ISSUE 56【六人行】8.5作业byD

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TOPIC: ISSUE56 - "Governments should focus more on solving the immediate problems of today rather than trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future."
WORDS: 400
TIME: 00:45:00
DATE: 2010-8-4 11:13:04

According to this statement, the speaker's claim is that the government should pay more attention to deal the immediate problem of today rather than trying to solve the problem of future, I partly agree with the statement, I think that we should deal the most important problem instead of the first problem. The reasons are stated as follows.

Admittedly, it is normal thought that how can we face to the problem of future without handling the currently problem well. Of course, there are too many problems to deal with now. Such as the unemployment, disease, crime and so on. If the government put the problem of unemployment aside, the people who lose their jobs would feel hopelessly, maybe some of them would commit a crime to keep living, and which situation would have an badly effect on the development of a society. So, dealing the problem like this would be the top priority.

Nevertheless, if the government ignore the anticipated problems of the future also could bring a serious consequence, the government would not be the passable one unless it had a long-term intent. Just like the Three Gorges Dam, the famous project in China, which could resist the once-in-a-century flood, although the project cost very expensive, it could in the interest of the current and future generation. so does the military affairs, the government should strengthen its defense capability in case of the invading of the enemy someday in the future. One country with developed military might would have a high international prestige, and that could make sure the people of the country could live in a stable environment. If the government does not care that at all, the country would suffer great losses. And then let us take a look at the problem of environment. There are many factories in the cities , some of the factories would bring large profits, but at the same time, they will also pollute
the environment, if the leaders take no measures to rule this situation, the government will pay much more expense to compensate the environment. So the problem in the future stated above are also should be solved at first.

To sum up, both of the immediate problems of today and the anticipated problem of the future are important, we should not arrange them based on the moment the problems happened but the
degree of the significance of the problems.

Eileen312UID: 2648750

TOPIC: ISSUE56 - "Governments should focus more on solving the immediate problems of today rather than trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future."
WORDS: 400
TIME: 00:45:00
DATE: 2010-8-4 11:13:04

According to this statement, the speaker's claim is that the government should pay more attention to deal[with] the immediate problem of today rather than trying to solve the problem of future, I partly agree with the statement, I think that we should deal the most important problem instead of the first problem[提议改写的很好]. The reasons are stated as follows.

Admittedly, it is normal thought that how can we [we can] face to the problem of future without handling the currently[current] problem well. Of course, there are too many problems to deal with now. Such as the unemployment, disease, crime and so on. If the government put the problem of unemployment aside, the people who lose their jobs would feel hopelessly, maybe some of them would commit a crime to keep living, and which situation would have an badly effect on the development of a society. So, dealing the problem like this would be the top priority[这句容易让人误以为你赞同解决当前问题].

Nevertheless, if the government ignore the anticipated problems of the future also could bring a serious consequence, the government would not be the passable one unless it had a long-term intent. Just like the Three Gorges Dam, the famous project in China, which could resist the once-in-a-century flood, although the project cost very expensive, it could in the interest of the current and future generation. so does the military affairs, the government should strengthen its defense capability in case of the invading of the enemy someday in the future. One country with developed military might would have a high international prestige, and that could make sure the people of the country could live in a stable environment. If the government does not care that at all, the country would suffer great losses. And then let us take a look at the problem of environment. There are many factories in the cities , some of the factories would bring large profits, but at the same time, they will also pollutethe environment, if the leaders take no measures to rule this situation, the government will pay much more expense to compensate the environment. So the problem in the future stated above are also should be solved at first.[逻辑和实力都很好，语言。。。-_-]

To sum up, both of the immediate problems of today and the anticipated problem of the future are important, we should not arrange them based on the moment the problems happened but the degree of the significance of the problems.

[逻辑不完善，语言太不规范。毕竟限时写的，继续努力啊！加油！]

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2# Eileen312

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