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Do we exaggerate the difficulties of issues that we face currently as the speaker asserts? Albeit some of the experience and knowledge we got from the remote past do us a great favor to simplified troubles somehow, I fundamentally conflict with this assertion since we even hardly evaluate the complexity of problems on the basis of acknowledgement toward the world today.
It is indisputable the fact that we live in a golden age created by our processors, who laid the foundations of overall subjects and constructed our awareness toward nature vividly. Thanks to their day-and-night dedication to truth, can we enjoy relatively mature theories and principles in comfort and at ease? ?如果前面用了thanks to, 这里又用反问语气?还是想用倒装的句式?没懂~Their knowledge and experience provide us a wide range of insight to deep into the realms from macrograph to micrograph. If we create more benefits than certain other generations, it is by standing upon the shoulders of our predecessors. From their wisdom and lessons we synthesize, conclude, even predict what will goes on. Even from most of dilemmas in respect to human society, can we find the model to imitate through reconstruction of the past, since humanity is ever-lasting. Whatever contradict with nature principle and humanity, no matter how strong initially, will diminish like echoes in the wind. In this sense, the speaker might conclude that what we encounter today is not as harsh as our predecessors, with full confidence and optimism. 先肯定作者的说法
However, we are, in fact, still confronted with dilemmas never happened before. If we cannot solve them properly and cautiously, serious consequence even disasters might fall. Examples aptly illustrate this point involve the utility of new technology. While enjoying the prosperous economic that brings by science and technology, new forms of pollution and environmental stress also become headaches of us, since they are potentially damaging the welare of humans or other organisms. Certain prevention to the failure of nuclear power and chemical plants have few previous cases to follow, whereas these technologies are gradually widely spread in despite of their immaturity. In the case of medical technology, vital ethical issues are readdressed and challenged. New fetal diseases such as SARS and H1N1 epidemics emerge, which need worldwide researches and the cooperations to prevent. Even assuming we are spurring up by courage and wisdoms of our predecessors, these problems can scarcely be solved by methods nowadays, not alone by knowledge and experience before. Based on different developments of technology, the speaker cannot have the same level to measure the complexity of problems we face. 仍会遇到新问题,不能靠经验和先进科技解决列例子。
Although knowledge and experience are gradually accumulated, puzzlement does not lessen. As a student major in science, I cannot be more aware that most of superficial principles are easy to prove, while the great ocean of truth lay almost undiscovered before us. Some scientists working in their lifelong(work all the life) but still hardly find (have found)any rule to follow. Nevertheless, when we do research only for its own sake, it might amount to risk squandering and deploying public resource to fight a losing battle which could have gone a long way towards addressing the pressing social problems such as rampant gang violence, hunger and so on. Because summarizing the experience cannot satisfy our needs, researches are meaningful and appealing. Meanwhile, the more knowledge we acquire, the stronger feeling about the ignorance we recognize.
经验和先进技术不能解决的问题需不断探索
In sum, without the experience of predecessors, we might still fumble and wander blindly. Yet this new era have us realize the burden we have are greater and more complex than that of ancestor. Under such circumstances, established knowledge and experience merely cover the brink of the truth. Only through continuous prove and disregarding , will problems become obvious to be solved.
用了半肯半否的方法,先肯定作者言论,接下来又说不是所有问题都能依靠经验和先进技术解决,第三段又说这些问题仍需要不断探索。一层一层递进,层次比较分明。
但是,仍然需要注意语法等错误,语言很不错。 |
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