issue103,历史和日常生活，（拆分的方法写的）

colin8741UID: 2835824

ISSUE103 - "The study of history has value only to the extent that it is relevant to our daily lives."

The assertion that only when the study of history relevant to our daily lives can it be valuable is superficial due to the misunderstanding of the value of the history.

The study in history is not only valuable when it can influent our lives directly, relevant to our daily lives, but also meaningful when it can change our way of lives indirectly in some other extent.

For example, in the area of science and technology, we can find out the development of technology in one period from its historical relic. In China, Terra Cotta Warriors were found in the Mausoleum of Qin Shi Huang, many of whose color were still not faded after thousands of years. Some swords unearthed from ancient tombs, hundreds years old, were not got rusty. We should never underestimate the study of history in technique area, scientists now can learn much from past.

The study of culture and literacy in history is also meaningful. From the study of culture, we begin to know the characters of one group of people, their habits and the factors that had effects on their ways of lives. The influent of literacy is obviously in any period any countries. Chinese students learn to read and recite poems in Tang dynasty when they are in primary schools. Novels of Victor Hugo are still read by many people and have influence on them. The power of culture and literacy can not be ignored, and that is also the value of history.

The study of history also has value on politicians. Leaders of any country of the world need to know the history of past; not only for the purpose of being learned, but also avoiding the mistakes made by the past leader or the kings of ancient kingdoms. Politicians will learn from the history about the subtle relationship between leader and public, and how to comfort the masses. For example, Mao Zedong, as the first chairman of People’s Republic of China, always read history books and award of the conflicts between different stratums in China; he seized the opportunity and led the army to success.

As the Chinese old saying goes: You may trim your appeal if you take brass as a mirror; you will understand the gains and losses if you take people as a mirror; you may know rise and fall if you take history as a mirror. Only when we realize the cause of the rise and fall in history, can we avoid the same mistake happens again.

The value of history is not how it related to our daily life but how it can indicate the future. Learning from the past, guiding the present life, leading the way of future, these are the real value of study in history.

追梦小木耳UID: 2781857

什么叫拆分的方法？？
首先，我觉得value的定义比较模糊。你没有说清楚，你举得例子说的也不详细，而且都是中国的，中国人一看就知道，但是外国人很难从你的描述里读出什么证据吧
其次，虽然说了科技、文学、历史，但是比较笼统，还不如只说一点，多举几个例子呢。
然后，就是没有说研究与日常生活相关的历史到底有什么作用了。虽然这是让步，但是你也承认了它的正确性，至少也得少说一点点吧

colin8741UID: 2835824

2# 追梦小木耳
我其实就是不知道它到底和日常生活有什么关系……