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[i习作temp] ISSUE131 【六人行8.03】by Eileen [复制链接]

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发表于 2010-8-5 19:28:51 |显示全部楼层

I-131"The arts (painting, music, literature, etc.) reveal the otherwise hidden ideas and impulses of a society."

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Arts take a diverse range of forms and serve various purposes. For instance, non- motivated arts, originating spontaneously from human nature, are to express social or personal spirituals and emotions, while motivated arts, carrying certain utility intentions, are for entertainment, business promotion, etc. The argument is too general to assert arts display social ideas and impulses. As far as I am concerned, most non-motivated arts can function as a mirror for hidden social thoughts, and motivated arts cannot due to their practical purposes.

Generally speaking, most non-motivated arts are the external exhibition of artists’ inner sense about the politics, spirits, and philosophy of the existing society. Thus, they do reflect the social ideologies and impulses. Take the classical European ballet for example. It is characterized by the female dancers rotating on the tiptoe to leave the floor of the stage as much as possible, which demonstrates the Christian philosophy of throwing off earthly bandage and ascending into heaven. It would not be difficult to understand if you note that ballet originated in an era when Christian dominated Europe. Another related case is the famous novel- Gone with the Wind, which reveals the Civil War’s affection on people’s spiritual transformation. Scarlett once lived a carefree life; however, the war claimed her parents’ lives and brought her humiliation and starvation, which finally reshipped her to be selfish, mercenary, and strong. Some others may argue that: how could you rely on a fictional story? My answer is that this literature is based on the author’s father’s true experience in the Civil War. I concede that art may not exactly replay the thoughts and impulses of past societies, but at least it reveals them.

Yet not all non-motivated arts could uncover the hidden social ideas and impetuses. Undeniably, there exist some works of art created according to the artists’ personal emotion, but rather social ideologies. A persuasive case here is Beethoven’s musical composition- Moonlight Sonata, which was created for the lady whom Beethoven was deeply in love with. This great work of music mainly illustrates Beethoven’s personal romantic feelings, and has nothing to do with ideas on the social level. Moreover, arts’ demonstrative ability is based on the premise that we can understand them. In fact, some artists create the works of art so unconventionally that we cannot even interpret. How could arts beyond comprehension demonstrate social ideas and impulses?

Furthermore, motivated arts are incapable of revealing social ideologies, especially when it comes to business arts, decorative arts, and entertainment-oriented arts. Business works of art, such as advertising art, are destined to draw a certain group of customers to purchase products or services; thus cannot comprehensively and objectively reflect the social thoughts. Similarly, decorative arts emphasis aesthetic values, rather than social elements. Say, in order to decorate the office, one puts up simple but tasteful wallpapers and lays beautiful potted plants in the corner. Could you get macro social ideology related conclusion from his decorative art? I cannot. At last, it is also true with the entertainment- oriented arts, such as horror movies, which are produced purely for leisure enjoyment. All in all, the special purposes of motivated arts deny their ability to show the overall thoughts in a society.

In conclusion, various goals of arts decide that we cannot simply rely on some any art to reveal social ideas and impetuses, because some arts are demonstrative while others misleading.

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发表于 2010-8-9 00:00:25 |显示全部楼层
回来了 明天内改好

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本帖最后由 xyjprc 于 2010-8-9 10:21 编辑

我崇拜了,这例子和论证都太好了~语言也很精准~没有太多能改动的余地~
欢迎互拍~

Arts take a diverse range of forms and serve various purposes. For instance, non- motivated[精准!The non-motivated purposes of art are those that are integral to being human, transcend the individual, or do not fulfill a specific external purpose.] arts, originating spontaneously from human nature, are to express social or personal spirituals and emotions, while motivated arts, carrying certain utility intentions, are for entertainment, business promotion, etc. The argument is too general to assert arts display social ideas and impulses. As far as I am concerned, most non-motivated arts can function as a mirror for hidden social thoughts, and motivated arts cannot due to their practical purposes[后半句如果是我写的话,while motivated arts, due to their practical purposes, cannot.虽然看起来有点碎,但表义应该明确些。].

Generally speaking, most non-motivated arts are the external exhibition of artists’ inner sense about the politics, spirits, and philosophy of the existing society. Thus, they do reflect the social ideologies and impulses. Take the classical European ballet for example. It is characterized by the female dancers rotating on the tiptoe to leave the floor of the stage as much as possible, which demonstrates the Christian philosophy of throwing off earthly bandage and ascending into heaven. It would not be difficult to understand if you[不要用you] note that ballet originated in an era when Christian dominated Europe. Another related case is the famous novel- Gone with the Wind, which reveals the Civil War’s affection on people’s spiritual transformation. Scarlett once lived a carefree life; however, the war claimed her parents’ lives and brought her humiliation and starvation, which finally reshipped her to be selfish, mercenary, and strong. Some others may argue that: how could you rely on a fictional story?[句式变换] My answer is that this literature is based on the author’s father’s true experience in the Civil War. I concede that art may not exactly replay the thoughts and impulses of past societies, but at least it reveals them.[例子真翔实]

Yet not all non-motivated arts could uncover the hidden social ideas and impetuses[用词多样]. Undeniably, there exist some works of art created according to the artists’ personal emotion, but rather social ideologies. A persuasive case here is Beethoven’s musical composition- Moonlight Sonata, which was created for the lady whom Beethoven was deeply in love with. This great work of music mainly illustrates Beethoven’s personal romantic feelings, and has nothing to do with ideas on the social level. Moreover, arts’ demonstrative ability is based on the premise that we can understand them. In fact, some artists create the works of art so unconventionally that we cannot even interpret. How could arts beyond comprehension demonstrate social ideas and impulses?[哎,此段没什么可改的,很好]
Furthermore, motivated arts are incapable of revealing social ideologies, especially when it comes to business arts, decorative arts, and entertainment-oriented arts. Business works of art, such as advertising art, are destined to draw a certain group of customers to purchase products or services; thus [缺主语,不然不要用分号] cannot comprehensively and objectively reflect the social thoughts. Similarly, decorative arts emphasis [emphasize] aesthetic values, rather than social elements. Say, in order to decorate the office, one puts up simple but tasteful wallpapers and lays beautiful potted plants in the corner. Could you get[grasp] macro social ideology related conclusion[这里两个词有点问题] from his decorative art? I cannot[还是you和I的问题,用第三人称吧]. At last, it is also true with the entertainment- oriented arts, such as horror movies, which are produced purely for leisure enjoyment. All in all, the special purposes of motivated arts deny their ability to show the overall thoughts in a society.[这个句式好~]

In conclusion, various goals of arts decide[determine] that we cannot simply rely on some any[some any?] art to reveal social ideas and impetuses, because some arts are demonstrative while others misleading.[结尾略草率]
如果GRE这么点事都做不好,以后还做得了什么?

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发表于 2010-8-11 09:59:32 |显示全部楼层
Arts take a diverse range of forms and serve various purposes. For instance, non- motivated arts, originating spontaneously from human nature, are to express social or personal spirituals and emotions, while motivated arts, carrying certain utility intentions, are for entertainment, business promotion, etc. The argument is too general to assert arts display social ideas and impulses. As far as I am concerned, most non-motivated arts can function as a mirror for hidden social thoughts, and motivated arts cannot due to their practical purposes.
Generally speaking, most non-motivated arts are the external exhibition of artists’ inner sense about the politics, spirits, and philosophy of the existing society. Thus, they do reflect the social ideologies and impulses. Take the classical European ballet for example. It is characterized by the female dancers rotating on the tiptoe to leave the floor of the stage as much as possible, which demonstrates the Christian philosophy of throwing off earthly bandage and ascending into heaven. It would not be difficult to understand if you note that ballet originated in an era when Christian dominated Europe. Another related case is the famous novel- Gone with the Wind, which reveals the Civil War’s affection on people’s spiritual transformation. Scarlett once lived a carefree life; however, the war claimed her parents’ lives and brought her humiliation and starvation, which finally reshipped her to be selfish, mercenary, and strong. Some others may argue that: how could you rely on a fictional story? My answer is that this literature is based on the author’s father’s true experience in the Civil War. I concede that art may not exactly replay the thoughts and impulses of past societies, but at least it reveals them.
小说的例子很好,大量的现实主义小说很好地表现了时代精神
Yet not all non-motivated arts could uncover the hidden social ideas and impetuses. Undeniably, there exist some works of art created according to the artists’ personal emotion, but rather social ideologies. A persuasive case here is Beethoven’s musical composition- Moonlight Sonata, which was created for the lady whom Beethoven was deeply in love with. This great work of music mainly illustrates Beethoven’s personal romantic feelings, and has nothing to do with ideas on the social level. Moreover, arts’ demonstrative ability is based on the premise that we can understand them. In fact, some artists create the works of art so unconventionally that we cannot even interpret. How could arts beyond comprehension demonstrate social ideas and impulses?
这一段也很好 总结一下就是艺术并不总是反映社会观点的,而是一些千百年不变的人类内心情感的升华,无论在哪个社会 哪个时代都是同样的
Furthermore, motivated arts are incapable of revealing social ideologies, especially when it comes to business arts, decorative arts, and entertainment-oriented arts. Business works of art, such as advertising art, are destined to draw a certain group of customers to purchase products or services; thus cannot comprehensively and objectively reflect the social thoughts. Similarly, decorative arts emphasis aesthetic values, rather than social elements. Say, in order to decorate the office, one puts up simple but tasteful wallpapers and lays beautiful potted plants in the corner. Could you get macro social ideology related conclusion from his decorative art? I cannot. At last, it is also true with the entertainment- oriented arts, such as horror movies, which are produced purely for leisure enjoyment. All in all, the special purposes of motivated arts deny their ability to show the overall thoughts in a society.
我个人不是很同意你用的例子,娱乐性的节目依然暴露时代精神,比如Chaplin 的电影,就有很重的工业时代气息,周立波,郭德刚也都是时代产物。我决定可以举宗教艺术为例 虽然其形式也随时代社会改变,但是有很多程式化的东西不能改变 比如说唐卡的绘制 有很多规矩必须遵循 与社会喜好无关
In conclusion, various goals of arts decide that we cannot simply rely on some any art to reveal social ideas and impetuses, because some arts are demonstrative while others misleading.

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