[big fish]-3月9日-issue136-by Beenused

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Issue 136 The absence of choice is a circumstance that is very, very rare.

Once in my beloved middle school, one of my best teachers told me that the most painful thing in the world is to make choice cause after that choice, you may miss some other valuable thing that later you like to cherish, while at the same time, the most happy thing in the world also without any daunt is to make choice cause after that choice you can concentrate and release from suffering the trouble of too much choices. To be honest, really rarely do we meet a circumstance without any choice since you may always found that after all we have several choices to choose because there is no limitation for the deadline. Then what we truly complain is often there seems few wonderful choices since our appetite or desired are hardly fulfilled.
Coming first to indicate that there is rarely circumstances we have no choice. In our collective daily life we almost make choices and decisions every time and conman sense told us that each human being has his or her own mind and free will to make any choice he would like, so one’s will determine the choice. Take cooking a fish as an example, you may fried it to make humbuggers; you may boiled it cook a dish; or if you would like, you may eat it fresh; any choice if you would like to is possible, and that is truly depend on your personal will. So we may found that our lives are full of choices, and even in some NO CHOICE conditions we still find choices are always abundant. For instance, one man failed and left nothing with him now, he still has two choices: to death or to survive, if he choose to death then how to death there again offers several choices; if he choose to survive, then how to survive, there comes some choice, like to be beggar or restart his career. In brief summary, there is always full if you open your mind to find.
The second point we come to talk about the real difficulty—the absence of perfect choice for one thing sometimes happened. For example, you eat a fish, you may find that eat fresh you can get the most nutrition; while boiled it to make a dish taste more delicious, and fried it make humbuggers make it more convenient to carry, then which one is perfect? Different people have different preferences. Then we have to talk about technology, religious and some factors influence our choices, for instance, in some uncivilized tribes in Africa, they have not use fire so fried or boiled a fish to them is mission impossible then their choices are limited, they have to eat fresh fish, while Japanese just prefer to eat fresh fish which is common advocate in this country. Another example we may found that if Japanese is failed or something, there is a high possibility that he would choose to die because of the high pressure of the Japan’s society. In short, clearly we may found our sometimes absence of good choice is complicated determined by several points which are characterized by our personal experiences, racial identities and so on.

In sum, from what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that no choice is rarely happened in our daily and the truth is sometimes we hesitate to choose one that is the best or most suitable due to some other factors which is complex charactered..

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Once in my beloved middle school, one of my best teachers told me that the most painful thing in the world is to make choice cause after that choice,（恩，很哲理啊） you may miss some other valuable thing that later you like to cherish, while at the same time, the most happy thing in the world also without any daunt is to make choice cause after that choice you can concentrate and release from suffering the trouble of too much choices. To be honest, really rarely do we meet a circumstance without any choice since you may always found that after all we have several choices to choose because there is no limitation for the deadline. Then what we truly complain is often there seems few wonderful choices since our appetite or desired are hardly fulfilled.（这个观点好啊！）
Coming first to indicate that there is rarely circumstances we have no choice. In our collective daily life we almost make choices and decisions every time and conman sense told us that each human being has his or her own mind and free will to make any choice he would like, so one’s will determine the choice. Take cooking a fish as an example, you may fried it to make humbuggers; you may boiled it cook a dish; or if you would like, you may eat it fresh; any choice if you would like to is possible, and that is truly depend on your personal will. So we may found that our lives are full of choices, and even in some NO CHOICE conditions we still find choices are always abundant. For instance, one man failed and left nothing with him now, he still has two choices: to death or to survive, if he choose to death then how to death there again offers several choices（强大，跟你的开头还呼应啦）; if he choose to survive, then how to survive, there comes some choice, like to be beggar or restart his career（没有东西怎么重来？这个是不是可以稍加解释？）. In brief summary, there is always full if you open your mind to find.

The second point we come to talk about the real difficulty—the absence of perfect choice for one thing sometimes happened. For example, you eat a fish, you may find that eat fresh you can get the most nutrition; while boiled it to make a dish taste more delicious, and fried it make humbuggers make it more convenient to carry, then which one is perfect? Different people have different preferences. Then we have to talk about technology, religious and some factors influence our choices, for instance, in some uncivilized tribes in Africa, they have not use fire so fried or boiled a fish to them is mission impossible then their choices are limited, they have to eat fresh fish, while Japanese just prefer to eat fresh fish which is common advocate in this country. Another example we may found that if Japanese is failed or something, there is a high possibility that he would choose to die because of the high pressure of the Japan’s society. In short, clearly we may found our sometimes absence of good choice is complicated determined by several points which are characterized by our personal experiences, racial identities and so on.

In sum, from what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that no choice is rarely happened in our daily and the truth is sometimes we hesitate to choose one that is the best or most suitable due to some other factors which is complex charactered.
（在犹豫，说明是在选择，选择最好的，但是我觉得如果你想说因为好的选择只有一个造成了人们没得选）

整篇文章的思路很清楚，而且是层层递进的，感觉第二段很好。
不过最好的结尾，有点看不懂了。我不知道自己说的对不对。欢迎讨论哈！
继续努力啦，加油：）