ISSUE157 V6站队 8.2 学习类

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以前写过的，看到同主题写作有就贴上来了。
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Issue157
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The speaker makes a threshold claim that no purely objective observation exists according to different people, for tinted with the observer's expectation or desires. I find this allegation to be specious. It wrongly suggests that all observation is subjective. To the contrary, that observation at a subjective angle does present the truth of any affair's essence to us reveals its existence.
It is not nothing we can gain from the arguer's statement as its merits. After all, in our daily life facing diversity of the world, different people's opinions towards the same thing may vary greatly. For example, waking up with a sunny morning, an optimizer sings "what a brand new day!" while the pessimistic one complains that the retire days of his life become less again; seeing a newly-born puppy, some may marvel at the fabulous nature as some cry for how his own life fades away; some smile at everything, at the same time, others may be content with nothing......
Indeed, some observation gained from people's subjective answers, to which well-known historic stories lend the concrete support. In the ancient China, people all hold the view that the sky turns out to be a circle and the ground of the earth as a square. The reason why they make their conclusion is the fact that they watch the sun goes everyday up and down, from the east to the west as well as the myth passing down for generations that four big tutors support the ground of the earth on their shoulder under each corner of it. We can implicitly see that their subjective imagination results in their comprehension of what the world they live in is like. In addition, another interesting example comes from an old saying of China, which is "Most beauty comes from the eyes of the one loving her". It is obvious that in each lover's eyes all disadvantages disappear soundly remaining only the sparkle point of his or her lover, only because of love and no other reasons.
Accordingly, when we analyze the reasons why observers' views differ from each other, their expectation and desires ultimately guide them to make their decisions. Naturally, as human being, we always have best wishes to ourselves and to whom we love and care. Furthermore, we hope that they will all come true one day or everything goes well to us, as a result of which, our anticipation follow our expectation and desires for being blessed and is with strongly subjection. as an example, you may feel unhappy of other's remark on your friend, because you like your friend and more, you two may have many in common, but this can also obstacle your eyes from judging how your friend behavior. If only you can erase your bias to other's statement, can you examine the flaws your friend may suffer and help him to work out with them.
However, opposite to the speaker's assertion, not only the objective observation does exist, but also they appear as necessity at some situation. We understand who we human being really are, systemize our thesis of the science, probe the universal outside our planet, as long as we acquire the objection of our observation of ourselves, our life and the world we live in. Moreover, as a judge on the court or any measure taker for the nation, lacking the objective observation of the truth equals lacking of their qualification of the position.
From what has been discussed above, the claim hold by the speaker seems not that valuable as it stands. Either the subjective observation or the objective one does and should exist, for from the subjective one, we color our life, meantime, through the objective one, we see the fairness of the society.

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The speaker makes a threshold claim that no purely objective observation exists according to different people, for tinted with the observer's expectation or desires. I find this allegation to be specious. It wrongly suggests that all observation is subjective. To the contrary, that observation at a subjective angle does present the truth of any affair's essence to us reveals its existence两个谓语？.
ts好像有点问题 我没看懂你的立场T_T 不过从后面看来似乎是部分同意第二句 反对第一句？

It is not nothing we can gain from the arguer's statement as its merits. After all, in our daily life facing diversity of the world, different people's opinions towards the same thing may vary greatly. For example, waking up with in a sunny morning, an optimizer optimist? sings "what a brand new day!" while the pessimistic one complains that the retire days of his life become less again; seeing a newly-born puppy, some may marvel at the fabulous nature as some cry for how his own life fades away 啊 为什么看到puppy会感叹这个啊。。 有没有更典型一点的例子咧？; some smile at everything, at the same time, others may be content with nothing...

Indeed, some observation gained from people's subjective answers, to which well-known historic stories lend the concrete support. In the ancient China, people all hold the view that the sky turns out to be a circle and the ground of the earth as a square. The reason why they make their conclusion is the fact that they watch the sun goes everyday up and down, from the east to the west as well as the myth passing down for generations that four big tutors support the ground of the earth on their shoulder under each corner of it. We can implicitly see 有这种用法吗？总觉得implicit是指“表达”的 刚查的MW ： capable of being understood from something else though unexpressed；你看可不可以换成： Their imagination implies their comprehension of the world they live in. that their subjective imagination results in their comprehension of what the world they live in is like.这个例子是在证明 观察是主观解释的结果 吗？ 我觉得这个例子是在说片面的观察导致错误的认识。。。这里面古人的观察结果本身并没有错呀 只是他们的解释不对;而且 在这里 人们的观察是一致的 没有分歧 In addition, another interesting example comes from an old saying of China, which is "Most beauty comes from the eyes of the one loving her".呵呵 刚刚查的 “ Beauty lies in the love's eyes.”英文里的情人眼里出西施 用着个判卷的人应该更有共鸣吧 It is obvious that in each lover's eyes all disadvantages disappear soundly remaining only the sparkle point of his or her lover, only because of love and no other reasons.

Accordingly, when we analyze the reasons why observers' views differ from each other, their expectation and desires ultimately guide them to make their decisions. Naturally, as human being, we always have best wishes to ourselves and to whom we love and care. Furthermore, we hope that they will all come true one day or and everything goes well to us, . As a result, as a result of which, our anticipation follow our expectation anticipation 和 expectation有什么区别呀？ and desires for being blessed and is with strongly subjection. As an example, you may feel unhappy of other's remark on your friend, because you like your friend and more, you two may have many in common, but this can also obstacle your eyes from judging how your friend behavior is. If only you can erase your bias to other's statement, can you 不用倒装 examine the flaws your friend may suffer and help him to work out with them.

However, opposite to the speaker's assertion, not only the objective observation does exist, but also they appear as necessity at some situation. We understand who we human being really are, systemize our thesis of the science, probe the universal outside our planet, as long as we acquire the objection of our observation of ourselves, our life and the world we live in. Moreover, as a judge on the court or any measure taker for the nation, lacking the objective observation of the truth equals lacking of their qualification of the position.
这一段是没有时间写了吗 我觉得这里为什么objective observation does exist的理由没有很充分的给出来 加上你前面一直讨论的都是为什么人的观察是主观的 除去这一段整篇文章看上去更像是在论证“观察都是主观的”这个观点 如果没有时间了 不如把立场变一变

From what has been discussed above, the claim hold by the speaker seems not that valuable as it stands. Either the subjective observation or the objective one does and should exist, for from the subjective one, we color our life, meantime, through the objective one, we see the fairness of the society.

你的论证思路是： 主观观察是存在的――主观观察来源于不同的人对世界的不同认识――主观的认识来源于不同的期望――但是，客观观察是存在的
这个思路在最后转了好大一个折啊～～ 读下来觉得不要那个转折反而论证思路上要完整一些 因为一来这个转折证明的不是很充分 二来这个写法先让人渐渐接收了“恩恩 观察确实都是主观的！！”然后突然蹦出来一个“客观的重要性”感情上和理智上甚是接受不了啊～ 不过我没读懂开头可能也有很大关系。。。

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