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SarahMUID: 2727281

8月31日
Honestly, hardly can I imagine how hard and boring the life of the students will be if they have only math, science classes without art and physics. Having art and physics classes can not only upgrade the students' personal quality , but also provide a wonderful opportunity to relax during the busy study life.

First of all, as students as young as five to ten, hardly have them developed certain interest in any specific field, that is, young children have the right to contact with various subjects to explore their interest in different disciplines. As we all know, math and science can help equip us with the basic knowledge about the world, however, art and physics are beneficial for our mental state and artificial ability. And it is highly possible that some student have potential talent and strong interest in art or physics since they are young. Therefore, the educators have the responsibility to provide an opportunity for the children to discover their favorite field.

Even if not all the students will specialize in art or physics, they can still benefit a lot from these classes, especially during their early development.
Maybe it is too early to consider the society's demand of the versatile talents, however, it is undisputable to build up the compound qualities in every aspects for the children. For both girls and boys, to grasp some music history or to be able to sing good songs, will not be harmful but beneficial. This kind of knowledge can broaden their horizon and cultivate better taste of beauty, help them to discover more beauty in life except the boring math and scientific truth.

What's more, the art and physics classes are a fabulous chance for the students to escape from the heavy burden of math and science classes. Compared with the difficult formulas and unintelligible definitions, art and physics are so easy and relaxing. After the torture of the math classes, the students deserve to embrace the peaceful and delightful relaxation from art and physics. When I was young, every time when I took the music class, listening and singing with the teacher, I felt like I was flying freely in heaven, totally contrast to the irritation from the headache resulting from math and physics classes.

In a word, all the schools should arrange appropriate schedule including art and physics as their basic classes for the young students. The kids have the right to own a rosy childhood from school.

风起云落UID: 2833888

为啥你们都能写那么多字= =
另外，题目里是art and music 为啥你写的都是physics= =

Honestly, hardly can I imagine how hard and boring the life of the students will be if they have only math, science classes without art and physics. Having art and physics classes can not only upgrade the students' personal quality, but also provide a wonderful opportunity to relax during the busy study life.


First of all, as students as young as five to ten, hardly have them developed certain interest in any specific field, that is, young children have the right to contact with various subjects to explore their interest in different disciplines. As we all know, math and science can help equip us with the basic knowledge about the world, however, art and physics are beneficial for our mental state and artificial ability. And it is highly possible that some students have potential talent and strong interest on art or physics since
（感觉因果不大通，尤其是前面还有个interest）they are young. Therefore, the educators have the responsibility to provide an opportunity for the children to discover their favorite field.


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Even if not all the students will specialize in art or physics, they can still benefit a lot from these classes, especially during their early development. (赞让步！)
! C' }! s( G5 B$ Y' IMaybe it is too early to consider the society's demand of the versatile talents, (;) however, it is undisputable to build up the compound qualities in every aspects for the children. For both girls and boys, to grasp some music history or to be able to sing good songs (sing songs well), will not be (be not) harmful but
beneficial. This kind of knowledge can broaden their horizon and cultivate better taste of beauty, help them to discover more beauty in life except the boring(这……也未必真boring吧……感觉besides m and s 就好)math and scientific truth.


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What's more, the art and physics classes are a fabulous chance for the students to escape from the heavy burden of math and science classes. Compared with the difficult formulas and unintelligible definitions, art and physics are so easy and relaxing. After the torture of the math classes, the students deserve to embrace the peaceful and delightful relaxation from art and physics. When I was young, every time when I took the music class, listening and singing with the teacher, I felt like（没有like） I was flying freely in heaven（the sky 就好）, totally contrast to the irritation from the headache resulting from math and physics classes.2 s! g( k5 w' j* ]& a5 B' z
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In a word, all the schools should arrange appropriate schedule including art and physics as their basic classes for the young students. The kids have the right to own a rosy childhood from school.

第一次改，多担待……
有些用法我也拿不准，就不改了。
我觉得写的挺好，有些话我中文都不会说……

fd笑笑UID: 2791669

Honestly, hardly can I imagine how hard and boring the life of thestudents will be if they have only math, science classes without art andphysics. Having art and physics classes can not only upgrade the students'personal quality , but also provide a wonderful opportunity to relax during thebusy study life.
Firstof all, as students as young as five to ten, hardly have them(they)
developedcertain interest in any specific field, that is, young children have the rightto contact with various subjects to explore their interest in differentdisciplines. As we all know, math and science can help equip us(usequipped) with the basic knowledge about the world, however, art andphysics are beneficial for our mental state and artificialability(你想表达什么？). And it ishighly possible that some student have potential talent and strong interest inart or physics since they are young. Therefore, the educators have theresponsibility to provide an opportunity for the children to discover their favoritefield.
Evenif not all the students will specialize in art or physics, they can stillbenefit a lot from these classes, especially during their early development.

Maybe it is too early to consider the society'sdemand of the versatile talents, however, it is undisputable to build up thecompound qualities in every aspects for the children. For both girls and boys,to grasp some music history or to be able to sing good songs, will not beharmful but beneficial. This kind of knowledge can broaden their horizon andcultivate better taste of beauty, help them to discover more beauty in lifeexcept the boring math and scientific truth.( f* d+ R7 Z3 ^. p
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What'smore, the art and physics classes are a fabulous chance for the students toescape from the heavy burden of math and science classes. Compared with thedifficult formulas and unintelligible definitions, art and physics are so easyand relaxing. After the torture of the math classes, the students deserve toembrace the peaceful and delightful relaxation from art and physics. When I wasyoung, every time when I took the music class, listening and singing with theteacher, I felt like I was flying freely in heaven, totally contrast to theirritation from the headache resulting from math and physics classes.（这个例子很好！）1
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Ina word, all the schools should arrange appropriate schedule including art andphysics as their basic classes for the young students. The kids have the rightto own a rosy childhood from school.
很佩服你的用词，（惭愧的说我有些单词是查了字典之后才晓得的）
不过除了第一段和what's more 之后的内容，我觉得中见层次有点乱。

SarahMUID: 2727281

9月2号~
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students should not take part-time jobs while they are studying in universities.

When it comes to student, people always consider that their most crucial task is to study well. And someone may also argue that anything besides study is a waste of time and will have no benefits at all for the students. However, in terms of students in universities, things should be a little different. As is known to all, in universities, the miniature of the real society,  students should not only learn knowledge but also living skills, social ability and find their main direction in the future.

Inevitably, part-time jobs will take up some time to distract the students from studying, however, as long as the jobs won't make huge effects on their final performance, the jobs’ advantages far outweigh disadvantages.

First of all, to take part-time jobs can help students to meet more people and gain extra experience out of books. As we all know, compared with the real society, the school is still so pure and the relationships between the students or people they meet are much simpler. Normally, a student who are really smart with excellent grade or who is very socialized and well-tempered can easily obtain great reputation. However, the society is not that easy. When the students take a job, the relationships get complicated. They have to learn how to deal with their superior but also handle the relationship with people on the same level, who are the rivals at the same time. They need to learn how to stand out without being hated. The experience has  no substitute from what they can learn from the college.

What's more, the part-time jobs can help a student to explore his or her real interest and find the path of future finally. I know many students who are not satisfied with their own majors, myself included, too. And unfortunately, in China, we can not change our major freely in college. Therefore, instead of torching ourselves to learn something we have no interest at all, we decide to discover our talent in some other fields, so we try various part-time jobs. Like me, I have tried to be a family teacher, sale-person, programmer and organizer for several companies' events. And during the time I was doing my part-time jobs , I had been taking effort to connect them with my major to see if I can discover some new field that was relevant to my major so that I won't waste the knowledge in university as well, and fortunately I succeed. Basing on my experience of family teacher and organizer, I found a perfect job for myself which is also relevant to my major.

In a word, part-time jobs may take up our study time a bit, but it totally worth it, because it provide us vast opportunities to know the society better and to explore our specil talent.

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layla1989UID: 2832481

改好啦