Daily Writing Camp--ansr3

ansr3UID: 2943972

11.18  开始加入作文互改，第一天不了解规则，晚一点交。

100619NA If you need to discuss upsetting or controversial problems with others, you will use e-mail or text messaging, or use the telephone or voice-messaging.

The telephone or voice-messaging is a much more efficient method to communicate with others, than e-mail or text messaging, not to mention that it makes you feel so real like face to face talking. However, it is far from a good choice when you discuss upsetting or controversial problems, partly because, according to some research, humans could not listen to others carefully and objectively, and express their own opinion under the circumstance of arguing something.

Talking with others is a process that combines voice, eye contact, and even body languages, etc. The telephone or voice-messaging, unlike face-to-face talking or video, without eye contacts and body languages often leads to misunderstanding. Especially when we are discuss upsetting or controversial problems with others, the most important things are careful listening and clear expression. But without the message from eye contact and body languages, hardly can we understand others and express ourselves precisely. If we have misunderstood each other, what we discuss for? Maybe when we talk later, we would find that we are in line with each other.

In light of the disadvantages of the use of telephone or voice-messaging mentioned above, e-mail or text messaging should be a positive alternative. Because when we the telephone or voice-messaging, we just talk as we do face-to-face, missing much other information from eyes and body. However, when we use e-mail or text messaging, we express ourselves more like writing an article. Written words can be more accurate. What' more, we can read it over and over to ensure if we express what we really mean clearly. And also make sure that we have got what others mean. Only in the way can we have a efficient discussion.

Therefore, discussing in written words is a better way rather than in voice. Not only it can be carefully written without missing any message, but also it enables us to check the meaning of the text again.

Fenjuan.HuUID: 3104413

谢谢你及时修改我的作文。我今天改了很多篇，所以迟了。呵呵。。。加油哦。

liang0603UID: 3182007

第一次就这么好~真羡慕~我写这篇时候，没有理由，各种编

ansr3UID: 2943972

很抱歉，昨天写完宿舍断网了，早上才来。

ansr3UID: 2943972

3# liang0603 误会误会， 我是说第一 次参加互改，作文可不是第一次写了。考过2次g，3次t啊:dizzy: 这次作文必须25+了，不然赶不上申请了。

Fenjuan.HuUID: 3104413

嘿，非常感谢你昨天作文的建议。是我参加小组活动以来获益最大的一次。:loveliness:

Fenjuan.HuUID: 3104413

我刚刚才看到你的回帖。我发不了短消息。昨天我也写了。在我的帖子里。你的也贴上来吧。咱们改一下

Fenjuan.HuUID: 3104413

嘿，一如既往的佩服。没想到我们写得时同一篇。你跟我说你写小马机经那篇的时候，我已经写好了。太巧了。呵呵
这几天不见你参加小组了，咋回事儿啊？呵呵。。你是26号考？

Fenjuan.HuUID: 3104413

嘿，你是今天考的吧。有没有考到咱们两互相改的那篇？我就是那篇，working at home。太幸运了，来跟你握个抓。。。。嘿嘿