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Issue 150：“Because of television and worldwide computer connections, people can now become familiar with a great many places that they have never visited. As a result, tourism will soon become obsolete.

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As the development of science and technology, globalization brings people more information and connects each other more tightly than anytime before, including tourism. The vivid pictures and imagines that offered by television and Internet broaden individual prospective. The visional sense enriches the individual's experiences of interest places, some of which may be not visited by him/her. But it is still haste to conclude that the tourism will become obsolete due to the visional enjoyment brought by television and Internet. The experience of vision cannot replace the tourism itself. On opposite, it will inspire the passion of it.

The television and other forms of visional devices can offer the pictures and video of place of interest. Anyhow, when you sit in home or other indoor places, it only is restrained in the visional enjoyment, without being touched or smelt. Far from tourism itself, watching TV or connecting Internet cannot replace the feel of tour. Colorful pictures or images of some place will even boost the interest of visiting. It is the first look of such pictures that grasps our attention and introduces the charm of the place. The vivid images of National Discovery attract lots of people, and make the untrod mountains or valleys famous, the visitors actually impetus the tourism.

Some visitors enjoy the process of tour not only the landscapes. They enjoy sport, they enjoy the feeling of sweating and breathing. The following landscape is only a part of tour. The pictures or videos are far from enjoyment. To them, looking the pictures quietly cannot be called enjoyment. And the recording of images is the map of tour. In this case, the television and Internet have little impact of tourism, let alone terminating it.

Lots of people imagine the scene of breathing fresh air in Scottish Highland, or imagine the scene of jumping along with kangaroos in the Australian desert. Immersed heart and soul with the feeling of lovely place is indispensable part of tourism, which cannot be replaced by TV or other devices. The real content of tourism is the process of exploring and finding. The beautiful landscape after arriving is the result. Without the process, no enjoyment can be achieved to them.

In a word, tourism cannot be substituted by watching TV or look the pictures. Anyone enjoy touring desires to be surrounded by the environment of interested place. The colorful and vivid pictures or images are the introductions of beautiful places. Rather than obsolete, flourishing the tourism will be at the time of coverage of television and Internet.

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As （with）the development of science and technology, globalization brings people more information and connects each other more tightly than anytime before, including tourism  . The vivid pictures and imaginesthat（images）  offered by television and Internet broaden individual prospective. The visional sense enriches the individual's experiences of interest places, some of which may be not visited by him/her. But it is still haste to conclude that the tourism will become obsolete due to the visional enjoyment brought by television and Internet. The experience of vision cannot replace the tourism itself. On opposite, it will inspire the passion of it.

The television and other forms of visional devices can offer the pictures and video of place of interest. Anyhow, when you sit in home or other indoor places, it only is restrained in the visional enjoyment, without being touched or smelt. Far from tourism itself, watching TV or connecting Internet cannot replace the feelfeeling of tour. Colorful pictures or images of some place will even boost the interest of visiting. It is the first look of such pictures that grasps our attention and introduces the charm of the place. The vivid images of National Discovery attract lots of people, and make the untrod mountains or valleys famous, the visitors actually impetus the tourism.the vistors? 还是the programs?

Some visitors enjoy the process of tour not only the landscapes. They enjoy sport, they enjoy the feeling of sweating and breathing. The following landscape is only a part of tour. The pictures or videos are far from enjoyment. To them, looking the pictures quietly cannot be called enjoyment. And the recording of images is the map of tour. In this case, the television and Internet have little impact of tourism, let alone terminating it.

Lots of people imagine the scene of breathing fresh air in Scottish Highland, or imagine the scene of jumping along with kangaroos in the Australian desert. Immersed heart and soul with the feeling of lovely place is indispensable part of tourism, which cannot be replaced by TV or other devices. The real content of tourism is the process of exploring and finding. The beautiful landscape after arriving is the result. Without the process, no enjoyment can be achieved to them.

In a word, tourism cannot be substituted by watching TV or look the pictures. Anyone enjoy touring desires to be surrounded by the environment of interested place. The colorful and vivid pictures or images are the introductions of beautiful places. Rather than obsolete, flourishing the tourism will be tourism will be flourishingat the time of coverage of television and Internet.

总的来说感觉不错的。文章的条例很清楚。只是语法上有些小毛病，要加油！

longwaykingUID: 196798

谢谢，加油啊