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发表于 2009-12-24 09:20:13 |显示全部楼层
The reading passage lists the advantages of four-day work week. By challenging the statement in the reading passages, the professor listing contradictory reasons to the reading.

First, in the reading, some may think the method would increase the profits of the company. The professor refute the statement by explain that the method may forced the company to spend more. Adding new workers means putting much money into providing trading and medical benefits. It also requires more office spaces and more computers. These additional fees cut into company’s profits.

Second, in the reading, some may believe the method would improve economy conditions by create more jobs. In the lecture, the professor pointed out that the company may ask their employees to work overtime to make up the difference. Companies may even ask their four day employees finish the same work they used to do five days. If these happened, no addition job would be created.

Finally, in the reading, it is considered that the method would improve the lives of the employees. The professor argue that the method would decrease the quality of the employees. Because it may decrease their jobs possibility and their chances for advancing their work careers.

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发表于 2009-12-27 13:05:23 |显示全部楼层
The reading passage lists the advantages of four-day work week. By challenging the statement in the reading passages, the professor listing contradictory reasons to the reading.

First, in the reading, some may think the method would increase the profits of the company. The professor refutes the statement by explain that the method may forced the company to spend more (). 感觉应该加个词  Adding new workers means putting much money into providing trading 应该是 training ?and medical benefits. It also requires more office spaces and more computers. These additional fees cut into company’s profits.
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Second, in the reading, some may believe the method would improve economy conditions by create more jobs. In the lecture, the professor pointed out that the company may ask their employees to work overtime to make up the difference. Companies may even ask their four day employees finish the same work they used to do in 应该加吧five days. If these happened, no addition(additional) job would be created.
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Finally, in the reading, it is considered that the method would improve the lives of the employees. The professor argue that the method would decrease the quality of the employees. 有问题哦。Because it may decrease their jobs possibility and their chances for advancing their work careers.

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发表于 2009-12-27 13:06:43 |显示全部楼层
想问一下 你写 一篇 综合要多久,我第一次写,多用了10分钟

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