issue138 v6战队，8.8，极其痛苦ing

11yvetteUID: 2102418

很久没有练习issue了，今天写了138，手生得可以，而且越写越觉得自己不行了。。。

提纲大致是这样的：B1 错误失败可以激励斗志；B2 我们可以从错误失败中吸取经验教训；B3 但是不仅仅是错误才能进步。

写B3的时候尤其痛苦，感觉自己写这一点基本是打自己嘴巴，还请大家使劲批，帮助提一下意见如果按照B3的思路可以怎么写，可以举些什么例子，谢谢啦~~

------题目------
Only through mistakes can there be discovery or progress.

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When we meet the problem or even the mistake on the way of our researches or studies, we may feel depressed. However, the mistakes are some hind of the progress later as the speaker indicates. What I believe is that do not afraid of the mistakes, sometimes they are the path to attain to the final goal. But mistake may not the necessary condition of the discovery or progress.

To begin with, mistakes which always play a role of impetus when we meet them. Since human being is a kind of creature that not willing to be defeated by obstacles. As we fail, we would like to restart again, and full of encourage maybe much more than the first try. Attitude determines the result, which is the common sense for us to digest and comprehend. As the morale is hold up, the distance to the goal may curtail. So the mistake gives us another opportunity to get close to what we seek, and this new choice would drive the fatigue, frustration and bad luck away, replaced by courage and positive attitudes that are coming into our mind to continue with what we have already done.

Moreover, based on the mistakes and false, we can check what the crucial deficiency is in the former stage, and accumulate the experience in order not to meet the same problem later on. Experience is vital to new discoveries, especially the negative experience, it may orient people not to step the same footprint what the ancestors had set on the way of discovery, without which more and more mistakes would take place, and time and efficiency are the meaningless conceptions. Fortunately, mistakes exist, and compare to the mistakes we have made, the substance always becomes clearer and closer through a whole new thinking path. Time has been saved, efficiency has been boosted, other solutions have been adopted to deal with the problems, and these are all the progress.

However, we can not assert arbitrarily that mistakes are the only avenue to discover the unknown world. Absolute things hardly exist in the world. For individuals, Lots of the scientists get their goal without pay more time and vigor for the mistakes. Once they start a new program, they walk to the final goal one path through, not meeting the branches of troubles even mistakes. For them, preparations of absorbing the experience of predecessors, diligence and intelligence are the three key words. Before the new discovery, they are searching for the experience that others had concluded, and check out which details may put more foci on and should be avoided which may leads to a long way to the success. And In the process of the program, they devote their heart and soul on it, thinking of the possibilities to solve with it. All that may shorten their time to get the terminal of the program, and make discovery and progress.

To sum up, though the mistakes are not likely the only reason to progress, they are as same as the roll booster for human being to achieve the success as people can recognize what approaches are worthy employing, what conditions should be taken into account and what may be avoided. These are the pivotal messages mistakes giving us. Well adopting these messages may shorten the distance of the terminal.

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Only through mistakes can there be discovery or progress.

------正文------
When we meet the problem or even the mistake on the way of our researches or studies, we may feel depressed. However, the mistakes are some hind of the progress later as the speaker indicates. What I believe is that do not （少了be吧，后面也有一些语法上的错就不纠正了，是限时的吗？）afraid of the mistakes, sometimes they are the path to attain to the final goal. But mistake may not the necessary condition of the discovery or progress. （觉得有点绕了，不要用那么多的however, but什么的，直接一点表达你的观点）
To begin with, mistakes which always play a role of impetus when we meet them. Since human being is a kind of creature that not willing to be defeated by obstacles. As we fail, we would like to restart again, and full of encourage maybe much more than the first try. Attitude determines the result, which is the common sense for us to digest and comprehend. As（改成when好一点） the morale is hold up, the distance to the goal may curtail. So the mistake gives us another opportunity to get close to what we seek, and this new choice would drive the fatigue, frustration and bad luck away（这句不错）, replaced by courage and positive attitudes that are coming into our mind to continue with what we have already done.（这一段语言流畅多了，不过似乎没有讲到对discovery和progress的意义，可以再加两个词）

Moreover, based on the mistakes and false, we can check what the crucial deficiency is in the former stage, and accumulate the experience in order not to meet the same problem later on. Experience is vital to new discoveries, especially the negative experience, it may orient people not to step the same footprint what the ancestors had set on the way of discovery, without which more and more mistakes would take place, and time and efficiency are the meaningless conceptions. Fortunately, mistakes exist, and compare to the mistakes we have made, the substance always becomes clearer and closer through a whole new thinking path. Time has been saved, efficiency has been boosted, other solutions have been adopted to deal with the problems, and these are all the progress.（感觉有点空，若能举例会好一些。）
However, we can not assert arbitrarily that mistakes are the only avenue to discover the unknown world. Absolute things hardly exist in the world. For individuals, Lots of the scientists get their goal without pay more time and vigor for the mistakes. Once they start a new program, they walk to the final goal one path through, not meeting the branches of troubles even mistakes. For them, preparations of absorbing the experience of predecessors, diligence and intelligence are the three key words. Before the new discovery, they are searching for the experience that others had concluded, and check out which details may put more foci on and should be avoided which may leads to a long way to the success. And In the process of the program, they devote their heart and soul on it, thinking of the possibilities to solve with it. All that may shorten their time to get the terminal of the program, and make discovery and progress. 同样的问题，过于笼统了，显得没有说服力。个人觉得像这样的题目如果不举实例的话是比较难把问题说清楚的。而且这里似乎有点走题了，感觉你在说什么是scientists的职责，应该说the experience from their predecessors as well as the sophisticated method could greatly reduce the chance of making mistakes in their way to progress or new discoveries. 另外还可以提一个scientists 可以利用modern facilities to prevent mistake,比如说把计算交给电脑什么的
To sum up, though the mistakes are not likely the only reason to progress, they are as same as the roll booster for human being to achieve the success as people can recognize what approaches are worthy employing, what conditions should be taken into account and what may be avoided. These are the pivotal messages mistakes giving us. Well adopting these messages may shorten the distance of the terminal.

当然限时是必要的，不过如果限时失败的话可一定要好好地重写一下，不能满足于写完就了事，把句式什么的好好改改，还有语法错误，如果自己经常犯的话可以总结一下，这样下次印象就深了。 ;P

11yvetteUID: 2102418

谢谢xiaowenzi拍啊~~~
这篇是限时的
这里的例子问题想好久都觉得不合适啊……
B3的一点，茅塞顿开啊~~~谢谢哦

[ Last edited by 11yvette on 2005-8-8 at 23:40 ]

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无论如何要坚持，别泄气！！
我现在也很没状态，很郁闷阿~~~
互相打气~~~！！！！

Originally posted by 11yvette at 2005-8-8 22:34
很久没有练习issue了，今天写了138，手生得可以，而且越写越觉得自己不行了。。。

提纲大致是这样的：B1 错误失败可以激励斗志；B2 我们可以从错误失败中吸取经验教训；B3 但是不仅仅是错误才能进步。

写B3 ...