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mangohahaUID: 2758178

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important for families to regularly eat their meals together.

Is it necessary for families to have dinners together regularly? For me, the answer is positive. As for some cultures, such as in China, regular family meeting has became a must and a traditional rite. Also,
In the highly competitive society, people need such a meeting to communicate with his family reducing their pressure.


To begin with, there is a series of periods which are speical for families to get together and enjoy a delicious meal. Just like the spring festival in China, the Christmas in America and so on, these days mean too much for families and hence make a family meal be regarded as a kind of tradition. For exampe, people would come back home to have a dinner with parents in the spring festival in China, althought they are working in different cities or countries. The meaning of this meal has surpassed its original meaning and can be interpreted as the method of feeling the family’s harmony. In general, the traditional family meal has its special meaning and should be taken regularly.

Secondly, the family meeting, it also can be considered as the time providing relaxation for people. In consideration of the increasingly pressure from people’s work, people do need a special time after a long time work. In the dinner, people can have an opportunity to express their feeling and exchange their thought to their relatives. You know, in the modern society, since peope have less time to express their real thought in heart, so that, the family table would be the best harbor of their tired soul spirit. During the meal, families would talk about the happiness or unhappiness they met during the past time. In short, it is helpful to families to enjoy the happy time and hence forget the setback.

Lastly, besides these benefit brought by a regular family dinner, there are numerous reasons determind the appearance of family meal. The hard work, in some cases, forces the family dinner must be taken regularly. Just like one of my American friend, Mack, who is working in a international company. Now, he is working in China, as a result, he has little time to return home for the reason of busy work day after day. Accordingly, the Christmas and New Year have became the solid time for him to enjoy his harmonious family with his families. Generally, faced with our careers, we should appraciate these limited days to have a family dinner, even the period is regular, but we can feel the special meaning behind the meal.

Lastly, I entirely agree with the topic that since the pressure from people’s careers and the demand of people’s spirit, a regular meal with our families is necessary. It provides people a special time to communicate with relatives, in particular, it helps us enjoy the harmony and warm of family.

O(∩_∩)O谢谢

奇流沙UID: 2698749

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important for families to regularly eat their meals together.

Is it necessary for families to have dinners together regularly? For me, the answer is positive(嗯，这个用得好，记下了). As for some cultures, such as in China, regular family meeting has become a must(essential) and a traditional rite. Also(Furthermore), i in the highly competitive society, people need such a meeting to communicate with his family reducing(and reduce??还是想要表达减轻是交流的结果？) their pressure.
To begin with(?), there is a series of periods which are special for families to get together and enjoy a delicious meal. Just like the spring festival in China, the Christmas in America and so on, these days mean too much for families and hence make(用动词不定时或者动名词为主语) a family meal be (is) regarded as a kind of tradition. For example, people would come back home to have a dinner with parents in the spring festival in China, although they are working in different cities or countries. The meaning of this meal has surpassed its original meaning and can be interpreted as the method of feeling the family’s harmony(好观点). In general, the traditional family meal has its special meaning and should be taken regularly.
Secondly, the family meeting, it also can be considered as the time providing relaxation for people. In consideration of the increasing(ly) pressure from people’s work, people do need a special time after a long time work(working). In the dinner, people can have an opportunity to express their feeling and exchange their thought to their relatives. You know, in the modern society, since people have less time to express their real thought in heart, so that, the family table would be the best harbor of their tired soul and spirit. During the meal, families would talk about the happiness or unhappiness they met during the past time. In short, it is helpful to(for) families to enjoy the happy time and hence forget the setback.3
Lastly, besides these benefit brought by regular family dinners, there are numerous reasons determined the appearance of family meal. The hard work, in some cases, forces the family dinner must be taken regularly. Just like one of my American friend, Mack, who is working in an international company. Now, he is working in China, as a result, he has little time to return home for the reason of busy workday after day. Accordingly, the Christmas and New Year have become the solid time for him to enjoy his harmonious family with his families. Generally, faced with our careers, we should appreciate these limited days to have a family dinner, even the period is regular, but we can feel the special meaning behind the meal.
Lastly(In sum), I entirely agree with the topic that since the pressure from people’s careers and the demand of people’s spirit, a regular meal with our families is necessary. It provides people a special time to communicate with relatives; in particular, it helps us enjoy the harmony and warm of family.
芒果同学，猿粪哪~~
后面两段基本没有文法错误了(不过也许是我功力不够没有看出来?)。前两段论点很明确。但是美中不足的是倒数第二段提出因为辛苦工作而要定期聚餐没有论证，只直接上了例子。提出的例子，我觉得用在第二段：有一些特别的节日提供一起定期聚餐的机会那个论点下更好。唉，今天不知怎么这么鸡蛋里挑骨头，刚刚在Ivy的文里给ta拆了一段………………见谅见谅，如果打乱了你的全文思路，直接无视好了~~O(∩_∩)O~

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2# 奇流沙
O(∩_∩)O~ 真的挺有缘的
感谢你的批改。。。
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