3.6的作文

增肥UID: 2773671

As the stress increasing, individuals who are not healthy in physical and psychologically are on the rise. Then, more attention should be paid by goverment on health care issues. However, consedering deeply, you will realize that it is not  the fundamental way to dissovle this problem, and environmental issue is  the vital reason. So, acknowledging the problem, goverment should concern on environmental issues more than health issues.

           Nowadays, environmental problems become extremely serious. For instance, problems of global warming ,sea level increasing are international public topics. What is more, these problems cause a great percentage of diseases. In the recent years, Sichuan, which is in China, experienced a damaged earthquake which destroyed the majority of buildings and take away lots of lives of people. At this moment, i believe, the health care issue can not remedy all the people lost. And according to the experts, the reason relate to the worsing global environment. Obviously, to pay more attention on environmental issues means that dissolve the problem of health care.

            Environmental issues affect the health of people. For example, in the city all surrounding tall buildings limit trees and flowers. Moreover, the air in the city is poor. Those will cause to have the bad mood and unhealth body .But the phenomenon is completely opposite in the country. Neither do they have psychological problems, nor do they suicide. Also, most of them possess a strong body. So, it is more beneficial to concern on environmental problems.

             If goverment pay more attention to the environmental issues, then it is easy to dissolve the health care problems. Just imagine on the two side of streets stand tall trees and bloomy flowers. You will feel more happy. And flesh air and perfect environment are more suitable for living.

             Admittedly, health issues have its own advantages .By the same token, however, environmental issues is more basic. Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that goverment should be pay more attention on environmental issues.

lain0119UID: 2695504

As the stress increasing(as 后应该接句子~所以应该是increases), individuals who are not healthy in physical and psychologically are on the rise. Then, more attention should be paid by goverment on health care issues. However, consedering deeply, you will realize that it is not  the fundamental way to dissovle this problem, and environmental issue is  the vital reason(为什么environmental就vital 就可以解决人们的生理心理健康了呢?小小的论证一下,可以就用后文的分论点简略提示一下). So, acknowledging the problem, goverment should concern on environmental issues more than health issues.
         Nowadays, environmental problems become extremely serious. For instance, problems of global warming ,sea level increasing are international public topics. What is more, these problems cause a great percentage of diseases. In the recent years, Sichuan, which is in China, experienced a damaged earthquake which destroyed the majority of buildings and take away lots of lives of people(which 从句有点多了,用用分词结构吧~). At this moment, i believe, the health care issue can not remedy all the people lost. And according to the experts, the reason relate to the worsing global environment(具体一点,地震到底和什么worsing global environment 有关). Obviously, to pay more attention on environmental issues means that dissolve the problem of health care.
            Environmental issues affect the health of people. For example, in the city all surrounding tall buildings limit trees and flowers. Moreover, the air in the city is poor. Those will cause to have the bad mood and unhealth body .But the phenomenon is completely opposite in the country. Neither do they have psychological problems, nor do they suicide. Also, most of them possess a strong body. So, it is more beneficial to concern on environmental problems.
             If goverment pay more attention to the environmental issues, then it is easy to dissolve the health care problems. Just imagine on the two side of streets stand tall trees and bloomy flowers. You will feel more happy. And flesh air and perfect environment are more suitable for living. (这一段可以和上一段合并的,不能算第三个理由)

             Admittedly, health issues have its own advantages .By the same token, however, environmental issues is(are) more basic. (让步段还可以展开得充分些,而且最好不要当结尾)Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that goverment should be pay more attention on environmental issues.