【12月-1月IBT综合备考活动】☆Jelly月♂12月22日作文

d596086UID: 2522476

12.22.2008
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The ability to cooperate with other well is more important today than in the past.

“One chopstick is easily broken, but ten is hardly”, said by Confucius. That means the more cooperative we are, the more power we can generate. In the modern time, along with technologies explosively augmenting and the society increasingly complicating, we are facing with new challenges, as well as many global problems which are deteriorating in recent decades. As to conquer these difficulties, everyone, no matter you are students, works, or other social member, needs to cultivate a stronger ability to cooperate with other well ,which is more important today than in the past.

In the academic field, it is necessary for a group of people to concentrate efforts together on certain science research, since the amount of information nowadays is much larger than ever before, as well as different subjects crossing closer to each other. Unlike in the earlier time, students were able to finish homework well just by oneself; nowadays, CS-students need to be distributed dealing with different assignments in order to accomplish a big computer program, which one alone can not handle. And a very effective way for law-students who are busy in studying medical litigation is to get help from medical students. Numerous examples can be listed, it is obvious to see that joining in a study group can accelerate one’s step towards successful end. Just like Newton once said: I can made such glorious success just because I am standing on the Giant‘s shoulder.

As to the business environment, people also need to cooperate with each other. To a large extent, the company or organization just is a large group, in which anyone, actually, is working together for a same goal. Today, even a small company owns up to a hundred members, not to mention those big companies composing of thousands of people. Then the cooperation should be more emphasized than before. The manager play a leading role conducting others; then employees or workers fulfill personal responsibilities relating to different tasks. Market-investigation department take charge with market’s information collecting; while sell-department answer for the products distribution. If one says, the Roma can not be built in one day, I say, it either can not be built by single person.

In addition to those new challenges, we are also facing with many problems which became more serious in recent decades, and that require us, anyone in the earth, focus our energy together on these all humanity’s stuffs. Such problems includes: environment pollution, energy sources shorten, resource exhausting, and so on… Any person in the world should move up to protect our living environment, save our precious resources, find out new energy source, and so forth. We should not only shoulder these responsibilities, but also try to appeal more people joining in our group. Only by the way to solidify strongly today, we would possess a wonderful tomorrow!

chineseladyUID: 2403976

One chopstick is easily broken, but ten is hardly”, said by Confucius. That means the more cooperative we are, the more power we can generate. In the modern time, along with technologies explosively augmenting and the society increasingly complicating, we are facing with new challenges, as well as many global problems which are deteriorating in recent decades. As to conquer these difficulties, everyone, no matter (you are)可略 students, (works)workers, or other social member, needs to cultivate a stronger ability to cooperate with (other)others well ,which is more important today than in the past

n the academic field, it is necessary for a group of people to concentrate efforts together on certain science research, since the amount of information nowadays is much larger than ever before, as well as different subjects crossing closer to each other. Unlike in the earlier time, students were able to finish homework well just by (oneself)themselves; nowadays, CS-students need to be distributed dealing with different assignments in order to accomplish a big computer program, which one alone can not handle. And a very effective way for law-students who are busy (in) studying medical litigation is to get help from medical students. Numerous examples can be listed, it is obvious to see that joining in a study group can accelerate one’s step towards successful end. Just like Newton once said: I can made such glorious success just because I am standing on the Giant‘s shoulder

As to the business environment, people also need to cooperate with each other. To a large extent, the company or organization just is a large group, in which anyone, actually, is working together for a same goal. Today, even a small company owns up to a hundred members, not to mention those big companies composing of thousands of people. Then the cooperation should be more emphasized than before. The manager (play)a leading role conducting others; then employees or workers fulfill personal responsibilities relating to different tasks. Market-investigation department take charge with market’s information collecting; while sell-department answer for the products distribution. If one says, the Roma can not be built in one day, I say, it either can not be built by single person

In addition to those new challenges, we are also facing with many problems which became more serious in recent decades, and that require us, anyone in the earth, focus our energy together on these all humanity’s stuffs. Such problems includes: environment pollution, energy sources shorten, resource exhausting, and so on… Any person in the world should move up to protect our living environment, save our precious resources, find out new energy source, and so forth. We should not only shoulder these responsibilities, but also try to appeal more people joining in our group. Only by the way to solidify strongly today, we would possess a wonderful tomorrow

LZ的句子结构挺好,不单一.有些语法错误. 第二段法学学生和医学学生的例子再具体些就好了其他的段落都说出了合作的重要性.

达达摩摩UID: 2499908

“One chopstick is easily broken, but ten is hardly”, said by Confucius不错哦
结构观点都不错 就是举例太泛泛而谈 可以举例在深入的说说

nickey0809UID: 2349468

二三段最后一句用得都很好呵呵