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foreveraUID：202035

41. "Such nonmainstream areas of inquiry as astrology, fortune-telling, and psychic and paranormal pursuits play a vital role in society by satisfying human needs that are not addressed by mainstream science."

1.        承认非主流的研究的确能够丰富研究界的思想,
2.        但是每个时代对主流研究的定义和限定不同,非主流的研究推动社会发展就不一定是通过满足人们的需要了
3.        更何况那些非主流的思想在某种程度上会误道人们,虽然是满足和人们的需要

Do nonmainstream areas show their significance by satisfying human needs which are beyond mainstream’s scope? Concerning all aspects, any extreme answers are improper to the question. Basically, I must acknowledge the importance of nonmainstream areas, however, in my opinion, the nonmainstream areas did and do not always promote the development of societies by satisfying human needs, let alone the misguidance of human minds by these areas.
        Admittedly, nonmainstream areas do provide human beings with complements in fields of science researches, which, usually, are blanks to mainstream researchers. And, it is equally important that the nonmainstream provide scientific and culture diversities. For example, theories of psychic and paranormal pursuits can explain some puzzles, such as the mystery Bermuda Triangle, which are still beyond mainstream scientific knowledge; and various kinds of religion multiply culture lives. In a word, without any doubt, nonmainstream areas play a vital role in society.
        However, based on different definitions and limits of nonmainstream areas, they, probably, have advanced or are advancing the society by satisfying human needs. Nonmainstream areas should be those which are not authorized and have insufficient power to effect the society essentially. Thus, the nonmainstream areas yesterday would have turned to be the mainstream today, in contrary, the authorization might fall low to be heresy.  Taking Copernicus’ theory of the center of the universe for example,( 哪位高人知道”日心说”的准确翻译啊,告诉俺一下) in the theocratic society, theology would be definitely mainstream science, and accordingly, Copernicus and his espousers are treated as heresies . For the high degree of mind manipulation by the theocratic system, their disciplines could not conform to the need of the public. But it is the persistence in their spirits of so-called heresy that leads modern astronomy to the right direction- earth is not the center of the universe, and the universe is a amazing infinite. Consequently, to this extent, the paramount effect nonmainstream areas of inquiry have on the society should attribute to the power of individuals’ spirits, not satisfactions of human needs.
        What’s more, the nonmainstream areas of inquiry will probably misguide the public, even in the cases that they can meet people’s needs. In ancient times, with ill developed technology, nonmainstream area of inquiry human beings were not able to elucidate some natural phenomena, naturally, to explain the puzzles of the world, our ancestors originate numerous legends and idols. Granted that these legends and idols can offer people spiritual ease, but in many occasions, facing some helpless emergences, they would rely on their idols rather than scientific methods to solve problems. For instance, some patients would not turn to medical treatments for help, but witch doctors who pursued wealth by mendacious actions, and the so-called treatments would cost the patients not only possession but also their lives. So, even of spiritual ease, the nonmainstream areas of inquiry have higher fatalness of being abused.
        To sum up, to judge the significance of a nonmainstream area of inquiry requires long-term analysis of its developing trend and by what means it affect the society. In addition, even acknowledge the importance of nonmainstream area of inquiry, we should not neglect the fatalness of its being abused.

[ Last edited by staralways on 2005-8-12 at 11:05 ]

yurong84UID：2120087

heliocentric, or sun-centred, model of the universe-----日心说

占个座开始拍~~

yurong84UID：2120087

Do nonmainstream areas show their significance by satisfying human needs which are beyond mainstream’s scope? Concerning all aspects, any extreme answers are improper to the question. Basically, I must acknowledge the importance of nonmainstream areas, however, in my opinion, the nonmainstream areas did and do not always（不错啊都照顾到了） promote the development of societies by satisfying human needs, let alone the misguidance of human minds by these areas（觉得let alone their...即可）.
        Admittedly, nonmainstream areas do provide human beings with complements in fields of science researches, which, usually, are blanks to mainstream researchers. And, it is equally important that the nonmainstream provide（s） scientific and culture（cultural） diversities. For example, theories of psychic and paranormal pursuits can explain(这个例子好像不太恰当，似乎科学已经作出合理解释了，换个角度谈就好了) some puzzles, such as the mystery Bermuda Triangle, which are（is） still beyond mainstream scientific knowledge; and（it is the same with） various kinds of religion multiply culture lives. In a word, without any doubt, nonmainstream areas play a vital role in society.
        However(What's more吧，好像是递进), based on different definitions and limits of nonmainstream areas, they, probably, have advanced or are advancing the society by satisfying human needs. Nonmainstream areas should be those which are not authorized and have insufficient power to effect the society essentially. Thus（这儿有因果？）, the nonmainstream areas yesterday would have turned to be the mainstream today, in contrary(on the contrary?), the authorization might fall low to(没听过阿，用turn to可以不？) be heresy.  Taking Copernicus’ theory of the center of the universe for example,( 哪位高人知道”日心说”的准确翻译啊,告诉俺一下) in the theocratic society, theology would be definitely mainstream science, and accordingly, Copernicus and his espousers are treated as heresies . For the high degree of mind manipulation by the theocratic system, their disciplines could not conform to the need of the public. But it is the persistence in their spirits of so-called heresy that leads modern astronomy to the right direction- earth is not the center of the universe, and the universe is an amazing infinite. Consequently, to this extent, the paramount effect nonmainstream areas of inquiry have on the society should attribute to the power of individuals’ spirits, not satisfactions of human needs（段首好像忘了说？:p）.
        What’s more（这里ms该转折？）, the nonmainstream areas of inquiry will probably misguide the public, even in the cases that they can meet people’s needs. In ancient times, with ill developed technology, nonmainstream area of inquiry human beings were not able to elucidate some natural phenomena, naturally, to explain the puzzles of the world, our ancestors originate numerous legends and idols（不错的句子）. Granted that these legends and idols can offer people spiritual ease, but in many occasions, facing some helpless emergences, they would merely rely on their idols rather than scientific methods to solve problems. For instance, some patients would not turn to medical treatments for help, but （to）witch doctors who pursued wealth by mendacious actions, and the so-called treatments would cost the patients not only possession but also their lives. So, even of spiritual ease, the nonmainstream areas of inquiry have higher fatalness of being abused(表述上不太好).
        To sum up, to judge the significance of a nonmainstream area of inquiry requires long-term analysis of its developing trend and （the means by which it affects the society）by what means it affect the society. In addition, even acknowledge the importance of nonmainstream area of inquiry, we should not neglect the fatalness of its being abused(换一下说法？).

本人比较喜欢挑语言错误拉
表介意~~~~
觉得你的构思很好，角度新颖，而且比偶论证的充分多了！
语句也不错值得我学习！！

但文章似乎跟提纲还有一段差距,比如说第三段的开头。。。
注意把握中心，段首最好更明确地摆出观点来
:handshake

foreveraUID：202035

some puzzles, such as the mystery Bermuda Triangle, which are（is）

这里which跟的应该是前面的some　puzzles，　应该就是用are

foreveraUID：202035

However(What's more吧，好像是递进), based on different definitions and limits of nonmainstream areas, they, probably, have advanced or are advancing the society by satisfying human needs.

这里写错了一点．．．后面应该是by　other　means，not by satisfying human needs only．这样整段就通了．．．．昨天脑子不知道在想啥呢．．．．明明是这样想的．．．但是一打就打错了．．．ft

[ Last edited by forevera on 2005-8-12 at 11:21 ]

foreveraUID：202035

fall　low是沦落为．．．的意思

foreveraUID：202035

多谢你的日心说．．．ＨＯＨＯ

purple1228UID：2116196

嘎嘎，最后一篇了:lol
咦，你的格式好奇怪啊...

purple1228UID：2116196

Do nonmainstream areas show their significance by satisfying human needs which are beyond mainstream’s scope? Concerning all aspects, any extreme answers are improper to the question. Basically, I must acknowledge the importance of nonmainstream areas, however, in my opinion, the nonmainstream areas did and do not always promote the development of societies by satisfying human needs, let alone the misguidance of human minds by these areas看来forevera对段首很有研究嘛，恩，再学习学习....
        Admittedly, nonmainstream areas do provide human beings with complements in fields of science researches, which, usually, are blanks to mainstream researchers. And, it is equally important that the nonmainstream provide scientific and culture diversities. For example, theories of psychic and paranormal pursuits can explain some puzzles, such as the mystery Bermuda Triangle, which are still beyond mainstream scientific knowledge;可以这么用么？ and various kinds of religion multiply culture lives. In a word, without any doubt, nonmainstream areas play a vital role in society.
        However, based on different definitions and limits of nonmainstream areas, they, probably, have advanced or are advancing the society by satisfying human needs. Nonmainstream areas should be those which are not authorized and have insufficient power to effect the society essentially. Thus, the nonmainstream areas yesterday would have turned to be the mainstream today不应该是yestoday's ... would have turned to be today's...么？, in contrary, the authorization might fall low to be heresy.  Taking Copernicus’ theory of the center of the universe for example,( 哪位高人知道”日心说”的准确翻译啊,告诉俺一下) in the theocratic society, theology would be definitely mainstream science, and accordingly, Copernicus and his espousers are treated as heresies . For the high degree of mind manipulation by the theocratic system, their disciplines could not conform to the need of the public. But it is the persistence in their spirits of so-called heresy that leads modern astronomy to the right direction- earth is not the center of the universe, and the universe is a amazing infinite. Consequently, to this extent, the paramount effect nonmainstream areas of inquiry have on the society should attribute to the power of individuals’ spirits, not satisfactions of human needs.
        What’s more, the nonmainstream areas of inquiry will probably misguide the public, even in the cases that they can meet people’s needs. In ancient times, with ill developed technology, nonmainstream area of inquiry human beings were not able to elucidate some natural phenomena, naturally, to explain the puzzles of the world, our ancestors originate numerous legends and idols. Granted that these legends and idols can offer people spiritual ease, but in many occasions, facing some helpless emergences, they would rely on their idols rather than scientific methods to solve problems. For instance, some patients would not turn to medical treatments for help, but witch doctors who pursued wealth by mendacious actions, and the so-called treatments would cost the patients not only possession but also their lives. So, even of spiritual ease, the nonmainstream areas of inquiry have higher fatalness of being abused.
        To sum up, to judge the significance of a nonmainstream area of inquiry requires long-term analysis of its developing trend and by what means it affect the society. In addition, even acknowledge the importance of nonmainstream area of inquiry, we should not neglect the fatalness of its being abused.

purple1228UID：2116196

同意蓉蓉的说法，段首还是表明立场的好，毕竟我们不是native speaker
再加中式思维，万一老米转不过来就惨了