issue52 批判思维教育与社会和谐 来看留连回拍

suyueUID: 2181126

Education encourages students to question and criticize, and therefore does little to promote social harmony."

1.提出问题和批判有助于科学和社会的发展。例子：
  without Einstein's question to Newton's gravity theory, there will not exist the famous relativity theory.
2。。人们的批判思维能使人更全面的解决问题。
3社会和谐，政府应该考虑失业，环境，恐怖主义的问题。压抑人民的心声，认为人们不去提出问题，不去批判就能使问题消灭是自欺欺人的做法。例子：秦始皇焚书坑儒。 教会烧死COPERNICUS
用了1个多小时，好几天没写了。希望早点状态回来




I do not agree with the speaker's opinion that bring criticize and question which education teach students will be harmful to the social harmony. In my point of view, skepticism is very important not only to student but also to the sociality.


skepticism and critical thinking are the impetus of science, so education must encourages students to question and criticize. As is known to everyone, school educations have great influence to the whole life of a student, and many characters are formed and ingrained when at school. As is also known to everyone, question and critical thinking are the impetus of innovation and invention. Without question, people will accept anything and any theory currently unlimited, then they will not doubt whether it is true or not. For instance, without Einstein's question to Newton's gravity theory, there will not exist the famous relativity theory. Just due to the skepticism and critical thinking of those scientists and inventors, our lives become more and more comfortable and convenient, and the society are developing fast.  Therefore, because of the affinity of skepticism training and students' later performance, question of students must be encouraged.


What is more,  can make people to deal with problems more all-sided. In order to see this point clearly, let see an example. Nowadays, many governments have to face more and more pressure such as : unemployment, violence and pollution etc. In China, the unemployment problem is serious. As a result government encourage people to build more factories. However, more factory bring more pollution. Once people evaluate one nation's fortune by its GDP, However along with the developing of industry the pollution is increasing. People have to spend more money to treat with the waste water and gas. After critical thinking people bring the Green GDP which is defined that the nation's fortune per a person After the cost of environment be restored. it is the true of the nation's fortune.


At last, the speaker has pointed the social harmony. I believe that government should consider more about the problem of unemployment, pollution and violence, not to attempting inhibit the voice of people. It is a self-deceiving idea that forbidding question and critical thinking equals to social harmony is self-deceiving. In old china, Qin Shi Huang,who have made the order to build the great wall once to command to burn all kinds of book in order to prohibit people's free thinking. However only after fewer years after his order his empire was overthrowed by people. The social harmony need people’s critical thinking and question.

To sum up, skepticism and critical thinking are the impetus of science, also they are need to people's all-sided thinking. What is more, social harmony need the free talking of people.

[ 本帖最后由 suyue 于 2006-3-16 00:13 编辑 ]

@amy@UID: 209096

嘻嘻嘻，多嘴一下下，最好写上题目哦，一般人记不住题库的:lol

expire7UID: 2160574

I do not agree with the speaker's opinion that bring criticize(criticism) and question which education(重复主语) teach students will be harmful to the social harmony. In my point of view, skepticism is very important not only to student but also to the sociality(society).


skepticism(Skepticism) and critical thinking are the impetus of science, so education must encourages students to question and criticize. As is known to everyone, school educations have great influence to the whole life of a student, and many characters are formed and ingrained when(he is) at school. As is also known to everyone, question and critical thinking are the impetus of innovation and invention. Without question, people will accept anything and any theory currently unlimited, then they will not doubt whether it is true or not. For instance, without Einstein's question to Newton's gravity theory, there will not exist the famous relativity theory.(引力和相对论有关系么？怪我寡闻。不过只是想提醒，如果不是，不要写) Just due to the skepticism and critical thinking of those scientists and inventors, our lives become more and more comfortable and convenient, and the society are developing fast.  Therefore, because of the affinity of skepticism training and students' later performance, question of students must be encouraged.


What is more,  can make people to deal with problems more all-sided. In order to see this point clearly, let see an example. Nowadays, many governments have to face more and more pressure such as: unemployment, violence and pollution etc. In China, the unemployment problem is serious. As a result government encourage(encourages) people to build more factories. However, more factory(factories) bring more pollution(pollutions). Once people evaluate one nation's fortune by its GDP, However (however )along with the developing of industry the pollution is increasing.(I don’t know your means) People have to spend more money to treat(in treating) with the waste water and gas. After critical thinking people bring the Green GDP which is defined that the nation's fortune per a person After the cost of environment be restored. it is the true of the nation's fortune.(这一段的打错误比较多，改不过来了。注意一下下)


At last, the speaker has pointed the social harmony.（你这样说那harmony作为关键词的作用就完全被放到次要位置了。首句换一下。写法没有问题） I believe that government should consider more about the problem of unemployment, pollution and violence, not to attempting inhibit the voice of people. It is a self-deceiving idea that forbidding question and critical thinking equals to social harmony is self-deceiving. In old china, Qin Shi Huang,who have made the order to build the great wall once to command to burn all kinds of book in order to prohibit people's free thinking. However only after fewer years after his order his empire was overthrowed by people. The social harmony need（needs） people’s critical thinking and question.

To sum up, skepticism and critical thinking are the impetus of science, also they are need to people's all-sided thinking. What is more, social harmony need(needs) the free talking of people.

suyue保持练习吧,好好加油.还行了.词汇比我丰富多了.就是句子变得有点乱.而且不长.还有时态语态问题比较严重。

suyueUID: 2181126

原帖由 @amy@ 于 2006-3-14 00:18 发表
嘻嘻嘻，多嘴一下下，最好写上题目哦，一般人记不住题库的:lol

本本没电了，严重谢谢ＡＭＹ一下，本来要加的一及就忘了　明天下午上来补

yytmywhUID: 2188847

原帖由 suyue 于 2006-3-13 23:53 发表
1.提出问题和批判有助于科学和社会的发展。例子：
  without Einstein's question to Newton's gravity theory, there will not exist the famous relativity theory.
2。。人们的批判思维能使人更全面的解决问题。
3社会和谐，政府应该考虑失业，环境，恐怖主义的问题。压抑人民的心声，认为人们不去提出问题，不去批判就能使问题消灭是自欺欺人的做法。例子：秦始皇焚书坑儒。 教会烧死COPERNICUS

总的说,我认为,题目要讨论的, 不是批判对社会究竟有没有好处或者有什么好处, 而是批判对社会和谐产生的影响问题, 题目并不否认批判对社会有好处, 因此, 我有个疑问:我们是否还有必要用整整两段来陈述(如suyue所做的),提问和批判对社会有哪些好处呢.....



I do not agree with the speaker's opinion that bring criticize and question which education teach students will be harmful to the social harmony. In my point of view, skepticism is very important not only to student but also to the sociality.


skepticism and critical thinking are the impetus of science, so education must encourages students to question and criticize.
这句说,提出问题对科学的发展有帮助. As is known to everyone, school educations have great influence to the whole life of a student, and many characters are formed and ingrained when at school. As is also known to everyone, question and critical thinking are the impetus of innovation and invention. Without question, people will accept anything and any theory currently unlimited, then they will not doubt whether it is true or not. For instance, without Einstein's question to Newton's gravity theory, there will not exist the famous relativity theory. Just due to the skepticism and critical thinking of those scientists and inventors, our lives become more and more comfortable and convenient, and the society are developing fast.  Therefore, because of the affinity of skepticism training and students' later performance, question of students must be encouraged.


What is more,  can make people to deal with problems more all-sided. (这句没主语?) 本段仍然说的是置疑有哪些好处 In order to see this point clearly, let see an example. Nowadays, many governments have to face more and more pressure such as : unemployment, violence and pollution etc. In China, the unemployment problem is serious. As a result government encourage people to build more factories. However, more factory bring more pollution. Once people evaluate one nation's fortune by its GDP, However along with the developing of industry the pollution is increasing. People have to spend more money to treat with the waste water and gas. After critical thinking people bring the Green GDP which is defined that the nation's fortune per a person After the cost of environment be restored. it is the true of the nation's fortune.


At last, the speaker has pointed the social harmony. I believe that government should consider more about the problem of unemployment, pollution and violence, not to attempting inhibit the voice of people. It is a self-deceiving idea that forbidding question and critical thinking equals to social harmony is self-deceiving. In old china, Qin Shi Huang,who have made the order to build the great wall once to command to burn all kinds of book in order to prohibit people's free thinking. However only after fewer years after his order his empire was overthrowed by people. The social harmony need people’s critical thinking and question.
秦始皇例子不当, 因为他确实压抑了很多智慧和心声, 而且这个压抑人民思想的行为, 在当时确实起到了促进社会和谐的作用.

To sum up, skepticism and critical thinking are the impetus of science, also they are need to people's all-sided thinking. What is more, social harmony need the free talking of people.

suyueUID: 2181126

I do not agree with the speaker's opinion that bring criticize and question which education teach students will be harmful to the social harmony. In my point of view, skepticism is very important not only to student but also to the sociality.本篇文章中心skepticism很重要

skepticism and critical thinking are the impetus of science, so education must encourages students to question and criticize. 重要的原因之一As is known to everyone, school educations have great influence to the whole life of a student, and many characters are formed and ingrained when at school. As is also known to everyone, question and critical thinking are the impetus of innovation and invention. Without question, people will accept anything and any theory currently unlimited, then they will not doubt whether it is true or not. For instance, without Einstein's question to Newton's gravity theory, there will not exist the famous relativity theory. Just due to the skepticism and critical thinking of those scientists and inventors, our lives become more and more comfortable and convenient, and the society are developing fast.  Therefore, because of the affinity of skepticism training and students' later performance, question of students must be encouraged.


What is more,  skepticism and critical thinking can make people to deal with problems more all-sided. 重要原因之２In order to see this point clearly, let see an example. Nowadays, many governments have to face more and more pressure such as : unemployment, violence and pollution etc. In China, the unemployment problem is serious. As a result government encourage people to build more factories. However, more factory bring more pollution. Once people evaluate one nation's fortune by its GDP, However along with the developing of industry the pollution is increasing. People have to spend more money to treat with the waste water and gas. After critical thinking people bring the Green GDP which is defined that the nation's fortune per a person After the cost of environment be restored. it is the true of the nation's fortune.


At last, the speaker has pointed the social harmony. I believe that government should consider more about the problem of unemployment, pollution and violence, not to attempting inhibit the voice of people. 着是我找不出重要性的直接论证了说政府不能不让人们批判，质疑的原因．其实写偏了，因为实在想不出怎么写了．写成自由思想言论了．It is a self-deceiving idea that forbidding question and critical thinking equals to social harmony is self-deceiving. In old china, Qin Shi Huang,who have made the order to build the great wall once to command to burn all kinds of book in order to prohibit people's free thinking. However only after fewer years after his order his empire was overthrowed by people. The social harmony need people’s critical thinking and question.秦始皇的例子我个人认为还是可以的．因为能为我本段中心服务，例子其实都有不足的就看你怎么说了，你说他着方面对，能讲通就行．

To sum up, skepticism and critical thinking are the impetus of science, also they are need to people's all-sided thinking. What is more, social harmony need the free talking of people.
倒数第二段有很大毛病我再想想．还有那个你的问题，Ｉ我个人认为只要和题目有关系你完全可以提出自己的想法．并不是只有支持和反对的．只要能论证的通就行了．
其实我开始也想做定义的，但觉得那样不好写．像我这样写感觉好象容易跑题．我刚开始也是这样认为的．但Ｉ不就是让你根据题目论证你自己的观点吗？只要和题目有关系，不是Ａ那样要求的苛刻的逻辑关系，要人从心理上觉得有关系就行了．
个人意见，有些胡说了，但都是心里话．

谢谢你的拍　呵呵