Issue103 较高频题，从今到8.3开始一天一篇I一篇A，觅拍友。

edgarluUID: 203648

Issue103
The study of history has value only to the extent that it is relevant to our daily lives.

Outlines:
What’s the main purpose of history researches? Is it to put the research results into use in some way? No, if you ask a historian, he/she would tell you that the ultimate goal of their career is the history itself, because a clear well-established history iitself is an invaluable treasure to the whole human species.
Even In terms of the practical use of the history study, it contributes to more than our everyday life.
Admittedly, when it comes to the life-related application of history researches, it always benefits us in a more direct and obvious way.

Title:
The study of history influences our daily lives in a lot of ways. Basically, it can tell us by experience that what better not to do and what better to do now. But is it the only way that history researches could have any value? I would say no for all the explanations below.

Answer this question first: What's the main purpose of history researches? Is it to put the research results into use in some way? No, if you ask a historian, he/she would tell you that the ultimate goal of their career is the history itself, because a clear well-established history itself is an invaluable treasure to the whole human species. History represents the curiosity of us to the past of human being, but it's not just a satisfaction to curiosity but also a vital part of culture. By studying its history, a nation could take a clearer look at all the glory and failures their ancestors made before, which is for the contemporary generation to take lessons and strength from. On the other hand, history is a close friend of almost all the fields that have a history of their own: art, literature, politics, sociology, and so on. Without knowing about the origin and the process to evolve to the current achievement, participants of those fields would have no way to have a thorough and accurate understanding to what they are doing. Thus, there is no need to prove the quality and value of history because "this baby sells itself".

Even In terms of the practical use of the history study, it contributes to more than our everyday life. This is obviously in the academic areas. Some disciplines seemingly have nothing to do with our daily life, such as geology or astronomy. Actually, there is no such "useless discipline" in the world. For example, when the earthquake occurs officials would ask geologists for rescue, when there is a risk of meteor collision with Earth astronomers are on the headline. They are going to influence our lives soon or later, more or less. As we've mentioned above, history rules them all: without history data for reference, a astronomy would be no more than a telescope fan, and geologists would spend their whole lives living in the mountains or canyons looking for layers. Although sometimes we can't feel its impact in our daily lives, the value of history is always hidden deep inside.

Admittedly, when it comes to the life-related application of history researches, it always benefits us in a more direct and obvious way. The first example brought up into my mind is its advantages to economy. By analyzing the history economic data, economists could figure out patterns of economy development and forecast the trend of economy so that abnormal economy situation, overheatedness for instance, could be corrected or improved in time. Has this work not been done the Great Depression would have been repeated again and again. Thanks to all the history records, people can get jobs and make a livings. What else could be more relevant to our daily lives?

To sum up, although its impact on the social daily lives is tremendous, the study of history has value to other extents too. Most importantly, the value of history doesn't need any media to present as it stands for  one third of the entire world: the past.

[ Last edited by edgarlu on 2005-7-15 at 11:24 ]

zjcq2002UID: 2113577

The study of history influences our daily lives in a lot of ways. Basically, it can tell us by experience that what better not to do and what better to do now[缺谓语]. But is it the only way that history researches could have any value? I would say no for all the explanations below.

Answer this question first: What's the main purpose of history researches? Is it to put the research results into use in some way? No, if you ask a historian, he/she would tell you that the ultimate goal of their career is the history itself, because a clear well-established history itself is an invaluable treasure to the whole human species. History represents the curiosity of us to the past of human being, but it's not just a satisfaction to curiosity but also a vital part of culture. By studying its history, a nation could take a clearer look at all the glory and failures their ancestors made before, which is for the contemporary generation to take lessons and strength from. On the other hand, history is a close friend of almost all the fields that have a history of their own: art, literature, politics, sociology, and so on. Without knowing about the origin and the process to evolve to the current achievement, participants of those fields would have no way to have a thorough and accurate understanding to what they are doing. Thus, there is no need to prove the quality and value of history because "this baby sells itself"[这一句是什么意思呀，有这种写法吗？可能我孤陋寡闻吧，不过如果是引用的名言，最好把作者名字加上].

Even In terms of the practical use of the history study, it contributes to more than our everyday life. This is obviously in the academic areas. Some disciplines seemingly have nothing to do with our daily life, such as geology or astronomy. Actually, there is no such "useless discipline" in the world. For example, when the earthquake occurs officials would ask geologists for rescue, when there is a risk of meteor collision with Earth astronomers are on the headline. They are going to influence our lives soon or later, more or less. As we've mentioned above, history rules them all: without history data for reference, a astronomy would be no more than a telescope fan, and geologists would spend their whole lives living in the mountains or canyons looking for layers. Although sometimes we can't feel its impact in our daily lives, the value of history is always hidden deep inside.

Admittedly, when it comes to the life-related application of history researches, it always benefits us in a more direct and obvious way. The first example brought up into my mind is its advantages to economy. By analyzing the history economic data, economists could figure out patterns of economy development and forecast the trend of economy so that abnormal economy situation, overheatedness [overheating] for instance, could be corrected or improved in time. Has this work been done the Great Depression would have been repeated again and again. [好像这句话意思错了]Thanks to all the history records, people can get jobs and make a livings. What else could be more relevant to our daily lives?

To sum up, although its impact on the social daily lives is tremendous, the study of history has value to other extents too. Most importantly, the value of history doesn't need any media to present as it stands for one third of the entire world[我懂你的意思，但是这里应该不能用world]: the past.
[topic列得很好啊，论证也很到位，错误又少，感觉都没什么可以拍的，学到了很多，谢谢，大大的水平很高啊]

pciciUID: 210908

洗完澡回来拍，up一下，顺便留下同主题自己的咚咚

https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=299660

mamak6322UID: 189139

The study of history influences our daily lives in a lot of ways. Basically, it can tell us by (those) experience (experiences) that what (is) better not to do and what (is) better to do now. But is it the only way that history researches could have any value? I would say no for all the explanations below.(好开头，值得借鉴)

Answer this question first: What's the main purpose of history researches? Is it to put the research results into use in some way? No, if you ask a historian, he/she would tell you that the ultimate goal of their career is the history itself, because a clear well-established history itself is an invaluable treasure to the whole human species. History represents the curiosity of us to the past of human being (beings), but it's not just a satisfaction to （改成 of）curiosity but also a vital part of culture. By studying its history, a nation could take a clearer look at all the glory and failures their ancestors made (改成experienced 比较好) before, which is for the contemporary generation to take lessons and strength from. On the other hand, history is a close friend of almost all the fields that have a history of their own: art, literature, politics, sociology, and so on. Without knowing about the origin and the process to evolve (改成of evolving) to the current achievement, participants of those fields would have no way to have a thorough and accurate understanding to what they are doing. Thus, there is no need to prove the quality and value of history because "this baby sells itself".（值得学习的举例！！）

Even In terms of the practical use of the history study, it contributes to more than our everyday life. This is obviously （改成obvious）in the academic areas. Some disciplines seemingly（改为seems to） have nothing to do with our daily life, such as geology or astronomy. Actually, (用however是不是比较好) there is no such "useless discipline" in the world. For example, when the earthquake occurs officials would ask geologists for rescue, when there is a risk of meteor collision with Earth astronomers are on the headline. They are going to influence our lives soon or later（感觉怪怪的，sooner or later）, more or less. As we've (自己写的文章还是用I 比较好罢) mentioned above, history rules them all: without history data for reference, a（改成an） astronomy would be no more than a telescope fan, and geologists would spend their whole lives living in the mountains or canyons looking for layers. Although sometimes we can't feel its impact in our daily lives, the value of history is always hidden deep inside.

Admittedly, when it comes to the life-related application of history researches, it always benefits us in a more direct and obvious way. The first example brought up (用that comes 就行了巴) into my mind is its advantages to economy. By analyzing the history economic data, economists could figure out patterns of economy development and forecast the trend of economy so that abnormal economy situation, overheatedness (干脆用恶性通货膨胀Hyperinflation好了，显得专业 ) for instance, could be corrected or improved in time. Has this work been done the Great Depression would have been repeated again and again. Thanks to all the history records, people can get jobs and make a living. What else could be more relevant to our daily lives?

To sum up, although its impact on the social daily lives is tremendous, the study of history has value to other extents too. Most importantly, the value of history doesn't need any media to present as it stands for one third of the entire world: the past. (别致的结尾，学习学习！！) （好文章，学到很多！ 谢谢， 加油！！！）

互拍，狠砸阿~~
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=300191

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hihifrankyUID: 2115524

The study of history influences our daily lives in a lot of ways. Basically, it can tell us by experience that what better not to do and what better to do now. But is it the only way that history researches could have any value? I would say no for all the explanations below. [很简练的开头，学习ing. 但有一个问题，应该是daily life, 只有解为几条命时才用lives，以下相同，不一一指出]

Answer this question first: What's the main purpose of history researches? Is it to put the research results into use in some way? No, if you ask a historian, he/she would tell you that the ultimate goal of their career is the history itself, because a clear well-established history itself is an invaluable treasure to the whole human species. History represents the curiosity of us to the past of human being, but[连用2个but不太好吧，改为nevertheless怎么样？] it's not just a satisfaction to curiosity but also a vital part of culture. By studying its history, a nation could take a clearer look at all the glory and failures their ancestors made before, which is for the contemporary generation to take lessons and strength from. On the other hand, history is a close friend of almost all the fields that have a history of their own: art, literature, politics, sociology, and so on. Without knowing about the origin and the process to evolve to the current achievement, participants of those fields would have no way to have a thorough and accurate understanding to what they are doing. Thus, there is no need to prove the quality and value of history because "this baby sells itself". [cool! 虽然是第一次见。]

Even In terms of the practical use of the history study, it contributes to more than our everyday life. This is obviously in the academic areas. Some disciplines seemingly have nothing to do with our daily life, such as geology or astronomy. Actually, there is no such "useless discipline" in the world. For example, when the earthquake occurs, officials would ask geologists for rescue, when there is a risk of meteor collision with Earth, astronomers are on the headline. They are going to influence our lives soon or later, more or less. As we've mentioned above, history rules them all: without history data for reference, a astronomy would be no more than a telescope fan, and geologists would spend their whole lives living in the mountains or canyons looking for layers. Although sometimes we can't feel its impact in our daily lives, the value of history is always hidden deep inside.

Admittedly, when it comes to the life-related application of history researches, it always benefits us in a more direct and obvious way. The first example brought up into my mind is its advantages to economy. By analyzing the history of economic data, economists could figure out patterns of economy development and forecast the trend of economy so that abnormal economy situation, overheatedness for instance, could be corrected or improved in time. Has this work been done the Great Depression would have been repeated again and again.[看不懂。] Thanks to all the history records, people can get jobs and make a livings. What else could be more relevant to our daily lives?

To sum up, although its impact on the social daily lives is tremendous, the study of history has value to other extents too. Most importantly, the value of history doesn't need any media to present as it stands for  one third of the entire world: the past. [cool! an outstanding ending]

你的b2和b3跟b1好像有一点点重，b2,b3都说要用到历史数据，这和b1的最后有点相似。但作者能把两者区分开来，不简单。
全文分析很全面，而且论述比较透彻，语言灵活多变，篇幅也够。哇，都要学习啊！！
不知是否限时作，if so, ATTA BOY!

另附我的作业，请大大批吧！
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=300341

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ahqiuUID: 207682

我先占个座，晚上来

edgarluUID: 203648

多谢各位，刚刚饿着肚子帮各位回拍完了
吃完饭继续

ahqiuUID: 207682

占了座，一直想不起来是哪篇，说过要回的，呵呵
Issue103
The study of history has value only to the extent that it is relevant to our daily lives.

Outlines:
What’s the main purpose of history researches? Is it to put the research results into use in some way? No, if you ask a historian, he/she would tell you that the ultimate goal of their career is the history itself, because a clear well-established history iitself is an invaluable treasure to the whole human species.
Even In terms of the practical use of the history study, it contributes to more than our everyday life.
Admittedly, when it comes to the life-related application of history researches, it always benefits us in a more direct and obvious way.

Title:
The study of history influences our daily lives in a lot of ways. Basically, it can tell us by experience that what better not to do and what better to do now. （好押韵的一句话，可是用should要好些）But is it the only way that history researches could have any value? I would say no （这么说是不是好些As far as I concerned, the answer may be negative ）for all the explanations below.

Answer this question first: What's the main purpose of history researches? Is it to put the research results into use in some way? No, if you ask a historian, he/she would tell you that the ultimate goal of their career is the history itself, because a clear well-established history itself is an invaluable treasure to the whole human species. History represents the curiosity of us to the past of human being,（好像这么定义不对，研究历史才是一种好奇心吧） but it's not just a satisfaction to curiosity but also a vital part of culture. By studying its history, a nation could take a clearer look at all the glory and failures their ancestors made before, which is for the contemporary generation to take lessons and strength from.（用from which） On the other hand, history is a close friend of almost all the fields that have a history of their own: art, literature, politics, sociology, and so on. Without knowing about the origin and the process to evolve to the current achievement, participants of those fields would have no way to have a thorough and accurate understanding to what they are doing. Thus, there is no need to prove the quality and value of history because "this baby sells itself".
观点很新，论证也不错，就是开头那几个问句不太好，呵呵
Even In terms of the practical use of the history study, it contributes to more than our everyday life. This is obviously in the academic areas.（太短了这句话，不要单独说的好） Some disciplines seemingly have nothing to do with our daily life, such as geology or astronomy. Actually, there is no such "useless discipline" in the world.（什么意思？？） For example, when the earthquake occurs officials would ask geologists for rescue, when there is a risk of meteor collision with Earth astronomers are on the headline. They are going to influence our lives soon or later, more or less. As we've mentioned above, history rules them all: without history data for reference, a astronomy would be no more than a telescope fan, and geologists would spend their whole lives living in the mountains or canyons looking for layers.（例子前面讲的有点太多了） Although sometimes we can't feel its impact in our daily lives, the value of history is always hidden deep inside.
你的例子逻辑性很强，先找了个与daily life 无关的学科，然后说历史在其中的作用，再引到研究的历史意义不仅仅在everyday life.不过挑个刺，你的例子中对useless discipline的描述太多了，这不是重点，重点在于研究历史在其中的作用，呵呵Admittedly, when it comes to the life-related application of history researches, it always benefits us in a more direct and obvious way. The first example brought up into my mind is its advantages to economy. By analyzing the history economic data, economists could figure out patterns of economy development and forecast the trend of economy so that abnormal economy situation, overheatedness（什么意思？？） for instance, could be corrected or improved in time. Has this work not been done the Great Depression would have been repeated again and again. Thanks to all the history records, people can get jobs and make a livings（living）. What else could be more relevant to our daily lives?
题目说的是研究历史，而你后面两段有点局限在研究历史数据上面了，给人的错觉就是你在讨论研究数据的意义，呵呵，其实不一定说数据的，经济现象就可以了，一些经济现象出现的前兆，怎样去把握市场规律，怎样去判断是不是泡沫经济，这是一些经验教训，不知道这么说可不可以启发一下。To sum up, although its impact on the social daily lives is tremendous, the study of history has value to other extents too. Most importantly, the value of history doesn't need any media to present as it stands for  one third of the entire world: the past.
观点不错的，结构挺好，就是举例和说理需要加强，句式的变换稍微差了些，加油哈

edgarluUID: 203648

Originally posted by ahqiu at 2005-7-16 14:21
占了座，一直想不起来是哪篇，说过要回的，呵呵
Issue103
The study of history has value only to the extent that it is relevant to our daily lives.

Outlines:
What’s the mai ...

受教，夏天就喜欢多浇浇这样的凉水
先谢过，拷贝下来待会儿慢慢品味

pciciUID: 210908

Issue103
The study of history influences our daily lives in a lot of ways. Basically, it can tell us by experience that what better not to do and what better to do now. [稍显罗嗦what is better to or not to do instantly] But is it the only way that history researches could have any value?[这是对原论点的question么？But should life-relevant history be the only study object for researchers to focus on. ] I would say no for all the explanations below.

Answer this question first: What's the main purpose of history researches? Is it to put the research results into use in some way? No, if you ask a historian, he/she would tell you that the ultimate goal of their career is the history itself, because a clear well-established history itself is an invaluable treasure to the whole human species. History represents[arouses] the curiosity of us to the past of human being, but it's not just a satisfaction to [our] curiosity but also a vital part of culture. By studying its[the] history, a nation could take a clearer look at all the glory and failures their ancestors made before, which is for the contemporary generation to take lessons and [gain] strength from. On the other hand, history is a close friend of almost all the fields that have a history of their own: art, literature, politics, sociology, and so on. [这一句中friend匪夷所思的，你是想说每个领域都有自己的发家史] Without knowing about the origin and the process to evolve to the current achievement, participants of those fields would have no way [but to turn to the history for a >>>] to have a thorough and accurate understanding to what they are doing. Thus, there is no need to prove the quality and value of history because "this baby sells itself".[同不理解这一句]

Even In terms of the practical use of the history study, it contributes to more than our everyday life. This is obviously in the academic areas. Some disciplines seemingly have nothing to do with our daily life, such as geology or astronomy. Actually, there is no such "useless discipline" in the world. For example, when the earthquake occurs officials would ask geologists for rescue, when there is a risk of meteor collision with Earth astronomers are on the headline. They are going to influence our lives soon or later, more or less. As we've mentioned above, history rules them all: without history data for reference, a astronomy would be no more than a telescope fan, and geologists would spend their whole lives living in the mountains or canyons looking for layers. Although sometimes we can't feel its impact in our daily lives, the value of history is always hidden deep inside.
[我和你对原issue的理解不一样哦，我觉得它指的是与日常生活相关的历史研究才要研究，也就是与日常生活无关的不研究，例如过去的战争……你觉得他指的是对生活有影响的才要研究，而其实他不仅仅对生活产生了影响……我理解你等意思没错吧。我们到底谁的理解正确呢？]

Admittedly, when it comes to the life-related application of history researches, it always benefits us in a more direct and obvious way. The first example brought up into my mind is its advantages to economy. By analyzing the history economic data, economists could figure out patterns of economy development and forecast the trend of economy so that abnormal economy situation, overheatedness for instance, could be corrected or improved in time. Has[Had]  this work not been done， the Great Depression would have been repeated again and again. Thanks to all the history records, people can get jobs and make a livings[living]. What else could be more relevant to our daily lives?
[咦？这个怎么又和我的理解对上了？]
To sum up, although its impact on the social daily lives is tremendous, the study of history has value to other extents too. Most importantly, the value of history doesn't need any media to present as it stands for one third of the entire world: the past. [中翻英啦：What’s more important, as the history makes up one third of the progress belonging to human development, the value of it is self evident.]

Clare106UID: 2102889

Answer this question first: What's the main purpose of history researches? 我觉得这句话有点梗，前面说 I would say no for all the explanations below.那就有条不紊的说吧，后面突然来个这种语气有点强硬的Answer this....会觉得突然……
个人觉得第三段写得比较好，很清晰不啰嗦，行文比较干净。

我也前天和你写了同样的文章，我把地址给你，https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=300891&extra=page%3D1 有时间请看看。有人说我写得像ARGU,我都郁闷了……

ahqiuUID: 207682

帮我看看这篇吧，呵呵
issue36
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hihifrankyUID: 2115524

楼主可要很忙咯:O

千翼UID: 199721

Issue103
The study of history has value only to the extent that it is relevant to our daily lives.

Outlines:
What’s the main purpose of history researches? Is it to put the research results into use in some way? No, if you ask a historian, he/she would tell you that the ultimate goal of their career is the history itself, because a clear well-established history iitself is an invaluable treasure to the whole human species.
Even In terms of the practical use of the history study, it contributes to more than our everyday life.
Admittedly, when it comes to the life-related application of history researches, it always benefits us in a more direct and obvious way.

Title:
The study of history influences our daily lives in a lot of ways. Basically, it can tell us by experience that what better not to do and what better to do now. But is it the only way[meaning] that history researches could have any value? I would say no for all the explanations below.

Answer this question first: What's the main purpose of history researches? Is it [just]to put the research results into use in some ways? No, if you ask a historian, he/she would tell you that the ultimate goal of their career[job比较好吧] is the history itself, because a clear well-established history itself is an invaluable treasure to the whole human species. History represents the curiosity of us [people's curiosity]to the past of human being, but it's not just a satisfaction to curiosity but also a vital part of culture. By studying its history, a nation could take a clearer look at all the glory and failures their[its] ancestors made before, which is for[because] the contemporary generation to take lessons and strength from. On the other hand, history is a close friend of almost all the fields that have a history of their own: art, literature, politics, sociology, and so on. Without knowing about the origin and the process to evolve to the current achievement, participants of those fields would have no way to have a thorough and accurate understanding to what they are doing. Thus, there is no need to prove the quality and value of history because "this baby sells itself。“[这段的观点有点不够明确，开头有点啰嗦]
Even In terms of the practical use of the history study, it contributes to more than our everyday life. This is obviously in the academic areas. Some disciplines seemingly have nothing to do with our daily life, such as geology or astronomy. Actually, there is no such "useless discipline" in the world. For example, when the earthquake occurs officials would ask geologists for rescue, when there is a risk of meteor collision with Earth astronomers are on the headline. They are going to influence our lives soon or later, more or less. As we've mentioned above, history rules them all: without history data for reference, a astronomy would be no more than a telescope fan, and geologists would spend their whole lives living in the mountains or canyons looking for layers. Although sometimes we can't feel its impact in[on] our daily lives, the value of history is always[sometimes] hidden deep inside.[天文学家，地理学家的举例有点夸大，可以说历史的纪录帮助了他们了解自然的规律，而且，科学是一个积累的过程。解释的不清楚]

Admittedly, when it comes to the life-related application of history researches, it always benefits us in a more direct and obvious way. The first example brought up into my mind is its advantages to economy. By analyzing the history economic data, economists could figure out patterns of economy development and forecast the trend of economy so that abnormal economy situation, overheatedness for instance, could be corrected or improved in time. Has this work not been done the Great Depression would have been repeated again and again. Thanks to all the history records, people can get jobs and make a livings. What else could be more relevant to our daily lives?[这段不错，说理清楚]

To sum up, although its impact on the social daily lives is tremendous, the study of history has value to other extents too. Most importantly, the value of history doesn't need any media to present as it stands for  one third of the entire world: the past.
[感觉用词上有不少亮点，还有，很会用问句，文章显得很活泼。文章对于主题的解释要注意了，不是很有说服力]

edgarluUID: 203648

Originally posted by hihifranky at 2005-7-16 19:10
楼主可要很忙咯:O

可不是，dizzy中，到了晚上headache都有了