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TOPIC: ISSUE103 - "The study of history has value only to the extent that it is relevant to our daily lives."

The speaker alleges that studying history is valuable only insofar as it is relevant to our daily life. However, I think this allegation is specious. It is wrongly suggest that there is not another instructor expect being relevant our daily life in the field of history. To the country, studying history is inspiring,
innumerable lessons for living, all of which help us decide how to lead our lives.

As we know, studying history can help us recognize our current location in the map of the history. History is always repeating again and again. Through analyzing the similar between nowadays and the past, we can learn various lessons. For example, the lessons learned in the past of wars can help us avoid the similar condition in the modern society life and make a better relationship between others. From the ancient Chinese author Sun Tzu's book "The Art of War", today's military commanders and even business leaders gather valuable information that allows them to operate more efficiently and effectively. The study of this type of history has a value beyond the daily lives of people. It can lead to a military victory or the success of a business that directly affects what happens in the future, including the futures of those that are possibly not even born yet.

Otherwise, studying the history has many other advantages as well as their contributions to our daily lives. The first , it is helpful to our political lives especially to those politicians on power. They can learn and concern many things from history. From the insurgence, they will know that it is dangerous to put heavy taxes to the public and the policy must be fit to the trend of time and meet the most people's interests. From other countries or nations success in society's stability, the politicians will also perceive the secret of the theory of progress of society and do not exert any methods to hinder it. Next, the same is true to economists who can study forerunners' achievements in nations' economy. Successful economic prosperity is like a mirror to them and from studying the history of that, our economists are more confident to push our society to a wonderful situation. Last but not least, history is also priceless for civilization for it is the boat of our gems in minds and thoughts. Every generation has its own treasures and they all be provided to the chain of our civilization history. That means from learning history, we will touch the true elite of the whole human's thoughts and become mentally powerful .at the same time, we also know the responsibity of continuing this imposing transmission to our scions from the history.
at last, history consists knowledge as much as we can imagine because to some extent out subjects such as mathematics, physics, chemical and psychology as well are all the condense of our historical knowledge. so we can say that when we learn any knowledge today, it is owing to the history of forebears' experience. Thus history is full of our lives and we are nurtured by it instinctively or not.
To be frank, history comprises something priceless such as wars, disasters and conflictions. However sometimes just because of these mishaps push ourselves to further study history to avoid same tragedies to happen again and it is also our another responsibility.
There are many other examples to support the various value of studying history, but i reckon these points will suffice. From the discussion above, we can safely draw a conclusion that history has its far-reaching influence and stand a momentous position in not only our daily lives but also our social lives .so it is unsuitable to say that studying history had value only when it is relevant to our lives.

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The speaker alleges that studying history is valuable only insofar as it is relevant to our daily life. However, I think this allegation is specious. It is wrongly suggest that there is not another instructor expect being relevant our daily life in the field of history. To the country, studying history is inspiring, innumerable lessons for living, all of which help us decide how to lead our lives.(only 的题目感觉观点有点偏题了,only是一个限制条件,其实重点是value不是how to
attain this value而是study history 是不是有value, 然后value是不是局限在和今天有关的历史学习上面)

As we know, studying history can help us recognize our current location in the map of the history. History is always repeating(repeated) again and again. Through analyzing the similar between nowadays and the past,(用today and yesterday更好,现在和过去你这么说感觉很中国化) we can learn various lessons(experience). For example, the lessons learned in the past of wars can help us avoid the similar condition in the modern society life and make a better relationship between others. From the ancient Chinese author Sun Tzu's book "The Art of War", today's military commanders and even business leaders gather valuable information that allows them to operate more efficiently and effectively. The study of this type of history has a value beyond the daily lives of people. It can lead to a military victory or the success of a business that directly affects what happens in the future, including the futures of those that are possibly not even born yet. (孙子兵法叫”Art of war”你这个有考证吗?确定是这个词?你的这个分观点其实很抽象,current location in the map of history 我明白你的意思,但是老外可能不懂,具体要怎么表达,我也不清楚,这个群里可以讨论下.)

Otherwise, studying the history has many other advantages as well as their contributions to our daily lives. The first , it is helpful to our political lives especially to those politicians on power. They can learn and concern many things from history. From the insurgence, they will know that it is dangerous to put heavy taxes to the public and the policy must be fit to the trend of time and meet the most people's interests. From other countries or nations success in society's stability, the politicians will also perceive the secret of the theory of progress of society and do not exert any methods to hinder it. Next, the same is true to economists who can study forerunners' achievements in nations' economy. Successful economic prosperity is like a mirror to them and from studying the history of that, our economists are more confident to push our society to a wonderful situation. Last but not least, history is also priceless for civilization for it is the boat of our gems in minds and thoughts. Every generation has its own treasures and they all be provided to the chain of our civilization history. That means from learning history, we will touch the true elite of the whole human's thoughts and become mentally powerful .at the same time, we also know the responsibity(拼写) of continuing this imposing transmission to our scions from the history.
at(At) last, history consists knowledge as much as we can imagine because to some extent out subjects such as mathematics, physics, chemical and psychology as well are all the condense of our historical knowledge. so we can say that when we learn any knowledge today, it is owing to the history of forebears' experience. Thus history is full of our lives and we are nurtured by it instinctively or not.
To be frank, history comprises something priceless such as wars, disasters and conflictions. However sometimes just because of these mishaps push ourselves to further study history to avoid same tragedies to happen again and it is also our another responsibility.(感觉这段没有什么说服力)
There are many other examples to support the various value of studying history, but i(大小写) reckon these points will suffice. From the discussion above, we can safely draw a conclusion that history has its far-reaching influence and stand a momentous position in not only our daily lives but also our social lives .so it is unsuitable to say that studying history had value only when it is relevant to our lives.

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current location in the map of history 是我从北美范文中提出来的，原文是
First of all, to study history is to look at a road map of human behavior that has led us to where we are today in the world.
所以，我觉得老外应该是可以理解的，除非这篇北美范文是中国人写的

孙子兵法叫”the Art of war”   


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The Art of War
The beginning of The Art of War, in a "classical" bamboo book from the reign of the Qianlong Emperor.
Author	Sun Tzu
Genre(s)	military treatise
Publication date	unknown, ca. 6th century BC
ISBN	NA

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The Art of War
Traditional Chinese	孫子兵法
Simplified Chinese	孙子兵法
Hanyu Pinyin	Sūnzĭ Bīngfǎ
Literal meaning	Sun Tzu's Military Principles
[show]Transliterations Mandarin - Hanyu Pinyin Sūnzĭ Bīngfǎ - Wade–Giles sun1 zi3 ping1 fa3 Wu - Romanization sen tsy pin fah Cantonese - Jyutping syun1 zi2 bing1 faat3

The Art of War (Chinese: 孫子兵法; pinyin: Sūnzǐ Bīngfǎ) is a Chinese military treatise that was written by Sun Tzu in the 6th century BC, during the Spring and Autumn period. (Some scholars believe it was written during the later Warring States period.[1]) Composed of 13 chapters, each of which is devoted to one aspect of warfare, it is said to be the definitive work on military strategies and tactics of its time, and still one of the basic texts.
The Art of War is one of the oldest and most successful books on military strategy. It has had an influence on Eastern military thinking, business tactics, and beyond. Sun Tzu suggested the importance of positioning in strategy and that position is affected both by objective conditions in the physical environment and the subjective opinions of competitive actors in that environment. He thought that strategy was not planning in the sense of working through an established list, but rather that it requires quick and appropriate responses to changing conditions. Planning works in a controlled environment, but in a changing environment, competing plans collide, creating unexpected situations.
The book was translated into the French language in 1772 by French Jesuit Jean Joseph Marie Amiot, and into English by British officer Everard Ferguson Calthrop in 1905. Leaders as diverse as Mao Zedong, General Vo Nguyen Giap, Baron Antoine-Henri Jomini, and General Douglas MacArthur have claimed to have drawn inspiration from the work. The Art of War has also been applied to business and managerial strategies.[2][3]