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In the reading passage, there are some critical opinions on the subject of online encyclopedias in the main three respects except for benefits it has brought about.

Meanwhile, the professor refutes that even if it is critized that communal online encyclopedia remain short of academic credentials and thus, errors may appear as routine, everyone are not able to guarantee perfect accuracy from traditional encyclopedias. The public could possess an easier way to creat errors online which can be corrected readily, however, once mistakes of concepts are built in traditional paper-made books, they would last for decades.

Secondly, it is also considered that hackers get increasing access to fabricating and corrupting information online. The professor argues that it is already in protection from such offensive behaviors by strategies such as setting special format that nobody could change crucial factors.
Finally, the professor debate the view that the online one lead a bias of interest and focus for the common by illustrating that since the traditional books embrace limited space for the whole, to some extent, old-fashioned, they could not reflect great diversity on current hot topics worldwide. Consequently, without doubt, it is ridiculous to put excessive attention on that issue.
To sum up, both advantages and disadvantages are in detailed analysis on the controversial issue associated with online encyclopedias. The trend of online one would sooner or later take into being as a popular form to the young particularly.

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Meanwhile, the professor refutes that even if it is criticized that communal online encyclopedias remain short of academic credentials and thus(???逻辑关系不对
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errors online which can be corrected readily, however, once mistakes of concepts are built in traditional paper-made books, they would last for decades.
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Secondly, it is also considered that hackers get increasing access to fabricating and corrupting information online.

The professor argues that it is already in protection
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Finally, the professor debate against the view that the online one lead a bias of interest and focus for the common by illustrating that since the traditional books embrace limited space for the whole, to some extent, old-fashioned, they could not reflect great diversity on current hot topics worldwide. Consequently, without doubt, it is ridiculous to put excessive attention on that issue.(not mentioned the advantage of communal version

To sum up, both advantages and disadvantages are in detailed analysis on the controversial issue associated with online encyclopedias. The trend of online one would sooner or later take into being as a popular form to the young particularly结尾还是应该说说lecture的观点，这个延伸有点过了