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The arguer claims that outsiders bring their knowledge and experience to one field of study is the necessary condition of the significant advances in the field. In my point of view, I believe that the knowledge and experience in other fields is obviously an important resource of (这里应该是for吧) significant advance, but the advances can (加个also好些)result in the knowledge and experience in the field as well.
Firstly, economics has advanced significantly since mathematics and statistics were introduced into the field. (一上来就用例子论证不好,最好先做一些理论铺垫.比如说 As the study of specified field went further, the complexity and the profundity of the problems sometimes call for an additional elements from other subjects which could bring in an unprecedented angle to reach a novel view of the picture and maybe a decisive breakthrough of the problem. 或什么的,再用例子论证会比较好。 ) With the introduction of mathematics into economics, mathematical economics was born and developed. The birth of econometrics is contributed to the application of Mathematics and Statistics in economics. Even now, many statisticians including Qiwei Yao, a famous professor of statistics in London School of Economics, and Fan Jianqing, a professor of statistics and mathematics in Princeton University, even said (and I paraphrase):” econometricians are the statisticians who are not statisticians”. Of course, econometrics is neither mathematics nor statistics. It has become an independent field. Economics seems closer to natural sciences than are the other social sciences can mainly be contributed to the developments of econometrics and mathematical economics.(例子挺好的,俺就是例子太少。。。 再加上理论的论证就perfect了)
Secondly, when law and economics interacted, law of economics came into being. Law of economics is a discipline in which people analyze the problems of law in the framework of economics. Until (是when吧,until反了) Coase, a famous economist and the founder of law of economics, began to teach in the school of law of University of Chicago, Law of economics commenced to boom. Suppose that no economists and jurists made efforts on it together, it is less likely, even impossible that law of economics can become an independent discipline.
Finally, however, there is no denying that the inner experience in one field can also lead to significant advances. Economics is also a case in point. It is well known that both of the “Marginal Revolution” and Keynes’s Revolution are significant advances in the development of economics. The “Marginal Revolution” whose founders are Jevons, Menger and Walras who are famous economists creates the analysis framework of microeconomics. Keynes’s Revolution means the emergency of macroeconomics, one of the most important branches of economics. Its founder and mainly representative economist is Keynes who had been a great economist before the publication of The General Theory of Employment, Interest and Money. The four economists all read and assimilated the former economists’ research and then made their own contribution to economics.(这一段就有堆例子的感觉, 例子多也不要用的那奢侈阿! 这样反而显得论证力度不够。Ps:你是学经济的吧,全是经济学的例子。。。不过我也收获不少例子,呵呵)
In sum, some significant advances result in the knowledge and experience from another or several other fields, while other significant advances are own to(应该是owing to) the discipline’s own knowledge and experience. Thus, it is necessary that we should maintain a balance between the inner knowledge and experience and the outer knowledge and experience.(总的来说还是缺少论证,这样ets可能会觉得你缺少critical thinking…不过例子没说的,你也帮我看一下吧,我老是找不到合适的例子说,呵呵。。。)
我的issue07:
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=319319 请务必帮我拍一下,还没人拍过我呢。。。。 |
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