不东的作文贴，求拍

shouyeeUID: 2774695

8月24日作业，下手千万别手软:loveliness:

Never Too Late to Find True Love

Nowadays, so hot is the debate that whether or not youngsters could try different kinds of jobs until they finally get a real long career that we may find ourselves surrounded by a great many people asserting that this phenomenon brings harmful effects to the new graduate students. Some others, however, hold totally opposite opinion. As for them, it is never too late to find one’s true love, then devote the rest of life to it. When it comes to me, I do agree with latter view.

Several reasons can demonstrate my opinion. First and foremost, young people have little knowledge about their own future, like what to do, where to live, etc. all these leading to the situations that they are not sure with their real strength and the current jobs suiting their strength. Once they have experienced a few jobs, they would make thoughtful decisions about future careers. As a result, changing a variety of work before one find his own career do benefit to him in the life long perspective.

Moreover, different jobs require diverse knowledge, which can give young graduate chances to learn a great deal of new skills. For example, one man may take chemistry as his major in university, but then found a job in a big logistics company as a hazardous goods specialist, and finally got a marketing-related position in a big food firm. So he can conquer chemistry, logistics and nutrition, even marketing knowledge during his studying and working. So jobs in various fields do open fundamentally new doors to people.

Controversially, if one happened to choose a job soon after he get into the society, maybe a teacher, but not long since then, he finds himself hard been understood and nervous to speak in front of group of people. But he is fond of researches and enjoys indulging himself in doing experiment. At this point, whether he should persist to the job that annoys both him and his students or change it to do researches in labs? The answer is obvious.

Due to all these reasons, I stand for the unshakable believing that it is all right to try a few jobs before one find his/her true interest in and it can never be too late to start one’s career.

mrescUID: 2869511

怎么是这个作文题？

shouyeeUID: 2774695

貌似写成24号的作业了，那麻烦你改这个吧:) 2# mresc

lzj1209UID: 2806356

独立写作需要写【题目】？
迷茫了~哪位指点一下

shouyeeUID: 2774695

高人，难道不用写题目吗？这个问题我还真没想过。。。。求指点 4# lzj1209

mrescUID: 2869511

3# shouyee
Nowadays, so hot is the debate that whether or not youngsters could try different kinds of jobs until they finally get a real long career that we may find ourselves surrounded by a great many people asserting that this phenomenon brings harmful effects to the new graduate students. Some others, however, hold totally opposite opinion. As for them, it is never too late to find one’s true love, and then devote the rest of life to it. When it comes to me, I do agree with latter view.6 B' y6 d) na6
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Moreover, different jobs require diverse knowledge, which can give young graduate chances to learn a great deal of new skills. For example, one man may take chemistry as his major in university, but then found a job in a big logistics company as a hazardous goods specialist, and finally got a marketing-related position in a big food firm. So he can conquer chemistry, logistics and nutrition, even marketing knowledge during his studying and working. So jobs in various fields do open fundamentally new doors to people.简练 很好
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Controversially, if one happened to choose a job soon after he get into the society, maybe a teacher, but not long since then, he finds himself hard been understood and nervous to speak in front of group of people. But he is fond of researches and enjoys indulging himself in doing experiment. At this point, whether he should persist to the job that annoys both him and his students or change it to do researches in labs? The answer is obvious.加一句结论最好，此段可以接在第二段后写
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Due to all these reasons, I stand for the unshakable believing that it is all right to try a few jobs before one find his/her true interest 与第三段联系不紧密in and it can never be too late to start one’s career.

mrescUID: 2869511

6# mresc

lzj1209UID: 2806356

高人，难道不用写题目吗？这个问题我还真没想过。。。。求指点 4# lzj1209
shouyee 发表于 2010-8-22 21:31

真要写题目啊？

binghuoshenlongUID: 2670882

不错 请回拍

shouyeeUID: 2774695

交26日作业啦，大家多多赐教哈。:lol


(09.02.21 NA) Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Newspapers and magazines are the best ways to learn about a foreign country？

As with the rapid development of information technology, people may find themselves surrounded by enormous trends of various information, newspapers, magazines and other published media, especially the Internet. Therefore, man in this information age has greater access to outer world than ever before, leading to a hot debate whether newspapers and magazines, all paper works, are the best kind of transformer to let one country’s folks learn about another country. Some tend to agree with this opinion, for paper media have long been the main format of information delivery. But many young people do hold different views, addressing that nowadays the Internet conquer the mass media world by its incomparable advances in fast sharing and easy accessible. When it comes to me, I have the same opinion with the latter one.

Several reasons can explain my opinion. First and foremost, newspapers and magazines are time-delayed for they need to be published after printed and distributed. For example, suggest a strike happened in industry park in Japan, then China presented journalists who located in Osaka took a journey to there for about 2 hours, finished interviewing and writing the report in 3 hours, send it to Shanghai office, and the editors went with the following process like editing or rewriting some sentences, finally the report would be sent to printing factory and come out in the next day’s newspaper, all of which takes at least 24 hours when readers. Controversially, if it is done by a Internet company, journalists went to the scene in 2 hours, wrote the report within3 hours then put it on the Internet, and readers would be able to see it. All these process were finished in less than 6 hours, almost 18 hours shorter than the tradition media types.

Secondly, Internet means a more reachable platform to discuss an issue from diverse aspects, which newspapers or magazines cannot give their readers. It is free to be speak out one’s view when other don’t get his personal information, never need to mind whether this words will bring some awesome outcomes.
Forums and a great many same-time communities become more and more popular these days, which make it possible that people could talk about the latest problems or unsatisfactory of the authority together, and consequently may contribute to real democracy. Nevertheless, the foreigners can get the authentic knowledge from these kinds of forums to have deep known about this country. Taking youtube and twitter for examples,  people all over the world share their own daily life and news on them, to make themselves connected with the outside world.

What’s more, newspapers or magazines definitely contrast to the low carbon concept, which means they are not as environmentally friendly as E-media. All these published products made from wood, leading to trees being cut-down and desert coming out. As a result, all paper used media should be less for the sake of the world-wide low carbon life style.

In conclusion, it is an unshakable fact that tradition methods of media, like newspapers or magazines, are no longer the best way to let people in different countries get informed of what happen in other countries when compared to the speed advanced and resources saving Internet in information delivery.

shouyeeUID: 2774695

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A job with more vacation time but a low salary is better than a job with a high salary but less vacation time.

As the development of technology, man has been liberated from the intensified labor position and pays much more attention to enjoy his life than decades of years before. Therefore, it is general that people find themselves surrounded by a lot annoyance that whether to choose a job with less vacation but higher pay or one with more vacation time but less pay.

When it comes to me, I would truly tend to get a job which balance working well with leisure, not too busy handling endless documentation and little overtime, which ensures plenty of private time available at the employee’s disposal. Several reasons can demonstrate my opinion. First and foremost, life is not all about money or physical materials, though essential. Take the following situation for example. Imagine a man, occupied with numerous cases, has little time for his beloved wife and little baby. He cannot have a chance to drive the little child school or attend parents meeting, miss all the happy time to share the cherish memory of baby’s growing up with his family. If he chooses a job with more vacation time, he can gain all that pleasure.

What’s more, high salary really doesn’t guarantee happiness and health, both metal and physical. In recent years, many celebrities’ suicide or die of overworking cause the whole society’s concern. Every now and then, news about Korean actors or actress appears on media, leading people around the world take stress from daily work into serious account. Higher salary, in most cases, equates little rest and high pace lifestyle, consequently, leaving awesome effects on people’s metal  & physical health.

Thirdly, more vacation time gives employees chances to relax themselves from stressful work, recharge themselves after a lasting period of working and refresh themselves, all of which contribute to a totally new attitude to next section’s work. As a result, frequent breaks from work lead to work efficiency and effectiveness, which in turn makes the staff flow rate low and operation team stable. Nevertheless, vacation time does benefit companies and employees.

In conclusion, I prefer the view that a job with more free personal time to a job with little break, though may have lower salary. It is an unshakable opinion that this kind of jobs does bring people high quality lifestyle and an enjoyable family life.

zjlkg2005UID: 2825578

托福作文不需要題目的。

zjlkg2005UID: 2825578

What’s more, high salary really doesn’t guarantee happiness and health, both metal and physical.

mental  不是metal

楼主的作文不错啊  是英文系的？

lizhengjiangUID: 2619543

不好意思，最近比较忙。

改的比较迟了。。呵呵