously dependent on different definition of meaning, it is wise to comprehend to people' attitude and interests at first glance.

例子很好，句式变化很好，但有主谓一致的问题。你再看看。

Not only appearance, but also behavior ,play a crucial way to identify human view of value. Irreversible as the trend of globalization is, most civilians among the world tend to pursue the same things, and to forget their unique traditional culture, since they are deep affected by any （any不要）other countries'. That all people incline to eating（应该是eat，下同） western-style meals, watching movie which comes from Holley wood, having Christmas day, is self-evident, no need（加of） justifying, and reflecting the alternative view of value under the dramatic changes in their behaviors. Children, with the passionate（这是形容词） of sincere, always respect the parents who could admit their false in judging the behavior of children . It is obvious that child, representing one part of society, would also summarize a society's view of point------it prefer one who is honest, and rational.

句子啥的都很好。例子也不错，可我不知道为什么读的不顺，可能是几个小的错误导致的，也可能是我实力不行，你再看吧。如果是你的错，你改后麻烦上传一下，我觉得这几段都很好。

建议：如果你对语法有足够的信心，多用这些句子可以让你得到高分（很像范文了）。

我认为保险点的方法是用常用的句式清楚的展开论证，毕竟gre考得是逻辑分析。

wanghugigiUID：2465119

TOPIC: ISSUE208 - "The way people look, dress, and act reveals their attitudes and interests. You can tell much about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people."
This is contemporary society filled with hurry, which requires people to use the most effective and efficient way to express their word at its inmost point; that is, since after appearance and behavior could directly accordance with people desire. However, not all society's view of value could be reflected based on appearance and behavior

Admittedly, people choose clothes to express their interests and attitudes, in which way, some part of social measurement could be judged. For example, it is obviously based on American dress style to comprehend the view of point of society. Most of American could be regarded as those whose work is work and whose entertainment is entertainment(这句我怎么看怎么觉得是中式英语). Their clothes culture ----- a different combination with simple cloth, such as T-shirt, sandal is in all days' work, and a formal style including tidy suit and tie never creasing, could reflect their attitudes when they face up to occupation and pleasure; that is, when it comes to working, they devote themselves to it, without being distracted by material comfort, while indulging themselves when it comes to pleasure. What I mentioned before about American attitude also reflect the atmosphere of a society’s idea and values.
例子好像只是阐明了 人们的着装能反应他们的态度。。
The example of punk stars adds weighting to the reasoning. punk rockers are those who would choose the unique clothes and behavior to stand out from the masses, and they seldom to concern with the opinion of people looking on from outside. They give us the impression of cynic whom most people deem never satisfy the treatment from society, They wear bold ,impressive dress and accessories, behavior deviating ways to express their unique interest to informs the world their passion of punk music and they are unique , never following the main stream of ordinary people who, in their thought, are inferior to them .Parents are very upset when  they express their unsatisfied by deviating ways of life,  If , in a word, appearance means something value, which is obviously dependent on different definition of meaning, it is wise to comprehend to people' attitude and interests at first glance.

Not only appearance, but also behavior ,play a crucial way to identify human view of value. Irreversible as the trend of globalization is, most civilians among the world tend to pursue the same things, and to forget their unique traditional culture, since they are deep affected by any other countries'. That all people incline to eating western-style meals, watching movie which comes from Holley wood, having Christmas day, is self-evident, no need justifying, and reflecting the alternative view of value under the dramatic changes in their behaviors. Children, with the passionate of sincere, always respect the parents who could admit their false in judging the behavior of children . It is obvious that child, representing one part of society, would also summarize a society's view of point------it prefer one who is honest, and rational.

To ensure the importance of appearance and behavior as the means of analyzing the individual value ,or even society's ideas and values is not to say the wholly authenticity of them. In some certain areas, it is unwise to require information about attitudes and interests by observing dress or act, since the need of character of deceiving is essential. Such as spy, who withhold true information about themselves and disguise to be a native who are familiar with the objective, to obtain treasure which involves the of nation's classified information . Moreover, with the miraculous speed of change of fashion, the appearance could not be regarded as the standard to reveal the attitudes and interest and the pursuit of fashion, in my opinion ,is mass of an irrational behaviors. They change their appearance, not because the changes in their spiritual look, but becase the cycle of fashion have been ended.

Although, at first glance, however, the faith of what we see I feel to be worthwhile of suspicion. Unless people are intelligent as to its nature and the faith of appearance and behavior have been weaken, to be widely complete, if people have inclination to understand society, the need of analyzing technology level , of observing education level, of comprehending the political system is essential .
我觉得可能是我自己对Issue理解不够透彻，总觉得这个题目得从两方面来说，包括个人和社会。。但好像你的文章并不是这样。。
不过我觉得你的句式用得都不错。。很值得学习。。不过语法有待加强。。
不如有些强调句式总觉得你用得不太对劲。。
嘿嘿。。