10.27作文

hualazimiUID: 2707120

10.27作文
As the computer technology developed on every passing day, twenty years later, students will no longer use the printed book any more. In recent years, techniques and innovations like video and personal computer coming into our daily life. They are more convenient for us to communicate with each other.

Today, more and more teachers prefer to use PowerPoint as a assistant for their class. It also be easy for children to learn, they will not have to look at the textbook to search where is going on. The muti-media teaching can stimulate students’ interests. For example, in a chemical class, the teacher can use “flash” to make a cartoon to show how different molecules combined each other in the chemical reaction, this vividly description can help students comprehend the essence of the whole process. However, if the students only using the textbook for study, learning effects can not be so obvious.

With the increasing development of network technology, internet can help students do better in their studying. They can not only download a variety of materials but also ask their questions online. They also have an opportunity to communicate with students from everywhere in the world. Even scholars could get to know the latest research in his/her field. All these above can not be offered by a textbook.

Students who want to know more about extra-curricular knowledge may acquire according to the TV program. Instead of reading printed books, TV programs offer us a lively images and sound. Have you ever been shacked to Jack giving up his right to life for his beloved girl in Titanic? Have you ever been moved to banker Andy in The Shaw shank Redemption’s pursuit of freedom and hope? He once said:“Some birds are not caged, their feathers are just too bright.”The television gives students a window to the world. It can passed the events happened in the world to us quickly and accurately. It also can let students know what they couldn’t get from the printed book. When we see the film Harry Potter and the Sorcerer’s Stone, we know how friendship and love overcome evil and greed. We also understand even without parents we can still be optimistic and happy. Excellent films enrich the students’ lives.

In sum, in my point of view, after twenty years, students have no need to read printed book since more and more substitute products come into being. All these products have their own advantages. In the end, books will be eliminated by time.

ice--breakerUID: 2717367

语言不是很流利，中式英语比较多。例子挺充分的。
As the computer technology developed（用一般现在时比较好 on every passing day, twenty years later, students will no longer use the printed book any more.（no longer和any more重复了吧） In recent years, techniques and innovations like video and personal computer coming into our daily life. They are more convenient for us to communicate with each other.（觉得第二句先说，再说第一句好点，逻辑性强些）
Today, more and more teachers prefer to use PowerPoint as a assistant for their class. It also be（is） easy for children to learn, they will not have to look at the textbook to search where is going on. The muti-media teaching can stimulate students’ interests. For example, in a chemical class, the teacher can use “flash” to make a cartoon to show how different molecules combined each other in the chemical reaction, this vividly description can help students comprehend the essence of the whole process. However, if the students only using the textbook for study, learning effects can not be so obvious.


With the increasing development of network technology, internet can help students do better in their studying. They can not only download a variety of materials but also ask their questions online. They also have an opportunity to communicate with students from everywhere in the world.（Not only can they download a variety of material and ask questions online,but also have an opportunity to communicate with students from everywhere in the world.这样就没那么看起来很冗长了） Even scholars could get to know the latest research in his/her field. All these above can not be offered by a textbook.
Students who want to know more about extra-curricular knowledge may acquire according to the TV program（？）. Instead of reading printed books, TV programs offer us a lively images and sound. Have you ever been shacked to Jack giving up his right to life for his beloved girl in Titanic? Have you ever been moved to banker Andy in The Shaw shank Redemption’s pursuit of freedom and hope? He once said:“Some birds are not caged, their feathers are just too bright.”The television gives students a window to the world. It can passed the events happened in the world to us quickly and accurately. It also can let students know what they couldn’t get from the printed book. When we see the film Harry Potter and the Sorcerer’s Stone, we know how friendship and love overcome evil and greed. We also understand even without parents（放在句尾好点） we can still be optimistic and happy. Excellent films enrich the students’ lives.
In sum, in my point of view, after twenty years, students have no need to read printed book since more and more substitute products come into being. All these products have their own advantages. In the end, books will be eliminated by time.

hualazimiUID: 2707120

10.29作文
With the increasing fierce competition today, we should to know how to plan and organize our life and study. Having a carefully plan let people have a clear goal and motivate us to learn more. Knowing how to organize things make us use time efficiently, decrease unexpected things happens. Due to this we can control our life well and do well in our work and study.

We should make plan for our further, and do right now to prepare for the target. Chinese people know a gentleman well, Yu min hong, the president of New Oriental group, the biggest education corporation in China. He is so called a successful person because he made plans for each step of his life. He spent three years to be admitted to the Peking University to learn English. After graduation, he wanted to run the largest English training center in China. So he first joined in a training institution to let people gradually know him. When students recognized that he was a excellent teacher. He started his own company and even till New Oriental’s stock listed in NYSE.

As an essential personality, we should also learn how to organize. In the current society, we shouldn’t only know how to study. We should know how to get along well with different people. Even in the university, when we join in a program, we should have a common sense of communicating. When we are elected to become a leader, we should know how to organize this program and motive every team member ‘s potentiality.

Careful planning and organizing are requisites part of life, especially when one’s decisions can impact one’s own life and the lives of others in a significant way. For example, the CEO of a company must weigh all of his options cautiously. After all, his decisions will impact not only his life and that of his family but also the lives of his workers and families. Due to a miscalculation on his part the company could incur significant losses.

In sum, in order to adopt the fast tempo daily life and become an excellent person, we should learn how to plan our further and organize the current things.

karen_0315UID: 2590040

With the increasing fierce competition today, we should to know how to plan and organize our life and study. Having a carefully plan let people have a clear goal and motivate us to learn more. Knowing how to organize things make us use time efficiently, decrease unexpected things happens. Due to this we can control our life well and do well in our work and study.

We should make plan for our further, and do right now to prepare for the target. Chinese people know a gentleman well, Yu min hong, the president of New Oriental group, the biggest education corporation in China. He is so called a successful person because he made plans for each step of his life. He spent three years to be admitted to the Peking University to learn English. After graduation, he wanted to run the largest English training center in China. So he first joined in a training institution to let people gradually know him. When students recognized that he was a excellent teacher. He started his own company and even till New Oriental’s stock listed in NYSE.

As an essential personality, we should also learn how to organize. In the current society, we shouldn’t only know how to study. We should know how to get along well with different people. Even in the university, when we join in a program, we should have a common sense of communicating. When we are elected to become a leader, we should know how to organize this program and motive every team member ‘s potentiality.

Careful planning and organizing are requisites part of life, especially when one’s decisions can impact one’s own life and the lives of others in a significant way. For example, the CEO of a company must weigh all of his options cautiously. After all, his decisions will impact not only his life and that of his family but also the lives of his workers and families. Due to a miscalculation on his part the company could incur significant losses.

In sum, in order to adopt（adapt？） the fast tempo daily life and become an excellent person, we should learn how to plan our further and organize the current things.
语言上还需要下功夫，当然我也是，还是多看看native是怎么写的吧。另外俞敏洪的例子，当然ETS不认识他可能就无所谓了，我算是比较了解吧，看过几本他的传记，他一开始根本就没有计划到现在的，基本上是误打误撞。当然用了也无所谓，ETS不知道他是谁

melody106UID: 2559573

With the increasing fierce competition today, we should to (去掉to)know how to plan and organize our life and study. Having a carefully plan let people have a clear goal and motivate us to learn more. Knowing

melody106UID: 2559573

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With the increasing fierce competition today, we should to know how to plan and organize our life and study. Having a carefully plan let people have a clear goal and motivate us to learn more. Knowing how to organize things make us use time efficiently, decrease unexpected things happens. Due to this we can control our life well and do well in our work and study.
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We should make plan for our further（future）, and do right now to prepare for the target. Chinese people know a gentleman well, Yu min hong, the president of New Oriental group, the biggest education corporation in China. He is so called a successful person because he made plans for each step of his life. He spent three years to be admitted to the Peking University to learn English. After graduation, he wanted to run the largest English training center in China. So he first joined in a training institution to let people gradually know him. When students recognized that he was a excellent teacher. He started his own company and even till 这么写感觉他现在不干了New Oriental’s stock listed in NYSE. % I- j  Y# D4 ]! b5 ]  \

) D4 M) k6 p; f5 J" yAs an essential personality, 前后半句不合，后面应由ability to organize作主语we should also learn how to organize. In the current society, we shouldn’t only know how to study. We should know how to get along well with different people. Even 不构成递进，学校也是社会的一部分in the university, when we join in a program, we should have a common sense of communicating. When we are elected to become a leader, we should know how to organize this program and motive every team member ‘s potentiality. ) I3 C4 s0 A6 x) J0 n- f$ c; X$ c9 C
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Careful planning and organizing are requisites part of life, especially when one’s decisions can impact one’s own life and the lives of others in a significant way. For example, the CEO of a company must weigh all of his options cautiously. After all, his decisions will impact not only his life and that of his family but also the lives of his workers and families. Due to a miscalculation on his part the company could incur significant losses.1 l. E, s. v: B- |4 r1 ?

1 W7 U9 i, j" K1 uIn sum, in order to adopt the fast tempo daily life and become an excellent person, we should learn how to plan our further and organize the current things.

melody106UID: 2559573

网络有问题，
不好意思
觉得语言有点问题，不大通畅。注意个别语法问题。加油啊！