issue121 FLY AW小组第六次作业！

exp03UID: 2158827

In resent years, many people have realized that it is necessary to spend money and time on protecting endangered species. When some one insists the opinion that the species’ extinct is a result of natural and humanity should not pay more attention on this phenomenon, we can say that he/she is inexorable to the biology surrounding us especially in this industry society.

The developing and extinction of various species are almost equal and follow the regularity of Darwinism before industry revolution. This means the activities of people are not influence the environment. A specie’s disappear was caused by nature disaster or replaced by another more adaptable specie as the distinction of dinosaur and Xiphodon. At that time, it is reasonable for our forefather not to intervene the development of nature to maintain the balance of species.

While the beginning of industry revolution, everything is changing. Because of people’s no measure requirement form the nature, different environment problems occur day by day. People always ignore the environment destroy after abusing petrol, water, wool and coal to satisfy their everlasting demands. Now, can you ever disavow that the warmer weather all over the globe causes the large extinction of Antarctica? Can you ever deny that the water pollution leads the fish disappearing from rivers and lacks? Can you ever over look the diseases like chicken flu caused by the chemical pollution which also lead to the death of humanity? It seems that all nature aspects are explored to the destroying of human activity.

After hundreds of years of industry explaining, some scientists begin noticing that without some species there will be a large disaster to the world. Now thousands of species disappear everyday, and many are key species in the biological chain—without these species numerous related life-forms will disappear along with them! With the booming of extinction the future world can not be imagined.

Therefore, we can see that protecting endangered species is maintaining the formal life of ourselves. That is why so many ordinances are enacted in all the nations to control the influence of humanity to our nature. That is why we should instruct our children the importance of coexistence with animals. That is why scientists are making great efforts on saving more endangered species.
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提纲：
1.长期以来生物的发展和灭绝都遵循自然归率
2.近来，人类对生物的影响巨大，导致大量生物灭绝。
3.一些关键动物的灭绝会导致灾难发生
4.对濒危动物的保护就是保护人类自己

还是没上四百字……

[ 本帖最后由 exp03 于 2006-6-1 08:59 编辑 ]

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In resent years, many people have realized that it is necessary to spend money and time on protecting endangered species. When some one insists the opinion that the species’ extinct is a result of natural and humanity should not pay more attention on this phenomenon, we can say that he/she is inexorable to the biology surrounding us especially in this industry society.

The developing(appearance or evolution) and extinction of various species are almost equal and follow the regularity of Darwinism before industry revolution. This means the activities of people are(did) not influence the environment. A specie’s disappear was caused by nature disaster or replaced by another more adaptable specie as the distinction of dinosaur and Xiphodon. At that time, it is reasonable for our forefather not to intervene the development of nature to maintain the balance of species.

While(since) the beginning of industry revolution, everything is changing(has changed). Because of people’s no measure (immoderate) requirement form(from) the nature, different environment problems occur day by day. People always ignore the environment destroy after abusing petrol, water, wool and coal to satisfy their everlasting demands. Now, can you ever disavow that the warmer weather all over the globe causes the large extinction of Antarctica (什么意思？是说南极冰川消融么)? Can you ever deny that the water pollution leads the fish disappearing from rivers and lacks? Can you ever over look the diseases like chicken flu caused by the chemical pollution which also lead to the death of humanity（好像humanity更多用来表达人性或者全人类的意思）? It seems that all nature aspects are explored to the destroying of human activity.

After hundreds of years of industry explaining（不明白）, some scientists begin noticing that without some species there will be a large disaster to the world. Now thousands of species disappear everyday（夸张啦）, and many are key species in the biological chain—without these species numerous related life-forms will disappear along with them! With the booming（是个偏褒义的词） of extinction the future world can not be imagined.

Therefore, we can see that protecting endangered species is maintaining the formal（common or normal）life of ourselves. That is why so many ordinances are enacted in all the(去the) nations to control the influence of humanity to our nature. That is why we should instruct our children the importance of coexistence with animals. That is why scientists are making great efforts on saving more endangered species.
思路清晰，文中几处表达不是很明确，结尾写的很有煽动性：）