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People in nowadays society are facing more and more pressures, such as house loan, children education and medical insurance. Unfortunately, most of the bothering problems are related to money. Therefore, some people began to argue that money has the magic to make them live happily ever after, even without any work. Others, me included, hold the opposite opinion that it is impossible for people pleasing themselves forever just via money without any work.



It is true that we can use money to amuse ourselves in that most entertainments require payment to get in the economized world. But I need to clarify the fact that amusement is not equal to happiness which is a wonderful word with profound meaning. Happiness means people feel satisfied with his life, family, friends and the society. There are numerous young adults who are luckily borned in rich families can not find the true meaning of their lives. They are able to have countless accesses to things of which other peers could not even dream just because they own money. Nevertheless, it is the exactly same thing turns them into evils without any devotion to society-addict to drugs, ignore the traffic rules and even make crime. These ugly behaviors can not demonstrate they have the satisfaction with themselves.



On the contrary, people need to devote themselves to something meaningful and in this way they are able to get the recognition from others and get their own happiness. Human being is a sort of social animal. We need to live together and help each other. Only through involvment in the society life, can people find the final satisfaction which everyone is looking for. Take Bill Gates for instance, he is the one of the richest people of the world, maybe the top one, but he never stop contributing to our society, not even after he retired from the CEO position of Microsoft Cooperation. Instead of enjoying his own money, he dornated a great deal of his private fortune to build a foundation and make speeches all around world. His choices indicate to us that compare to contribution to society, money is mere a tool for getting happiness.

Based on the above reasons I have explained, it is easy to conclude that people need work to get satisfaction while money dose not have the fantastic power.



写得很恶心，之前两篇写得比较趋向复杂，容易中式英语，这次又觉得写的太平了，请狠批，谢谢。