10.19作业（进军美利坚）

joyceliuUID: 2477232

In the recent years, there is a generalcontroversy over the issue that which is more crucial to learn, the conceptsand ideas or the facts. Although some people may claim that the more facts onelearns, the more knowledgeable he will be, personally I prefer to studyingconcepts and ideas and I will provide concrete evidences to demonstrate mypoint of view.

First and foremost, mastering the conceptsand ideas will make us better apply them in the real life. It is universallyacknowledged that the ultimate goal for education is not to obtain large amountof information simply, the key point is to know how to apply all our knowledgein the real world. Because only when students have a deep understanding aboutthe conception as well as ideas, they can know the most perfect applicationmethods. For instance, in the maths class, if students could understand themeaning of the specific concepts or equations, it is more likely that theycould use them to deal with the real problems. Similarly, when doctors know thebasic concept of a particular disease such as its cause and development, theycan find the most effective way to cure their patients. Accordingly, it isobvious that in order to reach the objective of utilizing what we learned, thefirst step for us is absolutely to comprehend the concepts and ideas.


In the second place, the concept and ideaslearning will also promote the facts remembering process. It is well known thatmemorizing is based on understanding, so the most efficient method to learn thefacts is to have a truly understanding about the fundamental concept and ideas.For instance, when we comprehend the rule of supply and demand in economical market,it is no hard for us to remember the fact that along with the more abundantgoods in the global market, the prices of commodities are relatively reduced. Thereis another example, when students understand the concept of allergy, which isjust a reaction of human body to external objects, how can they fail to holdthe fact that there are so many stimuli to cause allergy around ourenvironment. Therefore, after understanding the concept or ideas, we will putlittle effort in memorizing the facts.

To sum up, taking into account ofdiscussion mentioned above, we may safely reach the conclusion that it is wiseand reasonable to learn concepts and ideas.

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zhengping001UID: 2689322

In the recentyears, there is a general controversy over the issue that which is more crucialto learn, the concepts and ideas or the facts. Although some people may claimthat the more facts one learns, the more knowledgeable he will be, personally Iprefer to studying concepts and ideas and I will provide concrete evidences todemonstrate my point of view. - J, y7 Y& t$ b/ `9^* ~' m4 d
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First and foremost, mastering the concepts and ideas will make us better (to) apply them in the real life. It is universally acknowledgedthat the ultimate goal for education is not to obtain (a)large amount of information simply, (and) thekey point is to know how to apply all our knowledge in the real world. Becauseonly when students have a deep understanding about the conception as well asideas, they can know the most perfect application methods. For instance, in themath’s class, if students could understand the meaningof the specific concepts or equations, it is more likely that they could usethem to deal with the real problems. Similarly, when doctors know the basicconcepts of a particular disease such as itscause and development, they can find the most effective way to cure theirpatients. Accordingly, it is obvious that in order to reach the objective ofutilizing what we learned, the first step for us is absolutely to comprehendthe concepts and ideas. $ H! P" {8 |9 V7 E
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In the second place, the concepts and ideas learning willalso promote the facts remembering process(可以这样表达吗？). It is well known that memorizing is based onunderstanding, so the most efficient method to learn the facts is to have a truly(true) understanding about the fundamentalconcepts and ideas. For instance, when we comprehend the rule of supply anddemand in economical market, it is no hard for us to remember the fact thatalong with the more abundant goods in the global market, the prices ofcommodities are relatively reduced. There is another example, when studentsunderstand the concept of allergy, which is just a reaction of human body toexternal objects, how can they (they can) failto hold the fact that there are so many stimulito cause allergy around our environment. Therefore, after understanding theconcepts or ideas, we will put little effort inmemorizing the facts. 7 l0 d, I& w& N

& B. b; |* G+ e5 jTo sum up,taking into account of discussion mentioned above, we may safely reach theconclusion that it is wise and reasonable to learn concepts and ideas.
写得很好，像例文一样，例子也很多，很有说服力，看得出你的使用语言能力很强，基本功很扎实。

fish1044UID: 2190500

In the recent years, there is a general controversy over the issue that which is more crucial to learn, the concepts and ideas or the facts. Although some people may claim that the more facts one learns, the more knowledgeable he will be, personally I prefer to studying(study) concepts and ideas and I will provide concrete evidences to demonstrate mypoint of view. ! q6 k) R* ]% }, J7 ~& A First and foremost, mastering the concepts and ideas will make(help) us better apply them in the real life. It is universally acknowledged that the ultimate goal for education is not to obtain large amountof information simply, the key point is to know how to apply all our knowledge in the real world. Because only when students have a deep understanding aboutthe conception as well as ideas, they can know the most perfect application methods.(前面说的太多了) For instance, in the maths class, if students could understand the meaning of the specific concepts or equations, it is more likely that they could use them to deal with the real problems.（能不能再具体点？） Similarly, when doctors know thebasic concept of a particular disease such as its cause and development, theycan find the most effective way to cure their patients.（具体点，比如说病的名字？） Accordingly, it is obvious that in order to reach the objective of utilizing what we learned, thefirst step for us is absolutely to（to absolutely） comprehend the concepts and ideas. In the second place, the concept and ideas learning will also promote the facts remembering process(remembering process for facts?). It is well known that memorizing is based on understanding, so the most efficient method to learn the facts is to have a truly understanding about the fundamental concept and ideas. For instance, when we comprehend the rule of supply and demand in economical market,it is no hard for us to remember the fact that along with the more abundant goods in the global market, the prices of commodities are relatively reduced(the less the price of commodities are). There is another example, when students understand the concept of allergy, which is just a reaction of human body to external objects, how can they fail to holdthe fact that there are so many stimuli to cause allergy around ourenvironment. Therefore, after understanding the concept or ideas, we will putlittle effort in memorizing the facts. : D) U' H/ Y4 q4 K) a3 o6 m6 d/ o   u5 n' L$ S; d* L4 K) e2 Z9 g To sum up, taking into account ofdiscussion mentioned above, we may safely reach the conclusion that it is wiseand reasonable to learn concepts and ideas.(这个结尾如果能扩充一下就更好了) 总的来说写的不错，如果段落中的例子能更详细些，就更好了。加油哦。