2.11 students will not use printed books anymore.

yuminjiaUID: 2659628

In 20 years from now on, students will not use printed books anymore.

  Concerning the merits of non-printed books, such as electrical books will preponderate over the surperioty of printed books which are wildly used by students at present, I agree with the statement that students will not used printed books any more in two decades from now on.
  To begin with, it is indisputable that e-books are more conveninent than conventional printed books in most aspects,such as explicit catalogs,appreciable information and fast access of searching.For example, if we would write a paper, we needn't search all kinds of reference in the library or buy lots of related paper material in book store.With advanting of e-books, such a disc including a on-line electrial library, we can find adquent related stuffs for the paper.Additionly, such e-book has an explicit breakdown which helps us find what we required quickly.Hence, more and more student willing to use e-books instead of printed books.
  Furthermore, it is undoubted that in order to produce paper books,we will cut down considerable trees, thus causing environmental issues, such as global warming.Meanwhile, the proceduce of processing lambers will also lead to effluent pollution.From a recent statistic report from our government, the area of forests in China is reducing by a rate of 2 percent every year.However, we still continue to cut down trees to make paper books, thus causing an unimaginable detriment to our environment in the future.In contrast, the using of e-books will avoid destoring amounts of forests.Hence, it is a wiser choice to use e-books for student in the future.
  Finally, although e-book is a worldwide trend, admittedly, traditional printed books could not be completely replaced by e-book in a short period.However, with the rapid improvement of high-technology, our society will finally become a fully digital epoch.So,
e-book,rather than printed books,is an indispensable learning material for students.
  Judging from what I mentioned above, e-book will bring us more conventience than printed books. In addition, it will not lead to serious environment issues.Therefore, it is obvious that student would not use printed books, but e-books as studying stuff any more in twenty years from now on.

奇流沙UID: 2698749

2.11 students will not use printed books anymore.

In 20 years from now on, students will not use printed books anymore.
Concerning the merits of non-printed books, such as electrical books will preponderate over the superiority of printed books which are wildly used by students at present, I agree with the statement that students will not used printed books any more in two decades from now on.: F7 \1 V, w: l
  To begin with, it is indisputable that e-books are more convenient than conventional printed books in most aspects, such as explicit catalogs, appreciable information and fast access of searching. For example, if we would write a paper, we needn't search all kinds of reference in the library or buy lots of related paper material in book store. With (advanting) advantages of e-books, such a disc including a on-line electric(al) library, we can find adequate related stuffs for the paper. Additionally, such e-book has an explicit breakdown which helps us find what we required quickly. Hence, more and more students are willing to use e-books instead of printed books.
  Furthermore, it is undoubted that in order to produce paper books, we will cut down considerable trees, thus causing environmental issues, such as global warming. Meanwhile, the procedure of processing lambers will also lead to effluent pollution.(恕我无知，但是真心求教这句是什么意思?) From a recent statistic report from our government, the area of forests in China is reducing by a rate of 2 percent every year. However, we still continue to cut down trees to make paper books, thus causing an unimaginable detriment to our environment (in the future). In contrast, the using of e-books will avoid destroying amounts of forests. Hence, it is a wiser choice to use e-books for student in the future.
  Finally, although e-book is a worldwide trend, admittedly, traditional printed books could not be completely replaced by e-book in a short period. (这一句态度有点暧昧，二十年算长算短？) However, with the rapid improvement of high-technology, our society will finally become a fully digital epoch. So, e-book, rather than printed books, is an indispensable learning material for students.
  Judging from what I mentioned above, e-book will bring us more convenience than printed books. In addition, it will not lead to serious environment issues. Therefore, it is obvious that student would not use printed books, but e-books as studying stuff any more in twenty years from now on.

呃，不敢说改作文，只能说是学习。结构清晰，读起来也很顺畅，每个句子的安排都让人觉得理所当然，看完这样的写作再看自己的，觉得自己得再回炉练上个N久。还有真的求教绿色标出的句子，我当真的没懂。还烦请大人短消息告知。谢谢~

小心littleheartUID: 2726034

In 20 years from now on, students will not use printed books anymore.7 ]/ O9 M1 H5 y. Y/ P

  Concerning the merits of non-printed books, such as（我不确定such as后面可以跟句子） electrical books will preponderate over the surperoity(拼写错误) of printed books which are wildly used by students at present, I agree with the statement that students will not used printed books any more in two decades from now on.
  To begin with, it is indisputable that e-books are more convenient than conventional printed books in most aspects, such as explicit catalogs, appreciable information and fast access of searching. For example, if we would（要表示虚拟语气？） write （on） a paper, we needn't （to）search all kinds of references in the library or buy lots of related paper materials in book store. With advanting (the advent) of e-books, such a disc including a on-line electrical library, we can find adequate related stuffs for the paper. Additionly, such e-book has an explicit breakdown(可以这样用？神奇~) which helps us find what we required quickly. Hence, more and more student （are）willing to use e-books instead of printed books.5 f. m5 k: A) ?* }5 ?
  Furthermore, it is undoubted that in order to produce paper books, we will cut down considerable trees, thus causing environmental issues, such as global warming. Meanwhile, the procedure of processing lambers（啥意思？） will also lead to effluent pollution. From （According to） a recent statistic report from our government, the area of forests in China is reducing by a rate of 2 percent every year. However, we still continue to cut down trees to make paper books, thus causing an unimaginable detriment to our environment in the future. In contrast, the using of e-books will avoid destroying amounts of forests. Hence, it is a wiser choice to use e-books for student in the future.
  Finally, although e-book is a worldwide trend, admittedly, traditional printed books could not be completely replaced by e-book in a short period. However, with the rapid improvement of high-technology, our society will finally become a fully digital epoch. So, e-book, rather than printed books, is an indispensable learning material for students.3 [4 E* I, O8 c0 r. h* ~. Y
  Judging from what I mentioned above, e-book will bring us more convenience than printed books. In addition, it will not lead to serious environment issues. Therefore, it is obvious that student would not use printed books, but e-books as studying stuff any more (去掉，否则意思不通) in twenty years from now on.

楼主文章结构很清晰，布局也合理~对主题把握的不错， 不过有些拼写错误，导致我看不懂楼主想用哪个词~语法上稍微注意一下~注意介词