进军美利坚作文组9.22

sharamandeUID: 2597186

9月22日 第一次作业

工作为了快乐还是MONEY？

The choice between happiness and money is quite difficult for me, because these two things are both important factors when I consider a job. To this question, my answer is money.

First and foremost, money is absolutely necessary in modern life. We need money to buy food, pay rent for house and take a bus in daily life. My parents work hard to support the whole family and give me the chance to accept good education. As I grow up and my parents become old, it is my turn to try my best to give them a happy life. I want to buy them a big house with excellent natural view, buy them delicious and nutritious food, send for an expert doctor to take care of their heath condition and so forth. Without money, these thoughts will never come true. Thus, giving my parents a good life is the first reason for my choice.

Secondly, if I have enough money I could have the ability to fulfill my dreams such as travelling around the world. I like adventure, but many adventurous activities that interest me a lot are quite expensive such as bungee jumping and diving. Therefore, money is needed in my pursuit of happiness.

Last but not least, although in many cases a high salary is contradictory with happiness because of the great pressure, there are still examples showing that people can both work happily and get a good earning. Warren Buffet is a good example since he loves investment which is just his work. People are very lucky if they could find a job they are interested in and paid well because happiness could excite you, arouse your potential energy and make you feel easier while working.
In a word, happiness is also an important factor.

hmnsunUID: 2653457

The choice between happiness and money is quite difficult for me, because these two things are both(both of these two things are) important factors when I consider a job. To this question, my answer(choice) is money.

  t* f8 F6 j% m7 @8 |0 cFirst and foremost, money is absolutely necessary in modern life. We need money to buy food, pay rent for house and take a bus/buses in daily life. (Before I have a job,)My parents work hard to support the whole family and give me the chance to accept good education. As I grow up and my parents become old, it is my turn to try my best to give them a happy life. I want to buy them a big house with excellent natural view, buy them delicious and nutritious food, send for an expert doctor to take care of their heath condition and so forth. Without money, these thoughts will never come true. Thus, giving my parents a good life is the first reason for my choice.


% T- H2 Y0 V$ ~+ [- M7 I9 p0 TSecondly, if I have enough money I could have the ability to fulfill my dreams such as travelling around the world. I like adventure, but many adventurous activities that interest me a lot are quite expensive such as bungee jumping and diving. Therefore, money is needed in my pursuit of happiness.
; [' N- e* B- u* H5 n! x Last but not least, although in many cases a high salary is contradictory with happiness because of the great pressure, there are still examples showing that people can both work happily and get a good earning. Warren Buffet is a good example since he loves investment which is just his work. People are very lucky if they could find a job they are interested in and paid well because happiness could excite you(them), arouse your potential energy and make you feel easier while working.
7 G4 l; r' d' \' B) KIn a word, happiness is also an important factor.( in my opinion , the conclusion part should be more deliberated , with both the importance of money and happiness being discussed.)

wawabjUID: 2536676

工作为了快乐还是MONEY？
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The choice between happiness and money is quite difficult for me, because these two things are both important factors when I consider a job.(感觉这得转折有点奇怪) To this question, my answer is money.$ d! @# s, H+ ~" M; ~0 C

First and foremost, money is absolutely necessary in modern life. We need money to buy food, pay rent for house and take a bus in daily life. My parents work hard to support the whole family and give me the chance to accept good education. As I grow up and my parents become old, it is my turn to try my best to give them a happy life. I want to buy them a big house with excellent natural view, buy them delicious and nutritious food, send for an expert doctor to take care of their heath condition and so forth. Without money, these thoughts will never come true. Thus, giving my parents a good life is the first reason for my choice.. l& q! \' [; k; F
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Secondly, if I have enough money I could have the ability to fulfill my dreams such as travelling around the world. I like adventure, but many adventurous activities that interest me a lot are quite expensive such as bungee jumping and diving. Therefore, money is needed in(for) my pursuit of happiness.
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# x) t; l8 W4 \% ]$ BLast but not least, although in many cases a high salary is contradictory with happiness because of the great pressure, there are still examples showing that people can both work happily and get a good earning. Warren Buffet is a good example since he loves investment which is just his work. People are very lucky if they could find a job they are interested in and paid well because happiness could excite you, arouse your potential energy and make you feel easier while working.
/ T  j2 I+ o" l6 ]: e+ f. oIn a word, happiness is also an important factor.

个人觉得，如果T的作文要求只是像讲故事一样的说一个道理的话，我觉得这样应该ok了吧
但是不过说它对用词还有语句的把握更严格的话，我和你一样都还需要多联系。咱们的都比较平民化，比较不太像论文那种感觉的。
另外 最后一个总结还是稍微写长点可能会好些