COMEON作文小组------greenpalm 10月7日作业

greenpalmUID: 2391324

Topic: Movies and televisions have more positive or negative effects on young people’s behaviors.


   We can hardly deny that Movies and televisions and all other kinds of media do have profound effect on our daily life and even becoming an important part of our young people's life when compare with the ones on our old' s. Whether they would do harm or benefit us are mostly depend on how we make use of them.
    Movies and televisions have advantages for they board our sight and make us acknowledge the world insightful and wholly without stepping  out of the door by throwing large amount of money, especially for those young who are curious but still have to relay on their parents economically , Besides, Different types of shows entertainment us , relax us, teach us ,even suggest us on some decision-making when we puzzled in the frustration of real life. They also connected us from all parts of the world and by watching them ,some of us would feel a sense of equality and fulfilling.
    As the prospecting of the media enterprise . There comes the disadvantages.
    For example, YouTube , the worldwide video net ,though which everyone could upload any type of shows even by DV. While providing the first hand videos to cater the audiences ' taste around the world ,It as well as adopts another way of peering into our private life, expose us in the eyes of others, no matter good or bad effects would be on our young people. Through this free channel, we can hardly count on that this sort of media, just like the movies and televisions ,would bring our young generation which most of them are lack of criterion of deciding between harm and good, to a shinning future.
    In conclude. Movies and Televisions are positive if we can make good use of them on enlarging our knowledge and furnish our life while some strategies, such as the clearness of some programmers which should first be measured by the media government before put into the screens, should be taken simultaneously to coordinate the cultivation of our young generation.

Thanks for giving some advice!

needyouUID: 2251649

We can hardly deny that Movies and televisions and all other kinds of media do have profound effect on our daily life and even becoming an important part of our young people's life when compare with the ones on our old' s(过去？不这样说吧，old period 怎么样？). Whether they would do harm or benefit us are mostly depend on how we make use of them.|
    Movies and televisions have advantages for they board our sight(wide our views) and make us acknowledge the world insightful and wholly without stepping  out of the door by throwing (away)large amount of money, especially for those young who are curious but still have to relay on their parents economically(depend on their parents for money) , Besides, Different types of shows entertainment(amuse) us , relax us, teach us ,even suggest us on some decision-making when we puzzled in (the frustration of 删掉)real life. They also connected us from all parts of the world and by watching them , some of us would feel a sense of equality and fulfilling.(这是什么意思？？)
    As the prospecting(future)of the media enterprise . There comes the disadvantages. o { G H For example, YouTube , the worldwide video net ,though which everyone could upload any type of shows even (even什么？)by DV. While providing the first hand videos to cater the audiences ' taste around the world ,It as well as adopts another way of peering into our private life, expose us in the eyes of others, no matter good or bad effects would be on our young people. Through this free channel, we can hardly count on that this sort of media, just like the movies and televisions ,would bring our young generation which most of them are lack of criterion of deciding between harm and good, to a shinning future.
    In conclude. Movies and Televisions are positive if we can make good use of them on enlarging our knowledge and furnish(提供？？) our life while some strategies（？？？什么意思？？）, such as the clearness of some programmers which should first be measured by the media government before put into the screens, should be taken simultaneously to coordinate the cultivation of our young generation.


用些简单点的词汇吧，toefl不是GRE。