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Do you agree or disagree with the statement: Playing sports can teach us the important lesson of life.
Personally, since basic lessons of people’s live involve a series of factors, meanwhile, playing sports can teach people parts of these factors including teamwork, rediscovering self and never goving a way to trouble. Hence, I entirely agree with the assertion that playing sports help people learn lessons of life.

To begin with, sports play irreplaceable role in people’s daily live, especially in the aspect of clutivating the spirit of teamwork. Such as basketball, football and so on, the charm of all these popular games, in some dgree, springs from that players help each other and fight for the final goal. In particular, during the progress of a game, people can learn the importance of others and hence understand his own responsibility in a team. In other words, the game teach people how to care about others, how to get long with partners and finally, what is the real nature of teamwork.


Secondly, another essential lessons brought by sprots must be rediscovering themsleves. Living in the highly competitive era, under the highly stressful environment, sometimes people have to disguise themsleves, eventually, they would lose themselves. In this condition, people do need an effective method to express their feeling, thought and even pressure. A tiny example about myself, whenever I feel low, I would like to switch my condition-playing basketball without any worries-to forget unhappy things which is every useful. Furthermore, I can be refreshed and full of energy and rediscover myself after the kind of release.

Lastly, the last and most essential lesson sports can bring about is preseverance. That is to say, in the process of sports, especially watching the basketball, sports give me a senes of never giving up whenever I suffer kinds of setbacks. Honestly, I get this feeling from one of my favorite sport programs that is, NBA. Also, my favorite players is Iverson since he teachs me what is strong, I mean, the “strong” does’t mean the strong body, but the spirit or a strong soul. No matter how powerful opponents he face, he never fear and would fight for his own belief. Generally, I am convincing that the saying” where amazing happen” is from his kind of preseverance.

In sum. I am a big sports lover, especially the basketball, I learn so much from sports, ranging from strong preseverance, respecting others to the nature of teamwork. Accordingly, I agree that sports is helpful and exert positive effects in the process of human growth.

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Personally, since basic lessons of people’s live involve a series of factors, meanwhile, playing sports can teach people parts of these factors including teamwork, rediscovering self and never goving（goving拼写错误） a way to trouble. Hence, I entirely agree with the assertion that playing sports help people learn lessons of life.3 h. D$ _! ?& ^% v8 Z5 w# ^% f

To begin with, sports play irreplaceable role in people’s daily live（daily life）, especially in the aspect of clutivating（cultivating） the spirit of teamwork. Such as basketball, football and so on, the charm of all these popular games, in some dgree,（degree） springs from that players help each other and fight （fights）for the final goal. In particular, during the progress（换成process会好点） of a game, people can learn the importance of others and hence understand his own responsibility in a team. In other words, the game teach people how to care about others, how to get long with partners and finally, what is the real nature of teamwork." B0 ], j7 l- M
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Secondly, another essential lessons brought by sprots（sports） must be（must be 改成is） rediscovering themsleves（themselves）. Living in the highly competitive era, under the highly stressful environment, sometimes people have to disguise themsleves （themselves）, eventually, they would lose themselves. In this condition, people do need an effective method to express their feeling, thought and even pressure. A tiny example about myself, whenever I feel low, I would like to switch my condition-playing basketball without any worries-to forget unhappy things which is every useful. Furthermore, I can be refreshed and full of energy and rediscover myself after the kind of release.

Lastly, the last and most essential lesson sports can bring about is perseverance. That is to say, in the process of sports, especially watching the basketball, sports give me a senes (sense) of never giving up whenever I suffer kinds of setbacks. Honestly, I get this feeling from one of my favorite sport programs that is, NBA. Also, my favorite players is Iverson since he teachs (teaches)me what is strong, I mean, the “strong” doesn’t mean the strong body, but the spirit or a strong soul. No matter how powerful opponents he face, he never fear and would fight for his own belief. Generally, I am convincing that the saying” where amazing happen” is from his kind of preseverance.(perseverance)

In sum. I am a big sports lover, especially the basketball, I learn so much from sports, ranging from strong preseverance, respecting others to the nature of teamwork. Accordingly, I agree that sports is helpful and exert positive effects in the process of human growth.结尾最好明确点明三个观点。
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