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203. "The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its heroines."

提纲:
      1观点:只通过英雄的特点了解社会的特点是不全面的.(因为社会是多元化,立体的)
       还可通过一般大众,建筑,服饰,音乐等
      2 通过英雄,可了解这个社会的价值观.
      3 通过普通大众,建筑,服饰等可了解这个社会的风俗,文化
      4 结尾(重申立场)
正文:
I agree with the speaker that it is sometimes necessary, and even desirable, for examining the character of the heroes or heroines to learn the character of the society. Nevertheless, we must also realize the character of the society from other respects by reason of that society is three-dimensional, otherwise, we cannot realize the society across-broad.

First of all, to understand the traits of society only through learning the traits of heroes and heroines are not the best way but a good means. It is obviously that the herons and heroines who are taken for by the people in the society reflect the values of the society. Therefore, these herons and heroines have some characteristics which regarded by the masses as super excellences, and what they have behaved are viewed by the people as courageous and bringing a large mount of benefits to the society. These flare points on the herons and heroines are the representative goal of human being want to achieve. Then we could easily understand the values of the society at a closer range by this way. Now let me take the following example to illustrate it: President Washington, the herons of American brought liberty for Americans, thereby, we can learn that Americans advocate freedom as the main pursuit of life; Michael Jordan, a sports heron in American society, who creates many a miracles of basketball game and becomes the most valuable player in the history of NBA, accordingly, it indicates that American society is a society which is very fond of basketball. And the facts tell me that they are reality of society. So through the traits of herons and heroines in this society to learn the character of society is really an effective method.

However, we could not fully realize the characteristic of a community merely by the traits of herons and heroines. More angles to explore the community, more characteristic of it could be found out. In respect that, many more traits of community only in matter learnt by populace, architecture, music, the raiment and so forty occupy in the society. On the one hand, festivals and customs the populace has imply one side of the society. For instance, if   adults educate children independence and self-determination as soon as possible, well then, the community has the sense of self-support. On the other hand, architecture, music, and raiment can reveal the other side of the community. Another example, aba, the Arab women are dressed everyday, which is long enough to reach the floor; Purdah, wore by Arab woman, which veils the best part of her face, and just allows showing up eyes . Both of them display the Arabs is a conservative and old-fashioned society. Without learning these aspects to understand the character of society, less we could know.

To sum up, unless examining the traits of herons and heroines, and learning from other respects of society synchronously, I concede that this is the best way to understand the character of society. Otherwise, the statement as the speaker claimed so is incomplete.

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哈, 我们这次都写了203, 恩, 请教请教----

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I agree with the speaker that it is sometimes necessary, and even desirable, for examining the character of the heroes or heroines to learn the character of the society. Nevertheless, we must also realize the character of the society from other respects by reason of that society is three-dimensional(three-dimensional和characer是因果关系吗?), otherwise, we cannot realize the society across-broad.

First of all, to understand the traits of society only through learning the traits of heroes and heroines are not the best way but a good means(我觉得改成:to understand....heroes and heroines, although not the best way, should somewhat be considered reasonable). It is obviously that the herons and heroines who are taken for by the people in the society reflect the values of the society. Therefore, these herons and heroines have some characteristics which regarded by the masses as super excellences(没看懂~~), and what they have behaved are viewed by the people as courageous and bringing a large mount of benefits to the society(这两句话应该调换一下位置,先说英雄代表人民利益,再说他们因此被人民选拔). These flare points on the herons and heroines are the representative goal of human being want to achieve. Then we could easily understand the values of the society at a closer range by this way. Now let me take the following example to illustrate it: President Washington, the herons of American brought liberty for Americans, thereby, we can learn that Americans advocate freedom as the main pursuit of life; Michael Jordan, a sports heron in American society, who creates many a miracles of basketball game and becomes the most valuable player in the history of NBA, accordingly, it indicates that American society is a society which is very fond of basketball. And the facts tell me that they are reality of society. So through the traits of herons and heroines in this society to learn the character of society is really an effective method.(论述中尽量要少用I,me之类的,换成We,us显得客观一些)

However, we could not fully realize the characteristic of a community merely by the traits of herons and heroines. More angles(perspectives) to explore the community, more characteristic of it could be found out(嗯嗯~~这个观点不错的). In respect that, many more traits of community only in matter learnt by populace, architecture, music, the raiment and so forty occupy in the society. On the one hand, festivals and customs the populace has imply one side of the society. For instance, if adults educate children independence and self-determination as soon as possible, well then, the community has the sense of self-support(这个假设感觉不是很能说明问题). On the other hand, architecture, music, and raiment can reveal the other side of the community. Another example, aba, the Arab women are dressed everyday, which is long enough to reach the floor; Purdah, wore by Arab woman, which veils the best part of her face, and just allows showing up eyes . Both of them display the Arabs is a conservative and old-fashioned society. Without learning these aspects to understand the character of society, less we could know.

To sum up, unless examining the traits of herons and heroines, and learning from other respects of society synchronously, I concede that this is the best way to understand the character of society. Otherwise, the statement as the speaker claimed so is incomplete.

看了提纲, 个人觉得这篇文章最好写成+,+,-形式比较好,就像shiel写的那样:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=385529
不过如果要写-,-,+的话,可以再写一段"英雄不能使我们了解社会",从驳斥的角度上论述一下

结尾没有比较写太多的,不过如果能大致把观点在重现一下是最好的.

文章的例子比较多啊~~每段的论证结构还不错,继续加油！！！

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谢谢组长,去看看shiel的再回来