【big fish】3月12日习作Issue184-----by Sansouci

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Issue No.184
"It is a grave mistake to theorize before one has data."
在没有数据之前就得出理论是重大错误

In this issue, the author asserts that theorizing before one has data is a grave mistake and the author might suggest that one should not easily theorize until has sufficient data. From where I am concerned, there are two ways of cognition progress. One is that prepare and collect sufficient data primary and then generalize a theory; some kinds of experimental sciences such as biology belong to this way. Another is that propose a model first and then try to prove it with sufficient data or deduce from former theories, such as mathematics, economics, etc. Therefore, it is unfairly assume that it is always a grave mistake to theorize before one has data.

Admittedly, data is the factual information used as a basis for reasoning, discussion, or calculating, so it is important in theorizing. For instance, design experiment by biology statistics method normally should set several experimental groups and control group, so gets clearly data through implement these experimentations. At last, eliminate error through compare the experimental group’s statistic data and control group’s then draw some conclusions and generalize theories. In fact, data clearly indicates factual information and verify correctly the theory is.

However, not all the greatest theory is based on accurate data. Factually, logically mind can construct theory before no data. There is an aptly example to illustrates this point, the edifice of mathematics-a theory actually based on the deduction and logical reasoning. Hypothesis is quite essential in theorization and plays an important role in acquiring data. Moreover, those theorizations are not merely fantasies the speaker has claimed. Actually, they derive from the experience from the past and critical thinking, as well as insight. As time passing by, many conjectures and hypothesis are identified later. In the realm of natural science it is possible for one to make educated guesses before one has data. Further experimentation and evaluation of existing data will eventually prove or disprove the hypotheses.

Certainly, it is undoubtedly convincing that used to be verified by data. That means any essence of theories eventually confirmed by large amounts of data collected. For example, when we suppose an additive whether be admitted add to food and guarantee it has no by-effect to human. Large amounts of trails should be done before conclude range of additive amount and the optimum additive amount should be added. Finally, we can make a convincing conclusion by these data through experiments. Therefore, data make our conclusion more convincible.

In conclusion, due to the difference of each fields, there is exists which should be established former or later. Undoubted, theories confirmed or established by large amounts of data, which offers theories a fundamental basis and accurate verify correct the theory is.

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强烈建议楼主把名词、动词、形容词、副词的用法狠狠地复习一遍！

In this issue, the author asserts that theorizing before one has data is a grave mistake and the author might suggest that one should not easily theorize until (he or she不能省)has sufficient data.(建议后半句and…另起一句，免得首句累赘) From where I am concerned, there are two ways of cognition progress. One is that prepare and collect sufficient data primary and then generalize a theory(动词不能直接作主语吧); some kinds of experimental sciences such as biology belong to this way. Another(两者，the other) is that propose(还是动词主语问题) a model first and then try to prove it with sufficient data or deduce from former theories, such as mathematics, economics, etc(建议用and so on). Therefore, it(指代不明) is unfairly assume(是被动还是主动呢) that it is always a grave mistake to theorize before one has data.(重复陈述题目，而且照搬，是很不成熟的写作表现啊)
第一段建议还是在主旨句之后紧跟之后要讨论的几个方面，而且简单罗列一下，会比现在行文紧凑些

Admittedly, data is the factual information used as a basis for reasoning, discussion, or calculating, so it is important in theorizing. For instance, design experiment by biology statistics method normally(这个词用得很古怪) should set several experimental groups and control group, so gets clearly data through implement these experimentations.(这句话建议LZ自己再改一下) At last, eliminate error through compare the experimental group’s statistic data and control group’s then draw some conclusions and generalize theories. In fact, data clearly indicates factual information and verify correctly the theory is(the theory is correct).
看得出楼主的逻辑结构，但是不能完全明白要表达的意思，因为有些语法非常之“罕见”，我不知道是有错还是我没见过而已。希望再审查一遍。

However, not all the greatest theory is based on accurate data. Factually, logically mind can construct theory before no data(is collected). There is an aptly(adv.) example to illustrates this point, the edifice of mathematics-a theory actually based on the deduction and logical reasoning. Hypothesis is quite essential in theorization and plays an important role in acquiring data. Moreover, those theorizations are not merely fantasies the speaker has claimed. Actually, they derive from the experience from(through) the past and critical thinking, as well as insight(and insight as well). As(With) time passing by, many conjectures and hypothesis are identified later. In the realm of natural science it is possible for one to make educated guesses before one has data. Further experimentation and evaluation of existing data will eventually prove or disprove the hypotheses.

Certainly, it is undoubtedly convincing(词义重复) that used to be verified by data. That means any essence of theories eventually confirmed by large amounts of data collected. For example, when we suppose an additive whether be admitted add to food and guarantee it has no by-effect to human. Large amounts of trails should be done before conclude range of additive amount and the optimum additive amount should be added. Finally, we can make a convincing conclusion by these data through experiments. Therefore, data make our conclusion more convincible.

In conclusion, due to the difference of each fields(哪些领域), there is exists which should be established former or later. Undoubted(ly), theories confirmed or established by large amounts of data, which offers theories a fundamental basis and accurate verify correct the theory is.

修正 建议
楼主一定要好好好好把动词和副词的用法再学习一遍。后半部分文章中此类问题我已经回避指出了。
非常好的是，楼主的文字逻辑连接词非常到位，所以行文很连贯，但是不流畅，主要原因还是在于语法错误，很难让人读通整段文字。