[Big Fish]2月27日Issue11 by-BobbieZZ

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Issue 11
"All nations should help support the development of a global university designed to engage students in the process of solving the world's most persistent social problems."
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The statement suggests that all nations should set up a worldwide university to engage students to solve the world’s most persistent social problems. However, it might be too further the speaker asserts, in my opinion the global university have advantages in several aspects, even have limited in other features.

Firstly, with the world developing, more and more people prefer to go abroad to gain knowledge and broaden their outlook. Global university is in conformance with the current of time. It is necessary to construction it would not only make convenience to communication with nations but also gain widely knowledge from both professors and other students. Nowadays, the most excellent university and colleges is all feel disposed for recruiting international students, such as Oxford, Cambridge, Yale, Stanford and so forth. So I agree with the speaker that all nations should construct a global university.

However, whatever university students study in schoolwork is the majority significant their learner should accomplish. It is too complicated to solve the world’s most persistent social problem by the students. This problem can not be unraveled by the most intelligent politicians, how could the undergraduates work out the answer? It is a obvious envision which the author imagine. Although, there are social college that have the wisdom professors and scholars with widely social knowledge, it would be work out a rudiment solution about a society dilemma. To make it realized only based on nation politicians and reality. Scholars are difficult to avoid their academism and unreality thoughts. As a result, nation global university is not omnipotent to solve all difficulties including the persistent world’s social problems.

Thirdly, even if the university which speaker support could not solve the dilemmas of the worst social problem, it should have its features to distinguish from other. The schoolmaster should utilize the university’s feature which conclude wide nation learner to focus on such as college of sociology, education, communication and language institute. For instance, the Yale University in United Stated is the earliest original university which set up social course. Sociology is one of the excellent curriculums in that institution of higher education. Demotics would both culture more excellent students such as Max Weber and offer useful academy’s successes to society.

To sum up, I agree with the point of view that all nations should sustain the recommendation that construct a global university, however the author exaggerate the function which a university would have. It cannot solve the worst dilemma of society. In addition, I have advice that the focal point in the university should be the college of sociology.

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The statement suggests that all nations should set up a worldwide university to engage students to solve the world’s most persistent social problems. However, it might be too further the speaker asserts (没看懂哦), in my opinion the global university have advantages in several aspects, even have limited limits in other features.

Firstly, with the world developing, more and more people prefer to go abroad to gain knowledge and broaden their outlook. AND (这句子一定要连词的) Global university is in conformance with the current of time. It is necessary to construction construct because it would not only make convenience to communication with nations but also gain widely knowledge from both professors and other students. Nowadays, the most excellent university ties and colleges is are all feel disposed (没看懂..) for recruiting international students, such as Oxford, Cambridge, Yale, Stanford and so forth. So I agree with the speaker that all nations should construct a global university.
(感觉这段有些偏了，或是GLOBAL UNIVERSITY 的好处没有写出力度)
However, whatever university students study in schoolwork is the majority significant their learner should accomplish. It is too complicated to solve the world’s most persistent social problem by the students. This problem can not be unraveled by the most intelligent politicians, how could the undergraduates work out the answer? It is a obvious envision which the author imagine. Although, there are social college that have the wisdom professors and scholars with widely social knowledge, it would be work out a rudiment solution about a society dilemma. To make it realized only based on nation politicians and reality. Scholars are difficult to avoid their academism and unreality thoughts. As a result, nation global university is not omnipotent to solve all difficulties including the persistent world’s social problems. (加个例子吧，都是陈诉的，淡了，像写ARGUMENT了。)

Thirdly, even if the university which speaker support could not solve the dilemmas （用DILEMMA 貌似不妥） of the worst social problem, it should have its features to distinguish from other. The schoolmaster should utilize the university’s feature which concludes wide nation learner to focus on such as college of sociology, education, communication and language institute. For instance, the Yale University in United Stated is the earliest original university which set up social course. Sociology is one of the excellent curriculums in that institution of higher education. Demotics would both culture more excellent students such as Max Weber and offer useful academy’s successes to society. （这一段其实就是个SUGGESTION， 可以的，但关键的上一段就需要写多点了，可以加个例子，写生动些～～）

To sum up, I agree with the point of view that all nations should sustain the recommendation that construct a global university, however the author exaggerate the function which a university would have. It cannot solve the worst dilemma of society. In addition, I have advice that the focal point in the university should be the college of sociology.

看到最后，我非常喜欢的这个观点however the author exaggerate the function which a university would have， 为什么不写到开头呢？ 有语法错误哦，很多S没有加～ 注意了。还有字数不够啦，420. 加个生动的例子就可以把字数加上去

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2# tc1220

谢谢~你改的好认真嘿。。我会慢慢研究研究的
再改改，嘿嘿