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Issue 104 It is primarily through formal education that a culture trys to perpetuate the ideas to perpetuate the ideas it favors and discredit it the ideas it fears.
1.        formal education 在这个过程中的作用；
2.        在某些领域如电视、网络也发挥着作用。
The speaker asserts that formal education is a primary way for a culture to perpetuate the ideas it favors and discredit the ideas it fears. While I concede that in some realms such as art formal education plays an important role, in other realms to spread the national values is not only through formal education but also accomplished in other ways, for example, media and internet.
Without doubts, formal education is a crucial way to spread the national values. Since a child was born, his or her parents would send the child to schools one after another in order to receive good education. In these schools, students get to know the national values from their books or teachers. For example, in a society admiring endurance the teacher will tell the students “ where is a will, there is a way.” ; in a society admiring creativity the students will learn more stories about well-known scientists who have totally change the way we live such as Edison. However, students may not understand all of these values for one time, so the best way to perpetuate the ideas is to repeat these ideas a myriad of times. At the same time, some values such as violence are told to the students to get away from. As a result, through formal education a culture well spreads its values and ideas.
Admittedly, formal education is a good way to spread values, but not the only way. It should be noted that the efforts of technologies are always positive. The advent of TV and Internet brought about an information revolution. Believe it or not, we cannot live without TV and Internet. TV and Internet play an even more crucial role in spreading values. Compared with books, TV and Internet are more directly observed to receive information. No matter what your job is or where you live, you can be accurately achieved by the internet. Especially in politics, patriotism is often reported by TV aiming to inspire all its people. But there is a disadvantage of the internet, because some people express ideas discredited by the nation or even opposed by the whole society. As we all know, internet is a place where you can express freely and receive a tremendously large of audiences. So in contrary, formal education acts much better than other ways.
To sum up, I fundamentally agree with the speaker’s assertion that formal education plays a primary role in spreading values. In today’s world, TV and Internet, as well as formal education, can influence people’s ideas.
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[ Last edited by staralways on 2005-7-14 at 21:50 ]

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The speaker asserts that formal education is a primary way for a culture to perpetuate the ideas it favors and discredit the ideas it fears. While I concede that in some realms such as art formal education plays an important role, in other realms to spread the national values is not only through formal education but also accomplished in other ways, for example, media and internet专有名词大写，后面还有此处没大写的。在其他领域媒体和网络也发挥作用，什么领域？宣扬爱国精神吗？直接说它们是一种补充手段就可以了。.

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Admittedly, formal education is a good way to spread values, but not the only way. It should be noted that the efforts of technologies are always positive. The advent of TV and Internet brought aboutabout不要 an information revolution. Believe it or not, we cannot live without TV and Internet. TV and Internet play an even more crucial role in spreading values. Compared with books, TV and Internet are more directly observed to receive information. No matter what your job is or where you live, you can be accurately achieved by the internetbe accurately achieved ？不懂. Especially in politics, patriotism is often reported by TV aiming to inspire all its people. 前面说媒体和网络的优点是更加直接，但是后面爱国的例子不能反映这个优点，especially不成立。你可以说他们提供的多媒体信息，相对于书本来说更加形象，精确，印象深刻。可参考ISSUE camera VS book But there is a disadvantage of the internet, because some people express ideas discredited by the nation or even opposed by the whole society. As we all know, internet is a place where you can express freely and receive a tremendously large of audiences. So in contrary, formal education acts much better than other ways.Since material used in formal education has been censored, we are protected from negative information.

To sum up, I fundamentally agree with the speaker’s assertion that formal education plays a primary role in spreading values. 转折词In today’s world, TV and Internet, as well as formal education, can influence people’s ideas.

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The speaker asserts that formal education is a primary way for a culture to perpetuate the ideas it favors and discredit the ideas it fears. While I concede that in some realms such as art formal education plays an important role, in other realms to spread the national values is not only through formal education but also accomplished in other ways, for example, media and internet.

Without doubts, (我影响中好像一直用的是 with no doubt) formal education is a crucial way to spread the national values. Since a child was born, his or her parents would send the child to schools one after another in order to receive (加个 a ) good education. In these schools, students get to know the national values from their books or teachers. For example, in a society admiring endurance the teacher will tell the students “ where (掉了一个there, 这种引用的名句马虎不得) is a will, there is a way.” ; in a society admiring creativity the students will learn more stories about well-known scientists who have totally change the way we live such as Edison（是不是再举一两个人名更加充实！？另外，一个崇尚创造的文化体系势必不同于原题目所声称的那种只教好的，不教坏的的那种formal education, 因为崇尚创造的文化体系的发展靠的主要就是那些在当时看来也许是所谓的“fearful ideas”啊~~ 小弟拙见 ：））. However, students may not understand all of these values for one time（我的改写是 hardly can any student fully understand all the values at the first time）, so the best way to perpetuate the ideas is to repeat these ideas a myriad of times. At the same time, some values such as violence are told to the students to get away from. As a result, through formal education a culture well spreads its values and ideas.

Admittedly, formal education is a good way to spread values, but not the only way. It should be noted that the efforts of technologies are always（为什么要用always, 我觉得用also就行啊） positive. The advent of TV and Internet brought about an information revolution. Believe it or not, we cannot live without TV and Internet. TV and Internet play an even more crucial role in spreading values. Compared with books, TV and Internet are more directly observed to receive information. No matter what your job is or where you live, you can be accurately achieved by the internet. Especially in politics, patriotism is often reported by TV aiming to inspire all its people. But there is a disadvantage of the internet, because some people express ideas discredited by the nation or even opposed by the whole society. As we all know, internet is a place where you can express freely and receive a tremendously large of audiences. So in contrary, formal education acts much better than other ways.

To sum up, I fundamentally agree with the speaker’s assertion that formal education plays a primary role in spreading values. In today’s world, TV and Internet, as well as formal education, can influence people’s ideas. （感觉作者有些避开了题目中关于perpetuate the ideas it favors and discredit the ideas it fears的问题，而始终将攻击中心方在formal education上，似乎有些不妥，将perpetuate the ideas it favors and discredit the ideas it fears简单概括为spreading values，显得很随意也很突兀， 本人浅见：））

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[ Last edited by mamak6322 on 2005-7-14 at 23:42 ]

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The speaker asserts that formal education is a primary way for a culture to perpetuate the ideas it favors and discredit the ideas it fears. While I concede that in some realms such as art formal education plays an important role, in other realms to spread the national values is not only through formal education but also accomplished in other ways, for example, media and internet.

Without doubts, formal education is a crucial way to spread the national values. Since a child was born, his or her parents would send the child to schools one after another in order to receive good education. In these schools, students get to know the national values from their books or teachers. For example, in a society admiring endurance the teacher will tell the students “ where is a will, there is a way.” “When there’s a will, there’s a way.” – in a society admiring creativity the students will learn more stories about well-known scientists who have totally change the way we live such as Edison. However, students may not understand all of these values for one time, so the best way to perpetuate the ideas is to repeat these ideas a myriad of times. At the same time, some values such as violence are told to the students to get away from. As a result, through formal education a culture well spreads its values and ideas.
Are the values of a nation identical to those of a culture?

Admittedly, formal education is a good way to spread values, but not the only way. It should be noted that the efforts of technologies are always positive. The advent of TV and Internet brought about an information revolution. Believe it or not, we cannot live without TV and Internet. TV and Internet play an even more crucial role in spreading values. Compared with books, TV and Internet are more directly observed to receive information. No matter what your job is or where you live, you can be accurately achieved by the internet. Especially in politics, patriotism is often reported by TV aiming to inspire all its people. But there is a disadvantage of the internet,
If here is the crucial part of ur rebutment, I think “but” is not a word strong enough for this.
because some people express ideas discredited by the nation or even opposed by the whole society. As we all know, internet is a place where you can express freely and receive a tremendously large of audiences.
I think to back up ur ts, stating the fact is not enough. What is the unwelcome consequence of freedom of speech in Internet?So in contrary, formal education acts much better than other ways.
To sum up, I fundamentally agree with the speaker’s assertion that formal education plays a primary role in spreading values. In today’s world, TV and Internet, as well as formal education, can influence people’s ideas.
Again, ur statement doesn’t sounds strong enough to me. “TV and Internet, as well as formal education, can influence people’s ideas” to what extent? Are they threatening the primary status of formal education?
我也觉得在perpetuate the ideas it favors and discredit the ideas it fears 方面 好像有点偷换概念。
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