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When famous people such as actors, athletes and rock stars give their opinions, many people listen. Do you think we should pay attention to these opinions? Use specific reasons and examples to develop  your essay.


Famous people frequently announce opinions which always are awared by the public. Some people believe their opinions are valuable because of their successful career. But a closer look at the truth would appear such an belief is not only pre-matured but also ultimately wrong-head. I hold the opinion that we should have a neutral attitude toward them.



Famous people frequently announce opinions which always are awared by the public. Some people believe their opinions are valuable because of their successful career. But a closer look at the truth would appear such an belief is not only pre-matured but also ultimately wrong-head. I hold the opinion that we should have a neutral attitude toward them.

  Most famous people give opinions for their own career, such as political purpose, awareness and satisfaction of public. Greatly influenced by public, famous people have to make many efforts to make themselves real star. Most of us had experience to be fooled by the opinions from media. I vividly remember what the president of my city said when the SARS was frightening everyone: there is no one affected in our city. What the truth was, we know it ultimately, more than 3 people had died from the disease. The comforting new the president said was just fooling public and his upper leader. How terrible if we pay completely attention of famous people’s word!


The opinions of famous people are not always suitable for our own situation. Not ignoring many famous people derive great success in their own career, we should better to firm our own position. I have a friend who had had a lesson from this. Jolin, her favorite star, taught girls an opinion which suggested to be helpful to smooth skin. Completing the facial in the same way, she felt uncomfortable on her skin and found her skin was red. The cosmic way was not fit for her. Friend’s opinions do not always good for us, not even to talk them of famous people who do now know us at all.


I do not deny the positive effect famous people make. Thousands of people are encouraged by them when they feel disappointed and upset. However, we should take things into two parts. In conclusion, it is apparent that not every opinion of famous people is worth to be paid attention. Knowing what their purpose and how our situation is, we would make better use of their opinions.

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Famous people frequently announce opinions which always are awared(表示赞同理解的话用rewarded吧) by the public. Some people believe their opinions are valuable because of their successful career(s). But a closer look at the truth would appear(感觉用prove更体现观点) such an(a) belief is not only pre-matured(prematured) but also ultimately wrong-head(这个词语米看懂..-_-|||). I hold the opinion that we should have a neutral attitude toward(s) them(them指代的还是交代清楚,因为前面没有提到具体的内容).* W) T, N'
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Most famous people give opinions for their own career, such as political purpose, awareness and satisfaction of public. Greatly influenced by public, famous people have to make many efforts to make themselves real star(s). Most of us had(have) experience(d) to be fooled by the opinions from media. I vividly remember what the president of my city said when the SARS was frightening everyone: there is no one affected in our city. What the truth was, we know it ultimately, more than 3 people had died from the disease.(这句时态有点小乱) The comforting new(S) the president said was just fooling public and his upper leader. How terrible if we pay completely attention of famous people’s word!



The opinions of famous people are not always suitable for our own situation. Not ignoring many famous people derive great success in their own career, we should better to firm our own position. I have a friend who had had (has had)a lesson from this. Jolin, her favorite star, taught girls an opinion which suggested to be helpful to smooth skin. Completing the facial(facial是形容词,这边该用名词) in the same way, she felt uncomfortable on her skin and (加个even)found her skin (it)was red. The cosmic way was not fit for her. Friend’s opinions do not always good for us, not even to talk them of(是想表达更不要说吗?那可以改成not even mention that )famous people who do now(not) know us at all.



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I do not deny the positive effect(s) famous people make. Thousands of people are encouraged by them when they feel disappointed and upset. However, we should take things into two parts(aspects感觉更好哈). In conclusion, it is apparent that not every opinion of famous people is worth to be paid attention. Knowing what their purpose((s) and how our situation is, we would make better use of their opinions.; I7 ?*

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