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2011.1.1 独立写作.

2010年1月1日 周六：

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09.09.12

Some people think children should study and play. Others think they should help with household chores. What do you think?

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2010年1月3日 周一：3 k) j0 K1 P" \- y& _9 I. y
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09.12.12

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents cannot understand children today as the parents understood children 50 years ago.

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2010年1月4日 周二：- U& E6 u) [& x+ |9 U
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09.05.09NA
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to become a financially responsible adult, people should be taught how to manage money at an early age.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents cannot understand children today as the parents understood children 50 years ago

From the television and internet, we often see reports about bad relationships between family members. Parents complain about the wired? behaviors of their childchildren, and on the other side, the children also criticize the ridgedrigid rules and constrictrestriction from the parents. However, this is only some extremely scene taking place in modern Chinese families. In my mind, the relationship between parents and children are much better thatthan that in 50 year ago.

Nowadays, the development of technology makes a fairfairly benignpositive affecteffect on the parent children relationship.the relationship between parents and children. After the invention of television and Internet, we reach to new concept and knowledge in a much faster ways than ever before. We can incept the new concepts and knowledge much faster than ever before.50 years ago, when our father and mother parents were still young, they also complain complained about the misunderstandings of their parents.between our grandparents and them. It is a pity that this kind of relationship between them could last lasted for a long time even after them our parents grew up because our grandfather and grandmother grandparents(单复数不宜统一，所以直接用parents) did not have any way to删掉access to the frontier latest news and knowledge (个人觉得太重复了)information in this world. However, this the situation is very quite different now. Take my family asfor an example, I used spent only a week to teach my parents how to use internet last semester, thus these days we only(删掉)
chat with each other in on the internet though MSN instead of making phone calls. We talk to each other more and knowsknow each other more. Moreover, My father often send sends me plenty of interesting video videos
and pictures he found collects in on the internet web-site forums and I also taught teach he him how to play counter strike and start craft this year. There is no doubt that
we are not only son of our parents but also good friends.they are my good friends rather than my parents. In the century eraof Information and technology, unlike the old waysdays in 50 years ago, the gap between parents and children is much smaller than before as if we have enough patient patience
to tell our parents what we do and what we think.

Furthermore, even the meaning of understanding also experience changes big enough. Great changes.Not only because the tradition is changing due to the "smaller" earth in the 21st century but also we are better educated in this peaceful prosper era.properous society 50 years ago, as far as my father knows, the senor?of understanding in Chinese family is the children; the young have to obey everything the older says.时态 My father gave up his study from 18 to 22 in his eighteen years old to join the army under the order of my grandfather. Although he had another chance to go to college when he was 22, this is wasstill a an unforgettable bad memory for him. Nowadays, the children matures mature
much earlier than before because we learn much more when we was young than the old time and the word “independent” already became becomes the a new way of understanding between family members. I have the freedom to choose which school I want to attend, which country I want to live in the future and what kind of girl friend I’d like to live with fall in love with. Also, the parents trust the children more. They believes that they can live on their own even we they still young. There is already not that much ridged rules and restrictions like the old traditional families.


So to sum up, in the 21st century the parents understand more of our children their children much more
than 50 years before.ago Both the children and the parents are changing themselves in an amazing speed. Parents know more and learn more than before thus the gap between parents and children are much smaller. Furthermore, the parents also take new ways to stay with their children. They changed has changed the attitudes and ways of thinking. Therefore, I think the parents nowadays understand more of children than 50 years ago.

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2010年1月5日 周三：8 J9 Q' o5 y2 p5 w) A$ a: T
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09.11.8NA
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Government should pay more attention to health care issues than to environmental issues.  C' l#

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不好意思，昨天网络有问题，现在才改好。

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今天没有时间了，明天一早帮你改哈~~~

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2010年1月6日 周四：
独立：

09.9.26
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Modern society has become more complex, so it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to become a financially responsible adult, people should be taught how to manage money at an early age.

People often see boys and girls in TV shows or commercials have the ability to dance, sing, playing play piano or guitar at their early age, say 3 or 4 years old.可删掉 These skills mentioned above used to be the regular common topic between among parents that our children have to learn or should learn before a certain age. Ironically, seldom any of these skills seem to have anything to do with what they do when grown up. Parents usually fail to take into another capacity take another capacity into consideration that
which is especially important for adolescence or adults, that is the ability of money management. I have to say the skill of money management is not only crucial for our children especially in the 21st century but also should be taught to the kids as early as possible.逻辑有点问题

Admittedly, devil and innate sin as we money ? is, it is also undeniable that it's one significant aspect to decide which university we will attend, what kind of people we meet, who we would possible get married in the future and so forth.还是觉得逻辑有点问题
Important as it is, it's very necessary to build the sense of finance in early childhood when we learnt everything fast and were curious about everything this world.觉得这里还是应该用一般时态 One of my neighbors Miss Zhang gives similar lessons to his child bob Bob at his early age, say saying before 6 years old. At the same time, bob was asked to help doing housework in his family and was paid salary whenever he could. Not only that he was very proud of his self-earned pocket money when we was young, but also he now works at a famous investment bank Morgan Stanley after graduated from college.这里用not only…but also…好像不太合适，就直接用and吧

Besides from the sense of independence created from the money management, we are also able to experience how hard the life could be, or how we should be prepared for our future life from money management. There is a strange phenomenon after the "One child only" policy carried out in the early 1980s in the mainland of China. Since the children was usually spoiled in their early childhood for they are the only son or daughter in the family, some of them even refused to go to work after graduation and stay at home all day along to play computer games.时态 The phenomenon that they complains about how hard the work is and how hard it is to live with such low salary mostly result from lack of sense of managing money before they entered the society.

Therefore, to sum up, as money is very important in every aspect of our future, and plays a positive role after we grew up till the end of our life.时态 It is very necessary to build up the sense of money management in the early age of childhood when we learn everything fast and are receptive to everything new.


不好意思，一月四号的，现在才改好，今天白天家里一直没电

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已修改，qq上发给你

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咱一组。
我偏题了。= =