issue40 【红尘笑看沧桑】互改小组第四次作业 by 立刻马上

立刻马上UID: 2737860

ISSUE40 "Scholars and researchers should not be concerned with whether their work makes a contribution to the larger society. It is more important that they pursue their individual interests, however unusual or idiosyncratic those interests may seem."



In this era of rapid social and technological change leading to increasing complex problems, people rely much on scholars and researchers to come up with solutions. In the other hand, the individual interest is very important for them. For scholars and researchers, they should keep a balance between their concern with society and their own interests.

There is no denying that individual interests are necessary for scholars in order to come up with new ideas and invent new devices. As Albert Einstein puts it, “interest is the best teacher”, this illustrates the points that the curiosity for something is a must for researchers to work and will give them motivation. What's more, many innovations, which have changed the whole world afterward, start with some idiosyncratic thoughts. For example, the world famous search engine Google first come into Sergey Brin and Larry Page's mind just because it is interesting. Simply put, without individual interests, scholars and researchers will lose their motivation in social and scientific research and many achievements would not be made.

However, it is morally dangerous if paying too much attention to the individual interests and ignoring the social responsibility. Common sense tells us that interests have no directions, in other words, we cannot judge whether something should be done or not only by interests. Just think about the problem in the front line research in life science. It can be scientists' individual interests to clone a human, but it is morally forbidden because it will lead to a disaster of the ethics. Similar situation appears in the development of nuclear weapons. In a word we cannot ensure that if some dangerous behaviors will be made during research just following one’s interests.

Not only may preference for individual interests be dangerous in terms of the ethic, but it can also serve to prevent many valuable findings and projects from happening. For example, the Apollo mission, which involved in many scientists and engineers, cannot be made just because of the interests of those people. There was a strength that tied them together to overcome the great challenge through it- the belief to make a breakthrough for all human beings. Interests can make a person more individual, while the desire to contribute to society makes us united.

To sum up, without the evaluation of social contribution, the achievements scholars made cannot be better assessed. Without a society that recognizes the importance of social responsibility for scientists, researchers will lose their directions. Thus, while pursuing their individual interests is necessary, it is equally important to have a view of the value they have to made for the society.

立刻马上UID: 2737860

今天给一下AGRUMENT的提纲
分析
论据：
Karp采用观察的方式---------》Tertia的孩子是有村里所有人带大的
我用采访的方法群岛上的孩子更多的讨论他们的父母---------》Tertia的孩子是有父母带大的
论点：
（1）这个研究证明Karp的观察法是不对的，
（2）而我们采用访谈的方法得出的其他关于Tertia的结论更精确

批驳
1、没有证据证明这群孩子里面有Tertia的孩子，因此不能通过这样的访谈证明Tertia的孩子是父母带大的
2、即使这里面有Tetia的孩子，而且占了一定比例，对父母谈论的比较多也不能证明他们就是由父母带大的，可能有很多诱导性的问题让他们提到父母，可能即使是一起带大的，但父母和他们接触的时间比较多
3、即使这里面有Tetia的孩子是由父母带大的，也不能证明观察法就完全没有用，可能观察法对其他不能通过语言了解的信息会比访谈法更好

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In this era of rapid social and technological change leading to increasing complex problems, people rely much on scholars and researchers to come up with solutions. In(on) the other hand, the individual interest is very important for them. For scholars and researchers, they should keep a balance between their concern with society(social contribution)and their own interests.
There is no denying that individual interests are necessary for scholars in order to come up with new ideas and invent new devices. As Albert Einstein puts it, “interest is the best teacher”, this illustrates the points that the curiosity for something is a must for researchers to work and will give them motivation. What's more, many innovations, which have changed the whole world afterward, start with some idiosyncratic thoughts. For example, the world famous search engine Google first come into Sergey Brin and Larry Page's mind just because it is interesting. Simply put, without individual interests, scholars and researchers will lose their motivation in social and scientific research and many achievements would not be made.
However, it is morally dangerous if paying too much attention to the individual interests and ignoring the social responsibility. Common sense tells us that interests have no directions, in other words, we cannot judge whether something should be done or not only by interests. Just think about the problem in the front line research in life science. It can be scientists' individual interests to clone a human, but it is morally forbidden because it will lead to a disaster of the ethics. Similar situation appears in the development of nuclear weapons. In a word, we cannot ensure that if some dangerous behaviors will be made during research just following one’s interests.
Not only may preference for individual interests be dangerous in terms of the ethic, but it can also serve to prevent many valuable findings and projects from happening. For example, the Apollo mission, which involved in many scientists and engineers, cannot be made just because of the interests of those people. There was a strength that tied them together to overcome the great challenge through it- the belief to make a breakthrough for all human beings. Interests can make a person more individual, while the desire to contribute to society makes us united.
我觉得这个观点不怎么合适，个人兴趣怎么会阻止重大发现呢？根据你的例子应该是，为了某些重大问题或国家利益，科学家应该能够适当放弃自己的理想。
To sum up, without the evaluation of social contribution, the achievements scholars made cannot be better assessed. Without a society that recognizes the importance of social responsibility for scientists, researchers will lose their directions. Thus, while pursuing their individual interests is necessary, it is equally important to have a view of the value they have to made for the society.

我觉得这篇文章审题上有点问题。这个题目有两个方面，第一，科学家不用关心自己的研究对社会是否有贡献，第二，他们应该追求自己的兴趣，无论这种兴趣是多么不寻常和奇特。而你几乎是在分析第二个问题。我觉得你最好就第一个问题写一段。

立刻马上UID: 2737860

我的论述主要其实是针对issue的论点展开的，我预设了一个我的position，也就是极力反驳他的观点，那么作为我的话，主要做的就是对唯兴趣论进行批判，而在批判的同时也就是论述的2、3两段提出社会责任感的重要性，所以没有注意两者的平衡，我不知道你是否能够同意我这样的写法
另外对于说个人兴趣对重大工程的阻碍，我主要是想说明如果每个科学家都太过在乎个人的兴趣，完全把个人放在首位可能造成的危害，也就是考虑极端情况来证明，必须两方面平衡，用中文表达的话我觉得说的过去，但可能换到英文就有问题了

xiaxiaobing919UID: 2606450

我觉得写的很不错啊~~审题也很到位，学习学习