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发表于 2006-2-5 10:09:07 |显示全部楼层
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38"In the age of television, reading books is not as important as it once was. People can learn as much by watching television as they can by reading books."
在电视时代,阅读已经没有原来那样重要了。人们可以通过看电视学习到和看书一样多的东西。

不同意
1. 电视主要提供信息,起到娱乐放松作用,在学习方面作用不是很大
2. 阅读仍然是主要的获得知识的来源方式,地位和以前是一样的
3. 让步:不否认电视仍然是一种获得知识的方式
结论:目前书籍仍是主要方式,结合电视可以达到更好的效果

With the popular of television, more and more people find that they can learn by watching television as reading books. People begin to ponder and discuss whether reading books is becoming less important than ever in that the television could afford the same approach to acquire acknowledge. In fact, just like that the effect of newspaper has not been weakened by the appearance of the radio, the crucial function of reading books has not been attenuated by TV absolutely. In current society, reading books is the main method of learning as it once was while watching television is effective complementarily.

First of all, nowadays the main function of television is providing information and entertainment. On the one hand, via the television, people could gain myriads of news concerning various fields, such as politic, sports, art and science. People should be noticed that it is merely a process of attaining information rather than learning. In this respect, the advantage of television over books is its vivid moving picture and euphonic voice. There is not any different in the concrete content. On the contrary, sometimes its merits turn out to be demerit since people are allured into the colorful video while they neglect the essence of information which is they need to learn in deed. On the other hand, it is obvious that most of television programs are associated with merchant profit. As for program producers, the higher audience rating a program has, the more profit they could gain. As a result, in order to attract more audiences, they must play some easy and comfortable programs, such as the situation comedy and inane game show, and they have to discard comparatively instructive program, which request audience to speculate deep actively as opposed to passively receiving during watching TV. The potential character of television determines that not all brainpower of people can be used utterly to study when they watching TV as reading books. Generally speaking, television cannot play the same role in learning as books since it is an informative and recreational access for people rather than study way.

More over, it is the inherent trait of reading books that make it the primary approach to learning today. First, reading books forces readers to ponder and absorb knowledge actively, which fires the imagination and memory of their brain, on matter the young or the old. Through reading books, people have the ability of thinking, which is more important than what they have learned to large extent. And what is better, this ability will company them and is beneficial to their study throughout the whole life. Contrastively, watching TV cannot do that. Second, books are more convenient media than TV sets. Freed from the shackle of electric, battery or TV machines, people can enjoy learning knowledge in any given place. Perhaps that is why people could read books in bus stops or parks as soon as they have spare time. Last, books are the resources which could be reviewed and cross-referenced as any time according to people’s will easily. In contrast, it is harder for people to replay what has performed program in TV without other facilities. In balance, as a traditional means of obtaining knowledge, reading books still maintains its pivotal status as it once did, therefore it is applied in almost all schools and universities till now.

However, no one can deny that some television programs could provide the same knowledge as books. Such programs do not focus on news or amusement any more, but pay more attention to how to teach people in a better way. Through combining acknowledge with lively description, people could learn as much as reading books. The National Geography program is a paragon, which become an alternative of National Geography Magazine. People could choose either of them to learn the geographic knowledge and animals’ habits. Under the circumstance, television program could be a good tutor too.  

In sum, in most cases reading books have advantages over watching television when it comes to the media for learning, consequently reading books keep the same significant station as before. Nevertheless, as a novel media, television has its unique character and will be the complementary for books. Any one who longs for education should make good use both of two media.

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发表于 2006-2-5 11:31:18 |显示全部楼层

我先给改一下吧

38"In the age of television, reading books is not as important as it once was. People can learn as much by watching television as they can by reading books."
在电视时代,阅读已经没有原来那样重要了。人们可以通过看电视学习到和看书一样多的东西。

不同意
1. 电视主要提供信息,起到娱乐放松作用,在学习方面作用不是很大
2. 阅读仍然是主要的获得知识的来源方式,地位和以前是一样的
3. 让步:不否认电视仍然是一种获得知识的方式
结论:目前书籍仍是主要方式,结合电视可以达到更好的效果

With the popular of television, more and more people find(out?) that they can learn by watching television as reading books. People begin to ponder and discuss whether reading books is becoming less important than ever in that the television could afford the same approach to acquire acknowledge( approach to doing sth吧?). In fact, just like that the effect of newspaper has not been weakened by the appearance of the radio, the crucial function of reading books has not been attenuated by TV absolutely. In current society, reading books is the main method of learning as it once was while watching television is effective complementarily.

First of all, nowadays the main function of television is providing information and entertainment. On the one hand, via the television, people could gain myriads of news concerning various fields, such as politic, sports, art and science. People should be noticed that it is merely a process of attaining information rather than learning. In this respect, the advantage of television over books is its vivid moving picture and euphonic voice. There is not any different in the concrete content. On the contrary, sometimes its merits turn out to be demerit since people are allured into the colorful video while they neglect the essence of information which is they need to learn in deed. On the other hand, it is obvious that most of television programs are associated with merchant profit. As for program producers, the higher audience rating a program has, the more profit they could gain. As a result, in order to attract more audiences, they must play some easy and comfortable programs, such as the situation comedy and inane game show, and they have to discard comparatively instructive program, which request audience to speculate deep actively as opposed to passively receiving during watching TV. The potential(还是inner) character of television determines that not all brainpower of people can be used utterly to study when they watching TV as reading books. Generally speaking, television cannot play the same role in learning as books since it is an informative and recreational access for people rather than study way.

More over, it is the inherent trait of reading books that make(s) it the primary approach to learning today. First, reading books forces readers to ponder and absorb knowledge actively( 这个actively用的好!赞一个), which fires the imagination and memory of their brain, on matter the young or the old(这个no matter the young or the old 好象不太规范). Through reading books, people have the ability of thinking(没读过书的就不会思考么?用hone一次更好吧?), which is more important than what they have learned to large extent. (感觉你的非限制性定语从句用的有点多)And what is better, this ability will company them and is beneficial to their study throughout the whole life. Contrastively, watching TV cannot do that. Second, books are more convenient media than TV sets. Freed from the shackle of electric, battery or TV machines, people can enjoy learning knowledge in any given place. Perhaps that is why people could read books in bus stops or parks as soon as they have spare time. Last, books are the resources which could be reviewed and cross-referenced as(at) any time according to people’s will easily. In contrast, it is harder for people to replay what has performed program in TV without other facilities. In balance, as a traditional means of obtaining knowledge, reading books still maintains its pivotal status as it once did, therefore it is applied in almost all schools and universities till now.

However, no one can deny that some television programs could provide the same knowledge as books(加个do) . Such programs do not focus on news or amusement any more, but pay more attention to how to teach people in a better way. Through combining acknowledge with lively description, people could learn as much as reading books. The National Geography program is a paragon, which become(s) an alternative of National Geography Magazine. People could choose either of them to learn the geographic knowledge and animals’ habits. Under the circumstance, television program could be a good tutor too.  

In sum, in most cases reading books have advantages over watching television when it comes to the media for learning, consequently reading books keep the same significant station as before. Nevertheless, as a novel media, television has its unique character and will be the complementary for books. Any one who longs for education should make good use both of two media.

写的很好,突出了电视机主要是娱乐方式这个重点,通过对比,突出了书籍对知识的传承作用是无可替代的。我的作业,也请你看一下吧。
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

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发表于 2006-2-5 15:21:26 |显示全部楼层

我晚些拍哦,今天家里来人了,一切都打乱了

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发表于 2006-2-5 20:31:27 |显示全部楼层
谢谢先
With the popular [居然开篇就出问题,popularity] of television, more and more people find(out?) [印象中find可以直接接句子吧  find out 是经过研究或者查询得知某事,或者发现说谎,做错事等,一般好像直接接n吧?] that they can learn by watching television as reading books. People begin to ponder and discuss whether reading books is becoming less important than ever in that the television could afford the same approach to acquire acknowledge( approach to doing sth吧?). In fact, just like that the effect of newspaper has not been weakened by the appearance of the radio, the crucial function of reading books has not been attenuated by TV absolutely. In current society, reading books is the main method of learning as it once was while watching television is effective complementarily.

First of all, nowadays the main function of television is providing information and entertainment. On the one hand, via the television, people could gain myriads of news concerning various fields, such as politic, sports, art and science. People should be noticed that it is merely a process of attaining information rather than learning. In this respect, the advantage of television over books is its vivid moving picture and euphonic voice. There is not any different [经常犯这种错误,而且自己还检查不出来 difference] in the concrete content. On the contrary, sometimes its merits turn out to be demerit since people are allured into the colorful video while they neglect the essence of information which is they need to learn in deed. On the other hand, it is obvious that most of television programs are associated with merchant profit. As for program producers, the higher audience rating a program has, the more profit they could gain. As a result, in order to attract more audiences, they must play some easy and comfortable programs, such as the situation comedy and inane game show, and they have to discard comparatively instructive program, which request audience to speculate deep actively as opposed to passively receiving during watching TV. The potential(还是inner) [inner或者interior都比较好] character of television determines that not all brainpower of people can be used utterly to study when they watching TV as reading books. Generally speaking, television cannot play the same role in learning as books since it is an informative and recreational access for people rather than study way.

More over, it is the inherent trait of reading books that make(s) it the primary approach to learning today. First, reading books forces readers to ponder and absorb knowledge actively( 这个actively用的好!赞一个), which fires the imagination and memory of their brain, on matter the young or the old(这个no matter the young or the old 好象不太规范). Through reading books, people have the ability of thinking(没读过书的就不会思考么?用hone一次更好吧?)[确实思考不全面,谢谢], which is more important than what they have learned to large extent. (感觉你的非限制性定语从句用的有点多)And what is better, this ability will company them and is beneficial to their study throughout the whole life. Contrastively, watching TV cannot do that. Second, books are more convenient media than TV sets. Freed from the shackle of electric, battery or TV machines, people can enjoy learning knowledge in any given place. Perhaps that is why people could read books in bus stops or parks as soon as they have spare time. Last, books are the resources which could be reviewed and cross-referenced as(at) any time according to people’s will easily. In contrast, it is harder for people to replay what has performed program in TV without other facilities. In balance, as a traditional means of obtaining knowledge, reading books still maintains its pivotal status as it once did, therefore it is applied in almost all schools and universities till now.

However, no one can deny that some television programs could provide the same knowledge as books(加个do) . Such programs do not focus on news or amusement any more, but pay more attention to how to teach people in a better way. Through combining acknowledge with lively description, people could learn as much as reading books. The National Geography program is a paragon, which become(s) an alternative of National Geography Magazine. People could choose either of them to learn the geographic knowledge and animals’ habits. Under the circumstance, television program could be a good tutor too.  

In sum, in most cases reading books have advantages over watching television when it comes to the media for learning, consequently reading books keep the same significant station as before. Nevertheless, as a novel media, television has its unique character and will be the complementary for books. Any one who longs for education should make good use both of two media.

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发表于 2006-2-5 20:34:57 |显示全部楼层
原帖由 frankku 于 2006-2-5 15:21 发表

没关系,不急:)
我马上就去看你的

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发表于 2006-2-6 00:25:11 |显示全部楼层
With the popularity of television, more and more people find out that they can learn by watching television as reading books. People begin to ponder and discuss whether reading books is becoming less important than ever in that the television could afford the same approach to acquire acknowledge(information是不是更好?). In fact, just like that the effect of newspaper has not been weakened by the appearance of the radio, the crucial function of reading books has not been attenuated by TV absolutely. In current society, reading books is the main method of learning as it once was while watching television is effective complementarily.这个我觉得说的绝对了点吧,因人而异,的确有的人不怎么读书而只看电视
First of all, nowadays the main function of television is providing information and entertainment. On the(去掉)one hand, via the television, people could gain myriads of news concerning various fields, such as politic(politics), sports, art and science. People should be noticed that it is merely a process of attaining information rather than learning. In this respect, the advantage of television over books is its vivid moving picture and euphonic voice. There is not any different in the concrete content. On the contrary, sometimes its merits turn out to be demerit since people are allured into the colorful video while they neglect the essence of information which is they need to learn in deed. On the other hand, it is obvious that most of television programs are associated with merchant profit. As for program producers, the higher audience rating a program has, the more profit they could gain. As a result, in order to attract more audiences, they must play some easy and comfortable programs, such as the situation comedy and inane game show, and they have to discard comparatively instructive program, which request audience to speculate deep actively as opposed to passively receiving during watching TV. The potential character of television determines that not all brainpower of people can be used utterly to study when they watching TV as reading books. Generally speaking, television cannot play the same role in learning as books since it is an informative and recreational access for people rather than study way.
More over, it is the inherent trait of reading books that make it the primary approach to learning today. First, reading books forces readers to ponder and absorb knowledge actively, which fires the imagination and memory of their brain, on(NO)matter the young or the old. Through reading books, people have the ability of thinking, which is more important than what they have learned to large extent. And what is better, this ability will company them and is beneficial to their study throughout the whole life. Contrastively, watching TV cannot do that. Second, books are more convenient media than TV sets. Freed from the shackle of electric, battery or TV machines, people can enjoy learning knowledge(去掉) in any given place. Perhaps that is why people could read books in bus stops or parks as soon as they have spare time.(这句翻译下来好像不通啊,也许那就是为什么人们已有闲暇的时间,就到车站或公园读书,呵呵) Last, books are the resources which could be reviewed and cross-referenced as any time according to people’s will easily. In contrast, it is harder for people to replay what has performed program in TV without other facilities. In balance, as a traditional means of obtaining knowledge, reading books still maintains its pivotal status as it once did, therefore it is applied in almost all schools and universities till now.

However, no one can deny that some television programs could provide the same knowledge as books. Such programs do not focus on news or amusement any more, but pay more attention to how to teach people in a better way. Through combining acknowledge with lively description, people could learn as much as reading books. The National Geography program is a paragon, which become an alternative of National Geography Magazine. People could choose either of them to learn the geographic knowledge and animals’ habits. Under the circumstance, television program could be a good tutor too.  

In sum, in most cases reading books have(has)advantages over watching television when it comes to the media for learning, consequently reading books keep(keeps) the same significant station as before. Nevertheless, as a novel media, television has its unique character and will be the complementary for books. Any one who longs for education should make good use both of two media.问个问题啊,我不知道Media是可数名词还是不可数,使单复同形吗?多谢

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发表于 2006-2-6 02:24:43 |显示全部楼层
原帖由 frankku 于 2006-2-6 00:25 发表
With the popularity of television, more and more people find out that they can learn by watching television as reading books. People begin to ponder and discuss whether reading  ...

1.find必须加out吗?我查查看
2. 我的观点好像和你们不太一样,我觉得不能忽略题目的后半句,特别是learning,所以着重讨论这点。在获得知识方面,我的观点是目前只能是一个补充,而不是主要的途径。当然它能提供的信息量在数量和时效性上是超过书籍的,这个我在文章中也提到了啊,但是获得信息和学习应该是两个不同的概念吧

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发表于 2006-2-6 10:21:38 |显示全部楼层

等等,还没贴完,你再回头看看6楼啊

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发表于 2006-2-6 11:58:03 |显示全部楼层
呵呵,我也纳闷怎么只有一段呢,原来没有贴完
Perhaps that is why people could read books in bus stops or parks as soon as they have spare time.(这句翻译下来好像不通啊,也许那就是为什么人们已有闲暇的时间,就到车站或公园读书,呵呵)

表达确实有点问题,呵呵,改为:That is why people could read books in bus stops or parks while they have spare time to learn. it is unimaginable that people take TV set and necessary accessories with themselve at any time.  这样行吗?
问个问题啊,我不知道Media是可数名词还是不可数,使单复同形吗?多谢

medium是可数名词,复数形式为meidums或media,后者比较常见

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发表于 2006-2-6 18:06:29 |显示全部楼层
车站和公园读书的问题我觉得差不多了,甚至可以把有些调侃的后半句去掉。我的意思就是人们可以利用在车站等车的闲暇时间来读会儿书。

谢谢你的Media解释啊,我昨天还查到传统字典了,没认真看,看了你的解释我又查了一下,果然,不过你说的比它还详细!多谢!

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RE: Issue38 请大家随便拍,请留下链接,方便回拍,谢谢 [修改]

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