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wjinli519UID: 2766563

先发帖占座。。

siehahaUID: 2668909

等待  我改过alex的 这次我就该你的 你改他的哈！

wjinli519UID: 2766563

我已经把你的改了。。但我的word文档传不上来

siehahaUID: 2668909

你的是2007版的吧  我也是 可以点保存按钮 里面有个另存为90-2003版的WORD
不过MSN的界面看的好清爽

wjinli519UID: 2766563

http://cid-4de75f5e702d85b8.office.live.com/browse.aspx/.Public
写好了，7.31 maga....文件 word文件从上面取。。。
As traditional pioneers in media industry, newspapers and magazines are still regarded as an inevitable part of daily lives. However, when questioned which is the most efficient and popular approach to learn about a foreign country, most people would not appeal to newspapers and magazines. Here are some reasons for this.

The first reason which hinders these traditional media becoming the best option for foreign study is the conflict between quality and price. A well-decorated magazine with abundant pictures focused on introduction of other countries' culture and scenery usually costs the customers a comparative large amount of money, whereas the newspapers are cheaper but their tedious white and black paper drains the motivation of readers. We can take a famous magazine, The National Geographic, as a typical example. A monthly issue of this magazine has a price of over 100 yuan in China. How can an ordinary person afford twelve issues with the pure intention to expand his or her knowledge about foreign countries?

On the other hand, the revolution of information has brought us the well-developed internet, which largely squeezed the market share of magazines and newspapers. As an innovation in 20th century, internet can provide us with considerable gigabits of information, including specific data, magnificent pictures and accurate descriptions on cutting-edge technology. Most importantly, people can obtain the video and audio documents on exotic culture and traditions easily by clicking on their mouse. On the contrary, what newspapers and magazines can show is just stationary pictures and literal description.

Furthermore, the contents included in the magazines and newspapers always involve in some personal preference and prejudice. That is to say, some of the articles and comments, in most cases, are reflections of the writers' opinions or their own experience. Under some circumstances, a partial understanding or limited experience may cause the writer’s comprehension towards other country’s culture diverges from the truth. However, what people want is objective depiction of other countries' culture and customs. Hence, those who determined to acquire comprehensive and complete understanding of exotic culture prefer to have a trip in person to the country which arouses their curiosity.

Admittedly, learning foreign culturess through magazines and newspapers is a reasonable approach for most people, but not the best. Because of the attribute of high price, limited and sometimes subjective delivery of information, newspapers and magazines slow down their further evolution and are doomed to be replaced by new types of mass media, like ebooks and HDTV.

siehahaUID: 2668909

：）

wjinli519UID: 2766563

题目好像是learn foreign countries....不是languages吧。。。似乎我和组里另外个人题目抄错了。。囧

As traditional pioneers in media industry, newspapers and magazines are still regarded as an [url=]inevitable[/url][k1] part of daily lives

[k1]integrate
ineviatble强调某种情况不可避免，是不是用indispensable更好呢



6# siehaha

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6# siehaha
到底是考过G的人～改下来就是不一样～学习了学习了～～

wjinli519UID: 2766563

8.308.03 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A job with more vacation time but a low salary is better than a job with a high salary but less vacation time.

还是skydrive吧～～
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小小修改一下  我实在没什么资格给你修改  另外  顺便 问一下  就我这次的 作文水平 托福作文大概能考个多少分 18分能有吗

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向你学习~~

wjinli519UID: 2766563

09.05.30NA无尽的超时啊啊啊啊啊
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Younger school children (ages five to ten) should be required to study art and music in addition to math, science, history and language."

The childhood for most young children is no longer filled with happiness. They are inundated with various kinds of courses, like piano course, drawing introduction, and some science courses, which take up most of their leisure time. However, personally, I strongly disagree with the statement that younger school children should be required to study art and music, in addition to some traditional courses. Here are some reasons for this.

First, art and music courses squeezes children's free time to play. people cannot deny that from children's gut instinct, they prefer to play rather than taking those aesthetic courses. In most cases, those kids who ages from five to ten are so energetic that they can hardly dedicate themselves to drawing or playing piano, which both require meditation and frequent practice. At free time, they love playing football at the lawn in front of their house and shooting birds with toy guns or stones. If parents insist on compelling their children to study art or music, those children will surely have no time to indulge themselves with their friends.

Second, due to the inflation in China, especially the increase of tuition fee, art and music course will become a large expense for parents. If primary school is going to open art and music courses for students, the school has to hire some instructors who are specialized to teach art and music or accomplished in corresponding fields. And the salary of these teachers will expand the shool budget, which in turn raise the fee of the school. In short, it is those parents whose children will receive the course that have to pay extra money for the courses.

Furthermore, those art and music courses can almost do nothing helpful to the majority of children's future career. Mostly, some art and music techniques only limit in entertaining people. To most students, who don't have unparalleled interest or aptitude in art and music, can hardly rely on drawing or singing to make a living. That is to say, rather than teaching the aesthetic courses, schools should take more responsibility to socialize the children, more specifically, to teach them how to maintain a friendship, how to be obedient to their parents and how to communicate with strangers. The importance of learning how to be a member of family and society outweighs that of learning how to draw a painting or compose a song.

In conclusion, art and music should not become compulsory courses for children aging from 5 to 10 when people taking account of the loss of children's free time, the family expense and limited boost to future prospects.

joy1025UID: 2760517

麻烦楼主有时间帮我修改下:loveliness:

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14# joy1025
先谢谢啦

还有gut instinct似乎是个固定用法。。。马上看你作文去。。