issue208 G89 15号作业 就要考了，大家来指导一下，谢了

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Issue208  
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The way people look, dress, and act reveals their attitudes and interests. You can tell much about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people.

提纲:
1 指明观点说尽管 有些时候可以,但在如今的社会大多数不能代表个人或社会的interst of value
2 可以代表的例子
3 随着全球化不能代表的例子
4 尽管很多固有的特点已经没有表现出来，但像中华56个民族的服装在某些时候还是用到了
5 总结

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Can the way people look, dress, and act reveal their attitudes or interests? From observing the appearance and behavior of its people, can we grasp a society's ideas or values, as the speaker contends? In my view, this is a case-by-case problem, may be there are indeed some aspects that can these be true, however, in contemporary society such cases becomes rare.

I concede that in a few cases we can be informed of some information about one's background. For example, in ancient China, especially in the Tang Period, a woman with obese figure was a symbol of beauty and indicated that she is a young lady of a wealthy family; whilst a thin girl can only be identified as a servant. Also if a society whose people are all wearing old patched clothes, there might be somewhat poverty for all the people in such a country or that a country which to some extent can be called a good habit of frugal. However, such cases can not be unfairly generalized the whole society’s ideas or values.

In contemporary society, the way people look, dress, and act are becoming increasingly similar. Accompany with the globalization penetrating into every country, myriads of distinct culture differences have becomes vague. For instance, shyness may be a characteristic for a traditional Chinese girl; however, a growing number of children today are pursuing the individualism which characterized western country. The same is when concerning about the wearing today, people are no more restricted to some principles which there may not have one for a democratic country, whilst wear what they are prefer according to the climate. To some extent, people around world are of the same taste of clothes for the chase of popularity is heating around world. Beside this, the escalating expands of some famous brands of clothes companies bring about the popular clothes which everyone can be bought nearly in every country. In the respect of behavior: in the ancient times, take western behaviors as example, men were required to be genteel, and women were asked to be as inwardly as possible. While, now it is not a strange to see a woman stride into an official room or a man behavior rudely which one cannot image.

Although the appearance may not be that distinct as before, the symbols of the valuable culture, such as the costume of minority in China, have always been cherished as the emblem of one’s unique culture. Even now every time the country convokes a conference of the delegation from minority, 56 different minorities with colorful distinct costumes can be saw in the palace of Tiananmen. The same pageantry scene can be found when a national traditional festival began. Form this we can see that even though the tradition has still existed in the world, they now belied by the veil of the impact of other main behavior or clothes rather than show them outwards.

In sum, it is difficult to recognize one's attitude and interest of him or her from their look, dress and act, and it will be harder for us to identify his or her society's ideas and values nowadays. In much more cases, people’s appearances and behaviors are result in individual’s preference rather than reflect a society’s value or idea.

[ Last edited by vickycy6 on 2005-8-16 at 12:57 ]

安卓美达UID：2101780

还是我来改

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I concede that in a few cases we can be informed of some information about one's background. For example, in ancient China, especially in the Tang Period, a woman with obese plumpy figure was a symbol of beauty and indicated that she is a young lady of a wealthy family; whilst a thin girl can only be identified as a servant. Also if a society whose people are all wearing old patched clothes, there might be somewhat poverty for all the people in such a country which formed people to some extent can be called a good habit of frugal frugality. However, such cases are unfairly generalized the whole society’s ideas or values 主被动没看明白. 好例子，不过没亮观点

In a contemporary society, the way people look, dress, and act are becoming increasingly similar. Accompany with the globalization penetrating into every country, myriads of distinct culture differences have becomes vague. For instance, shyness hmay be a characteristic for a traditional Chinese girl; however, a growing number of children today are pursuing the individualism which characterized western country. The same is when concerning about the wearing today, people are no more restricted to some principles which there may not have one for a democratic country, whilst wear what they are prefer according to the climate. To some extent, people around world are of the same taste of clothes for the chase of popularity is heating around world. Beside this, the escalating expands of some famous brands of clothes companies bring about the popular clothes which everyone can be bought nearly in every country. In the respect of behavior: in the ancient times, take western behaviors as example, men were required to be genteel, and women were asked to be as inwardly as possible. While, now it is not a strange to see a woman stride into an official room or a man behavior rudely which one cannot image.

Although the appearance may not be that distinct as before, the symbols of the valuable culture, such as the costume of minority in China, have always been cherished as the emblem of one’s unique culture. Even now every time the country convokes a conference of the delegation from minority, 56 different minorities with colorful distinct costumes can be saw in the palace of Tiananmen. The same pageantry？ scene can be found when a national traditional festival began. Form this we can see that even though the tradition has still existed in the world, they now belied by the veil of the impact of other main behavior or clothes rather than show them outwards.

In sum, it is difficult to recognize one's attitude and interest of him or her from their look, dress and act, and it will be harder for us to identify his or her society's ideas and values nowadays. In much more cases, people’s appearances and behaviors are result in individual’s preference rather than reflect a society’s value or idea.

应该说文字上有不少的小问题，思路没有完全拉开，行动一点基本没有涉及，也未谈到交流是了解别人这一点。我限时写作也是这样，平时蛮有思路的到一看时间就乱糟糟的。

我的Issue127 帮忙看看吧
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=319785

vickycy6UID：2107893

pageantry？ scene   这个我是想说壮观的景象

为什么还要谈交流？？　

写这文章还是我第一次限时，实在惭愧，这还是改过的．．．
真是写得我都要哭了．．．

努力！

安卓美达UID：2101780

交流能深刻了解人attitudes and interests，补充这样一个方面可以使文章充实一点啦

vickycy6UID：2107893

你是指通过这方面可以来断定value
就不是针对这个题目说的看这些行为能不能．？

vickycy6UID：2107893

就说是另起一主题？

安卓美达UID：2101780

差不多是这个意思，就是说给出作者的补充建议。单单从正面回应主题有点难写，当然时间不够的话就不必铺的太开了。

fishyaoUID：2119100

Can the way people look, dress, and act reveal their attitudes or interests? From observing the appearance and behavior of its people, can we grasp a society's ideas or values, as the speaker contends? In my view, this is a case-by-case problem, may be there are indeed some aspects that can these be true, however, in contemporary society such cases becomes rare.

I concede that in a few cases we can be informed of some information about one's background. For example, in ancient China, especially in the Tang Period, a woman with obese figure was a symbol of beauty and indicated that she is a young lady of a wealthy family; whilst a thin girl can only be identified as a servant. Also if a society whose people are all wearing old patched clothes, there might be somewhat poverty for all the people in such a country or that a country which to some extent can be called a good habit of frugal. However, such cases can not be unfairly generalized the whole society’s ideas or values.（病句吧）

（建议直接出转折词，使文章结构看上去清楚）In contemporary society, the way people look, dress, and act are becoming increasingly similar. Accompany with the globalization penetrating into every country, myriads of distinct culture differences have becomes vague. For instance, shyness may be a characteristic for a traditional Chinese girl; however, a growing number of children today are pursuing the individualism which characterized western country. The same is when concerning about the wearing today, people are no more restricted to some principles which there may not have one for a democratic country, whilst wear what they are prefer according to the climate. To some extent, people around world are of the same taste of clothes for the chase of popularity is heating around world. Beside this, the escalating expands of some famous brands of clothes companies bring about the popular clothes which everyone can be bought nearly in every country. In the respect of behavior: in the ancient times, take western behaviors as example, men were required to be genteel, and women were asked to be as inwardly as possible. While, now it is not a strange to see a woman stride into an official room or a man behavior rudely which one cannot image.

Although the appearance may not be that distinct as before, the symbols of the valuable culture, such as the costume of minority in China, have always been cherished as the emblem of one’s unique culture. Even now every time the country convokes a conference of the delegation from minority, 56 different minorities with colorful distinct costumes can be saw in the palace of Tiananmen. The same pageantry scene can be found when a national traditional festival began. Form this we can see that even though the tradition has still existed in the world, they now belied by the veil of the impact of other main behavior or clothes rather than show them outwards.

In sum, it is difficult to recognize one's attitude and interest of him or her from their look, dress and act, and it will be harder for us to identify his or her society's ideas and values nowadays. In much more cases, people’s appearances and behaviors are result in individual’s preference rather than reflect a society’s value or idea.
从文章的中心句来看，however, in contemporary society such cases becomes rare.，反面写法应该才是展开的重点所在，可是从文章上来看，对正面叙述比重太大，反面说的就显得比较弱。我觉得应该把反面观点分开两段写，压缩倒数第二段(Although那一段)。这样会比较好。

我的文章明天贴上来，到时候还麻烦帮我看看。

fishyaoUID：2119100

Can the way people look, dress, and act reveal their attitudes or interests? From observing the appearance and behavior of its people, can we grasp a society's ideas or values, as the speaker contends? In my view, this is a case-by-case problem, may be there are indeed some aspects that can these be true, however, in contemporary society such cases becomes rare.

I concede that in a few cases we can be informed of some information about one's background. For example, in ancient China, especially in the Tang Period, a woman with obese figure was a symbol of beauty and indicated that she is a young lady of a wealthy family; whilst a thin girl can only be identified as a servant. Also if a society whose people are all wearing old patched clothes, there might be somewhat poverty for all the people in such a country or that a country which to some extent can be called a good habit of frugal. However, such cases can not be unfairly generalized the whole society’s ideas or values.（病句吧）

（建议直接出转折词，使文章结构看上去清楚）In contemporary society, the way people look, dress, and act are becoming increasingly similar. Accompany with the globalization penetrating into every country, myriads of distinct culture differences have becomes vague. For instance, shyness may be a characteristic for a traditional Chinese girl; however, a growing number of children today are pursuing the individualism which characterized western country. The same is when concerning about the wearing today, people are no more restricted to some principles which there may not have one for a democratic country, whilst wear what they are prefer according to the climate. To some extent, people around world are of the same taste of clothes for the chase of popularity is heating around world. Beside this, the escalating expands of some famous brands of clothes companies bring about the popular clothes which everyone can be bought nearly in every country. In the respect of behavior: in the ancient times, take western behaviors as example, men were required to be genteel, and women were asked to be as inwardly as possible. While, now it is not a strange to see a woman stride into an official room or a man behavior rudely which one cannot image.

Although the appearance may not be that distinct as before, the symbols of the valuable culture, such as the costume of minority in China, have always been cherished as the emblem of one’s unique culture. Even now every time the country convokes a conference of the delegation from minority, 56 different minorities with colorful distinct costumes can be saw in the palace of Tiananmen. The same pageantry scene can be found when a national traditional festival began. Form this we can see that even though the tradition has still existed in the world, they now belied by the veil of the impact of other main behavior or clothes rather than show them outwards.

In sum, it is difficult to recognize one's attitude and interest of him or her from their look, dress and act, and it will be harder for us to identify his or her society's ideas and values nowadays. In much more cases, people’s appearances and behaviors are result in individual’s preference rather than reflect a society’s value or idea.
从文章的中心句来看，however, in contemporary society such cases becomes rare.，反面写法应该才是展开的重点所在，可是从文章上来看，对正面叙述比重太大，反面说的就显得比较弱。我觉得应该把反面观点分开两段写，压缩倒数第二段(Although那一段)。这样会比较好。

vickycy6UID：2107893

我发现可能是我写的有问题，理解错了...
你明天写完贴过来吧
另外,这个可能还是支持比较好