issue136 【LOVEAW小组】 第二次作业

njuliuyangUID: 2300567

TOPIC: ISSUE136 - "The absence of choice is a circumstance that is very, very rare."
              没有选择的情况少之又少。

观点：同意作者观点，没有选择的情况是非常少的
1、在日常生活中，我们有权选择衣食住行，举例，女生买衣服，男生买数码产品。
2、在学习上，可选择考什么学校，做作业有选择题
3、在工作中，我们有选择合作同事，选择各项提议的时候。
4、让步，我们的选择是有条件的选择，不能泛滥，否则有危害，必须在法律允许的范围内

WORDS: 434         TIME: 1:52:04          DATE: 2007-2-9

The speaker claims that the lack of choice is a condition that is seldom seen. As a matter of fact, our lives bound with a variety of choice, which we are confronted with everyday after coming to the world. Aside from in a few particular circumstances, we always have rights to make a choice in nearly every respect of our lives.

Although we cannot choose our parents and family background, there are various choices waiting for us in our daily life. We can pick up our favorite food, chothing, toys and so forth from varieties of commodities. For instance, the majority of girls and women prefer shopping. When doing shopping, most of them probably will  be faced with the choice that selecting the most gorgeous as well as the most inexpensive clothes from many types of available clothes on sales. Similarly, seldom can boys resist the appeal of various new-fashioned and smart digital products such as ipod in many cases, which render them have difficulty in choosing their favorite products.

When it comes to learning, neither can we escape from choice surrounding us. We need to choose a high school from different schools and then make a decision that which high school we should enter.  After graduating from high school, we will also have to make a similar choice that which university and major are suitable to us best.  Besides these foregoing significant choices, we are confronted with numerous choice in our tests as well as homework. It should be familiar to every one that the scenario, which choice we should make from several multiple choice questions.

As for work, making choice is also our indispensable task at work. For example, when appointed a project manager, we will need to choose appropriate workmates to accomplish the relevant tasks. In addition, we need to choose the most feasible and economical proposal, which can be frequently seen at the beginning of a project.

Admittedly, there is no denying that in some cases we are unable to make a choice. When walking in the street or driving on the road, we have no choice but to follow traffic laws. When studying at school, we have no choice but to follow school regulations. When working in a company, we have no choice but to follow business regulations. The freedom of choice are always confined to the scope that laws and regulations permit.

To sum up, aside from in some particular circumstances, such as when laws and regulations do not permit us to make a choice, our lives are replete with a variety of choice accompaning us all along the life.

想问下choice到底是否算作可数n，a variety of choices 是否正确，谢谢。倒数第二段可能还会再补充修改一下。

[ 本帖最后由 njuliuyang 于 2007-2-9 21:26 编辑 ]

iq28UID: 2152875

choice可数 a variety of choices 应该是对的

好像应该写36吧^_^

The speaker claims that the lack of choice is a condition that is seldom seen. As a matter of fact, our lives bound with a variety of choice(s), which we are confronted with everyday after coming to the world. Aside from in a few particular circumstances, we always have rights to make a choice in nearly every respect of our lives.

Although we cannot choose our parents and family background, there are various choices waiting for us in our daily life. We can pick up our favorite food, chothing, toys and so forth from varieties of commodities. For instance, the majority of girls and women prefer shopping. When doing shopping, most of them probably will  be faced with the choice that selecting the most gorgeous as well as the most inexpensive clothes from many types of available clothes on sales. Similarly, seldom can boys resist the appeal of various new-fashioned and smart digital products such as ipod in many cases, which render them have difficulty in choosing their favorite products.

When it comes to learning, neither can we escape from choice surrounding us. We need to choose a high school from different schools and then make a decision that which high school we should enter.  After graduating from high school, we will also have to make a similar choice that which university and major are suitable to us best.  Besides these foregoing significant choices, we are confronted with numerous choice in our tests as well as homework. It should be familiar to every one that the scenario, which choice we should make from several multiple choice questions.

As for work, making choice is also our indispensable task at work. For example, when appointed a project manager, we will need to choose appropriate workmates to accomplish the relevant tasks. In addition, we need to choose the most feasible and economical proposal, which can be frequently seen at the beginning of a project.

Admittedly, there is no denying that in some cases we are unable to make a choice. When walking in the street or driving on the road, we have no choice but to follow traffic laws. When studying at school, we have no choice but to follow school regulations. When working in a company, we have no choice but to follow business regulations. The freedom of choice are always confined to the scope that laws and regulations permit.

To sum up, aside from in some particular circumstances, such as when laws and regulations do not permit us to make a choice, our lives are replete with a variety of choice(s) accompaning us all along the life.

(行文方面真的没有什么好改动的, 流畅,句式也有变化,用词合理.赞一下~
文章也很好的表达了提纲的意思,再赞一下~
问题出现在提纲立意.将选择仅仅划分为衣食,学习还有工作似乎相对而言没有什么深度,有点学生气.
比如划分成人生各个阶段的选择,或者某个某种场景下各种角色的人的选择,酱紫似乎好一些.
这个题目应该是issue里面数一数二抽象的了.对应抽象宽泛的题目最好的方法就是从一个很小的点去切入然后再展开论证.
再比如,可以说绝大部分人的生命轨迹都是宏观类似的,这个角度看人没有选择,但是每一个细节上面来看,人又可以活出各不相同多姿多彩的生活.
这个题目确实难写~ 写成酱紫也不错啦^_^)

[ 本帖最后由 iq28 于 2007-2-10 03:37 编辑 ]

njuliuyangUID: 2300567

十分感谢iq28，两次都是你改的我的作业，而且每次都这么认真，再次感谢。由于我看的是最早发布的作业页面，上面是这道题，所以就写了，没想到……痛苦啊……
其实我也觉得这个提纲有点俗，不过当时确实想不到可以分类展开来说的内容，所以只好求助于衣食住行，我看到kito小组有提到人类社会发展的选择，学科选择发展，民主社会中法律保护下的选择自由等。我觉得挺有深度的。你的意见非常好，不过我对从小处切入论证尚不太明了，不知如何实现，是否可假设一具体情景，然后进行分析论证，如申请高校的选择，导师选择等。
再次感谢。