10.11作文

doubledianUID: 2661760

In the recent years, as the development of the internet people can know the world better than that in the past. And many people hold the opinion that people should live in the city or country all life instead of moving to another place. However, I can hardly agree with the idea, people should go out and look the beauty of the world. And I will provide concrete evidences to demonstrate my point of view.



First and for most, people should try their best to the world better in their life. If one lives in only one place all his live I can hardly image how boring his life would be. Everyday when he opens his eyes, the same building, the same person, and the same stuff appeared in front of him, no changing, and no surprise. People need the sprite to try new things, only he tries can he know the beauty of the world.



On the second place, People in the world should also need to know something different from their own culture. Going abroad and having a new environment to live can let people know each other better. One of the reasons why the war breaks out is that people in different places don't know each other. The different customs and cultures make them hardly understand some behaviors in other places. And moreover people can learn much useful knowledge that they could not learn on books when live a new place.


Last but not least, I think it is people's duty to diffuse their own country's culture all over the world. And the best way to do this is to move out and use people's behavior, knowledge and language to make other people know the country better. To do this at the same time can add the friendship between our human being.



To sum up, living in the same place in one's whole life is not a wise choose and go out for a little changing may help people know the meaning of life and the beauty of the world better.
今天的作文写的不好，没有思路，没有观点，写得很郁闷，辛苦了

wawabjUID: 2536676

In the recent years, as the development of the internet people can know the world better than that in the past.（这句话感觉和后面的and没有什么关系） And many people hold the opinion that people should live in the city or country all life instead of moving to another place. However, I can hardly agree with the idea, people should go out and look the beauty of the world. And I will provide concrete evidences to demonstrate my point of view.

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First and for most, people should try their best to （少动词）the world better in their life. If one lives in only one place all his live I can hardly image how boring his life would be. Everyday when he opens his eyes, the same building, the same person, and the same stuff appeared in front of him, no changing, and no surprise. People need the sprite to try new things, only he tries can he know the beauty of the world.2 j8 d+ n1 D' H1 U, j" ~
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On the second place, People in the world should also need to know something different from their own culture. Going abroad and having a new environment to live can let people know each other better. One of the reasons why the war breaks out is that people in different places don't know each other（真的是这样么？）. The different customs and cultures make them hardly understand some behaviors in other places. And moreover people can learn much useful knowledge that they could not learn on books when live a new place. （这段感觉和主题的联系不大。。我说不好。比如说人们也可以通过电视什么的了解别人的生活啊）
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Last but not least, I think it is people's duty to diffuse their own country's culture all over the world. And the best way to do this is to move out and use people's behavior, knowledge and language to make other people know the country better. To do this at the same time can add the friendship between our human being.（这段比较牵强）" o9 T; X0 I; u7 S
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To sum up, living in the same place in one's whole life is not a wise choose and go out for a little changing may help people know the meaning of life and the beauty of the world better.
今天的作文写的不好，没有思路，没有观点，写得很郁闷，辛苦了

我也觉得写这个不容易， 建议你理清一下思路，重新列个提纲吧。（不好意思改晚了，我加班刚到家一会。）