进军美利坚作文 9.1

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9.1 Do you agree or disagree: Most people prefer others making decision for them than making a decision for themselves.

Social psychology demonstrates that people always tend to keep the same pace with others. The reason is no oneinclined to be minority. As soon as concerned making decision, probably humans also prefer not to be unique. Under this situation, they may ask suggestions from friends or family members. Some of them are reasonable enough to determine by themselves by analyzing advices from others. However, the rest may take the suggestions directly, which will lead to dire consequence as anyone cannot understand one’s life. Hence, I acclaim that people should make decisions by themselves.

To begin with, friend’s advice could broad one’s scope from distinctive viewpoints. Everyone’s has restriction on his or her knowledge, which encourages them to consider suggestion from others. For instance, it was hard for me decide to if should pursue my master degree in US or in China. I took me two months to ponder it. One of my female friends who is already in her late 30 imparted me that the working positions are very competitive in domestic market; there are more and more young people graduate each year, which brings intension in job hunting. Therefore, studying abroad will provide me stronger capacity among them as soon as finish my degree. I considered it deeply as she has been working for one decade in different cities. She is experienced enough to advice me. However, my position and background is an unbound field to her. Am I that smart to study in US college or can I afford tuition and other expense? I have to reasonably analyze my condition and ability then could make decision instead of taking hers frankly.

On the other hand, making decision can develop one’s emotional independence. When one always ask and take advices from friends, he or she would lose themselves as it is not easy for them to understand their characters and personalities. It happened that people may meet those who are wiser and mature but does not mean they could make decisions for them directly. Humans should learn to think over by themselves otherwise they will be more depend on others, which will result in negative impact on life. As most people know, one of the human natures is people are not be honest all the time.

To conclude, it is wise to listen to friends and family members, which offers the information we did not know. However, making decisions should be fulfilled by human themselves. As no one 100% comprehend them.

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Social psychology demonstrates that people always tend to keep the same pace with others. The reason is no one inclined to be minority. As soon as concerned making decision, probably humans also prefer not to be unique. Under this situation, they may ask suggestions from friends or family members. Some of them are reasonable enough to determine by themselves by analyzing advices from others. However, the rest may take the suggestions directly, which will lead to dire consequence as anyone（others） cannot understand one’s life. Hence, I acclaim that people should make decisions by themselves.

To begin with, friend’s advice could broad one’s scope from distinctive viewpoints. Everyone’s has restriction on his or her knowledge, which encourages them to consider suggestion from others. For instance, it was hard for me (to)decide  if (主语I)should pursue my master（master's） degree in US or in China. I(It) took me two months to ponder it. One of my female friends who is already in her late 30 imparted me that the working positions are very competitive in domestic market; there are more and more young people graduate each year, which brings intension in job hunting. Therefore, studying abroad will provide me stronger capacity among them as soon as (I)finish my degree. I considered it deeply as she has been working for one decade in different cities. She is experienced enough to advice me. However, my position and background is an unbound field to her. Am I that smart to study in US college or can I afford tuition and other expense? I have to reasonably analyze my condition and ability then could make decision instead of taking hers frankly. & {1 q' N+ }9 u5 ?' `
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On the other hand, making decision can develop one’s emotional independence. When one always ask and take advices from friends, he or she would lose themselves as it is not easy for them to understand their characters and personalities. It happened that people may meet those who are wiser and (more) mature but does not mean they could make decisions for them directly. Humans should learn to think over by themselves otherwise they will be more depend on others, which will result in negative impact on life. As most people know, one of the human natures is people are not be(being) honest all the time.' s6 i# ?8 T/ f
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To conclude, it is wise to listen to friends and family members, which offers the information we did not know. However, making decisions should be fulfilled by human themselves. As no one 100% comprehend them.

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Social psychology demonstrates that people always tend to keep the same pace with others. The reason is no one inclined to be minority. As soon as concerned making decision, probably humans also prefer not to be unique （这个说法有点武断）. Under this situation, they may ask suggestions from friends or family members. Some of them are reasonable enough to determine by themselves by analyzing advices from others. However, the rest may take the suggestions directly, which will lead to dire consequence as anyone（others） cannot understand one’s life. Hence, （前面只是分情况讨论了一下两种观点，跟这个hence的连接性不强） I acclaim that people should make decisions by themselves.& D0 f* r; y5 P9 O1 e- D To begin with, friend’s advice could broad one’s scope from distinctive viewpoints. Everyone’s has restriction on his or her knowledge, which encourages them to consider suggestion from others. For instance, it was hard for me (to)decide  if (主语I)should pursue my master（master's） degree in US or in China. I(It) took me two months to ponder it. One of my female friends who is already in her late 30 imparted me that the working positions are very competitive in domestic market; there are more and more young people graduate each year, which brings intension in job hunting. Therefore, studying abroad will provide me stronger capacity among them as soon as (I)finish my degree. I considered it deeply as she has been working for one decade in different cities. She is experienced enough to advice me. However, my position and background is an unbound field to her. Am I that smart to study in US college or can I afford tuition and other expense? I have to reasonably analyze my condition and ability then could make decision instead of taking hers frankly. & {1 q' N+ }9 u5 ?' ` 额....看到这段我还以为我改错文章了，这段重点好像在于是否应该take advice， 而不是make decision G/ [7 C6 D On the other hand, making decision can develop one’s emotional independence. When one always asks and takes advices from friends, he or she would lose themselves as it is not easy for them to understand their characters and personalities. It happened that people may meet those who are wiser and (more) mature but does not mean they could make decisions for them directly. Humans should learn to think over by themselves otherwise they will be more depend on others, which will result in negative impact on life. As most people know, one of the human natures is people are not be(being) honest all the time.' s6 i# ?8 T/ f" s3 a. y/ h& ?6 Q5 X2 t1 C $ b0 g( }+ g8 h. y6 D2 c. C0 c# U4 l- L# Z  Q% K4 X# n) K To conclude, it is wise to listen to friends and family members, which offers the information we did not know. However, making decisions should be fulfilled by human themselves. As no one 100% comprehend them. 像是把题目中的prefer换成了should，两段都在论述“人们应该自己做决定”，而针对这个题目，我觉得更因该是对这个现象——人们做决定——做出你的判断：自己做决定OR让别人做，然后用观点来支持，即对你认为的一方进行深入分析，寻找理由。 所以这篇我感觉有点写偏了。

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有时候写作文, 因为比较长点. 写着写着就不知道怎地偏了. 惯犯...一会稍微改动下麻烦你帮看看..谢谢facny 不愧是牛牛啊..据说你给米小熊折磨够呛...都病了 3# fancyww

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To begin with, friend’s advice could broad one’s scope from distinctive viewpoints. Everyone’s has restriction on his or her knowledge, which encourages them to consider suggestion from others. For instance, it was hard for me decide to if should pursue my master degree in US or in China. I took me two months to ponder it. One of my female friends who is already in her late 30 imparted me that the working positions are very competitive in domestic market; there are more and more young people graduate each year, which brings intension in job hunting. Therefore, studying abroad will provide me stronger capacity among them as soon as finish my degree. I considered it deeply as she has been working for one decade in different cities. She is experienced enough to advice me. However, my position and background is an unbound field to her. Am I that smart to study in US college or can I afford tuition and other expense? I have to reasonably analyze my condition and ability then could make decision instead of taking hers frankly.

However, I could not let her to make decision for my future as she does not really understand my postion and background; such as am I that smart to complete degree in US college or can I afford tuition and other expense? I am obliged to make decision by myself by analying my condition and ability in stead of being replaced by others. 这部分改了些你看合适不..谢谢
我最初的想法是这段写别人做决定不行还得自己. 下段写自己决定可以不依靠别人, 人就越来越来成熟...不知道表达的对不??..呐

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有时候写作文, 因为比较长点. 写着写着就不知道怎地偏了. 惯犯...一会稍微改动下麻烦你帮看看..谢谢facny 不愧是牛牛啊..据说你给米小熊折磨够呛...都病了 3# fancyww
我是chineselady 发表于 2009-9-3 10:26

啊~是么。。。哎 我的不对了。。。一步一步来，，没关系。

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第一点可以写成：不管别人给你多少建议，人们最终还是倾向于要自己做决定，因为：A. 决定所带来的后果是自己承担，而不是别人，所以即使是别人的建议最后也要由自己来“拍板”决定。 B. 别人的建议可能不够适合自己。

第二点，我还是觉得跟题目相隔有点远了。

不过这是我自己的意见，你可以请版里的牛人像jiang08给你看看。