issue157 不知道怎么写好，欠扁的！

lignumvitaeUID: 207532

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There is no such thing as purely objective observation. All observation is subjective; it is always guided by the observer's expectations or desires.
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In human society, people view everything through their eyes, ears, touching, etc. That is the observation that they received from outside world. It is true that no observation is purely objective, but I do not accept hastily that all observation is subjective.

First of all, admittedly, no purely objective observation exists in the world, since everything is observed and defined by human being, who controls the world. People receive things, evidence, events, comments, and so forth by hearing, watching, touching, and feeling. They do not only receive the information, but also judge whether to accept and from which angle they view. We know that human being is not a simple animal but who has minds and ideas, and could think in different way and conclude from various angles. For example, as the new exchange rate between Chinese Yuan and US dollar, some Chinese people think it is good news but others hold the opposite point. Some think about it from economic angle while other considers it a international political issue. Therefore, no observation is purely objective.

Secondly, on the contrary, it is too absolutely to say that all observation is subjective. Some things are so stubborn that could not alter by people's minds. For instance, that everybody will go to die eventually is an undoubtedly truth. People could observe the death from other people in themselves, and no matter they accept it or not, the truth is stubborn and come to everybody inevitably. Another example is that the passed time will not return any more. Some people may think time is so little and do everything in a hurry, while some other feel that time is sufficient to enjoy, and have a slow pace of lives. However, the principle that time is passing every minutes is unchangeable and objective.

Moreover, by viewing things and events both in subjective and objective way, people could conduct a regular thinking method, and get reasonable conclusion. Why people are educated is to cultivate the accepting capacity and thinking manner. When people are mature enough, they would observe many current things and go on understanding lots of past things by learning history or other way. Some scientific regulation and natural principles are the stubborn truth that are not determined by personal thinking, while some social events and issues would be discussed in different angles, some of them are opposites.

In conclusion, although no purely objective observation exists in the world due to people, who could think and judge probably in different ways, we could learn things and issues through various angles in order to get full-scale view and get reasonable conclusion. That will both contribute to form the contemporary value view and worldview and develop the social culture and improvement in the future.

[ Last edited by staralways on 2005-8-3 at 09:30 ]

ouymUID: 2109118

In human society, people view everything through their eyes, ears, touching, etc. That is the observation that they received from outside world. It is true that no observation is purely objective, but I do not accept hastily that all observation is subjective.

First of all, admittedly, no purely objective observation exists in the world, since everything is observed and defined by human being, who controls the world(说句提外话,我不认为人可以control the world). People receive things, evidence, events, comments, and so forth by hearing, watching, touching, and feeling. They do not only receive the information, but also judge whether to accept and from which angle they view. We know that human being is not a simple animal but who(这里好象有问题!) has minds and ideas, and could think in different way and conclude from various angles. For example, as the new exchange rate between Chinese Yuan and US dollar, some Chinese people think it is good news but others hold the opposite point. Some think about it from economic angle while other considers(应该是others consider吧!) it a international political issue. Therefore, no observation is purely objective.

Secondly, on the contrary, it is too absolutely to say that all observation is subjective. Some things(其实是all things,不是吗?) are so stubborn that could not alter by people's minds. For instance, that everybody will go to die eventually is an undoubtedly truth. People could observe the death from other people in themselves, and no matter they accept it or not, the truth is stubborn and come to everybody inevitably(这里有离题的感觉.题目是说有没有绝对客观的观察,而这个例子只是说世界上的事情不为人的意志转移!). Another example is that the passed time will not return any more. Some people may think time is so little and do everything in a hurry, while some other feel that time is sufficient to enjoy, and have a slow pace of lives. However, the principle that time is passing every minutes is unchangeable and objective.(同样的问题!!)

Moreover, by viewing things and events both in subjective and objective way, people could conduct a regular thinking method, and get reasonable conclusion. Why people are educated is to cultivate the accepting capacity and thinking manner. When people are mature enough, they would observe many current things and go on understanding lots of past things by learning history or other way. Some scientific regulation and natural principles are the stubborn truth that are not determined by personal thinking, while some social events and issues would be discussed in different angles, some of them are opposites.

In conclusion, although no purely objective observation exists in the world due to people(不对!应该是due to 一个原因), who could think and judge probably in different ways, we could learn things and issues through various angles in order to get full-scale view and get reasonable conclusion. That will both contribute to form the contemporary value view and worldview and develop the social culture and improvement in the future.

B1,B2的开头"first of all, admittedly""secondly, on the contrary",我觉得不好!
感觉对题目把握得不是很准确!

我得连接,求互改!谢谢!
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lignumvitaeUID: 207532

谢谢你拍我，真是越写越没信心了～～

ouymUID: 2109118

大家都一样,楼主不要泄气!